Ashlok Pic FF -'D for Desire '- Chp 6 Uptd 16/1/15

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: jhumjhum
Omg Deepa very romantic n hot beggining of A Romantic Day 😉 waiting to see what happen next 😃! Thanks for PM 😊.

will update by eod or tom.. Jhum..

tks dear.

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sathuraj

Chapter 4:

Deeps what a romantic update dear...

Its so beautifully written...

Ashlok are truly made for each other...

lovely couple...

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Thank u Sathya.. Indeed the hottest couple after Sanaya an Barun.. or Madhu and rishu..

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akashavani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

DEEPA. ...loved each and every ...Romatic scenes...bed ..bathroom...Ashlok as Whole...anywhere anyhow...And ur ..pictures were A Perfect Pic...and BG...beautiful. ...was busy...so couldn't come soon...UR...post ...I need lots of time to savour completely. ...and then reply...love them ...Tfs.

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Mariia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I am sorry...again late response

Loved each and every of your chapters, but romancing in the shower is the best 😳

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Sahrish Pirzada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: deepavasudev
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">I want you near me all the time.. I want you to apply soap and play with me like a kid in the water.. I want to splash water on ur face and see you jumping like a small kid .. jumping for the fear of the chill which spreads from the cold water.. </font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">I want to pull you for a kiss and press my lips against yours for a aggressive kiss so you shut ur mouth when you squeal like a kid ...</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="4">You will not come to the bath room ..I know.. but I will somehow lie to you .. asking give me bathrobe or soap or towel.. and will try to pacify you.. if you don't give in ..then .. I will be the villain .. </font></div>
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loved chap3 you are portraying shloks thoughts really well... loving his his inner desire for his cute lil more like a kid wifey... please continue... i could not comment before as my pc is out of order... now have to use mob and um hating this mob... 😡 ...

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Nice work Deepa dear.❤️☺️.And the pics are awesome👍🏼

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Sahrish Pirzada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

I cant take the piece of fabric u wear every
day .. I cant take the jewellery you adorn
urself on ur body every day.. I want you by
my side full time.. in the way when you
stepped into this world.. when u were just
born.

deepa... 👏 you are amazing writer ... and mi d reader too.. 😳

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

GOOD BYE MORNING KISS .. BEFORE GOING TO OFFICE.. .- ROMANCE..

when did I become so insane in ur beauty and thoughts..

I dint know..

You smell like roses..

You taste like the Creamy Chocolate cake..

You talk like the banter..

You confront like the alligator..

You don't seduce me..

But how did I get addicted to your beauty ..

and how my thoughts were filled with you..

bare..

under me..

my lips touching yours..

my lips kissing your beautiful eyes..

my fingers tracing your jaw line..

my hands trying to crush your hip any time

beneath the filmsy saree..

my hands wandering and waiting touch you bounty bosoms..which while breathing goes hay wire..

your breathing makes me too go ..up and down..for

my below.. down..twitching needs..

I want to bite and suck and all the places where ever it was possible..

but for the time being ..

since it is morning hour..i limit to just kiss you and go to office with a GOOD BY KISS .. FOR THE TIME BEING..

I will any ways have my fun in office ..once you reach there..

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I called you for the Good bye kiss to office.. you said NO ..and pushed me off..

I had to beg ..

I had to bend on my knees..

You dint budge..

finally I needed to show that iM the King..

So I pulled you

closer me and kissed you aggressively on your lips..till you begged me to stop ...

BTW..the morning kissy was the one ..the aggressive kissy one..which made my day in office baby ..

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: SahriShrAvi
I cant take the piece of fabric u wear every
day .. I cant take the jewellery you adorn
urself on ur body every day.. I want you by
my side full time.. in the way when you
stepped into this world.. when u were just
born.

deepa... 👏 you are amazing writer ... and mi d reader too.. 😳

tHANK You dear for ur kind words..and this FF entire credit goes to you and ur enthu ..for making me think more deeper with new ideas.