Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 16

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

Hemali, what a rocking story. I read all parts in single stretch. You really do have a river like flow of words.👏
Oh Jamy... finally u read my wierd story. Thank u so much 😳
Hemali ... you coined me a new name. Thanks Jamy 😛

Sorry for commenting so late and for my never working like button. Curse Vada.

Its okay. I know u were busy with your studies.
And I know all about ur cursed like button & Vada's invovlement in it 😉 😆

But I didn't expect this much from you. You rock.⭐️
Thank u Jamy... I just tried my hand by twisting the story a bit with my wierd ideas. Glad that u all liked it 😃

Poor Dushy. He must be missing his Brihu now.😆
Yes our poor Dushy baby desperately needs Brihu by his side. Only s(he) can soothe his pain now. If & only if ... 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

Sorry for the late response di m I the last one? 😕

exams were up so no time but I read it now and loved it .

Okay for chapter 4

Wow Radha is so sweet and Swarnali and she has got a beautiful bonding with each other loved it ❤️ - Radha ma is sweet mommy of Cutie Karna 😳

And Swarnali getting scared to wear Saree was jus 🤣 and uttariya with t-shirt , I m imagining it
Actually I get scared when mom tells me to wear saree for certain occassions and I used to do OMG 😲. I cant manage that even if the saree is draped around me in dozens of safety pins . So this one is my personal experience with saree 😆 😆
🤣 and Dushy 😡 hate him so much yaar really I would kill him if I could 😡 but thanks to him finally Karn felt something about her and this one was totally funny and lovely .
Yeah we got to see a protective Karna 😳 😳
Loved it Hemangi di and I missed it yaar .
Thank u Sami 😳

Chapter 5

"Err... Mitr if you don't mind can we come back here tomorrow morning. I will make proper arrangements for your visit here. See there is even no proper place here to sit," Karn replied using his presence of mind.

"You will wear it no matter how you feel. Radheya does not want you to show up in messed up condition again in front of his friends. Moreover, it will enhance your fair skin dear. Trust me"

Okay so is our Arya jealous ? 😳 Cause this two lines give me some feeling of something burning 😆
He He... yeah... & Dushy is putting fuel in it by glancing Swarnali 😆 😆

"Angaraj, what made you to secretly glance at me today?" questioned Swarnali in a teasing tone.

"You are looking so different and radiant today Swarnali. Do you mind if your buddy glances you in between," replied Karn.

Swarnali threw her head back and laughed. "Well my buddy is not the only one here who is making secret glances on me; Swarnali said looking at Dushasan from the corner of her eye.

Karn follow her gaze and cringed. "Is that bothering you buddy?"

"Oh...don't let it bother you. Lets cherish these moments instead", replied Swarnali with a bright smile.

Loved this part . Finally kuch toh hua in dunno k bich 😆

Yup... wasn't that cute 😳

and thanks for the pm

U r welcome 😃

and I will try to be the first next time di . U better be 😉 😆

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thanks for the lovely comments Sami. Hey... u didn't like Dushy ki Dhulai 😉 😆

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

your welcome di and saree experience is yours ? I too have the same reaction when my Aji tells me to wear saree I tried once and it was a total insult , after that my bhai always teases me with that incident so can understand Swarnali 's situation. oh I din say about Dushy ka Dhulai ? Oh that was my best part di I was like and those cute scenes should be more Hemangi di . U should keep more otherwise me being Dabangg 😉