Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 9

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

RES😳

Finally something cracked u😉

I am in good mood but a bit stressed I returned home just now

I will read it later😊

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank u Samii 😳
Yes the way Shon has described Karn & his weakness with women 😉 😆 Swarnali tagged him as Handle with Care 😆 😆

Yes I decided a naughty Shon along with Swarnali will be more appropriate to pull Karn's legs 😆 😆
Next part... Protective Karn yeah... Will post that chappy soon 😊

Originally posted by: sania_58

woww, woww, woww👏⭐️

1st of all thank U for this long part

& it was awsome.

loved the part.

Thank u dear 😳

so, finally Swarnali introduced herself.😊

waise woh weight lenewala comment mast tha.😆
Yeah...just think air filled sofa in Dwapar Yuga 😆

loved the comment "dont underestimate the power of women",typically feminist attitude of Swarnali.👏 - SRK fever all thanks to BV and his fancy for bolly flicks. Thoda filmy hai but Swarnali ke personality ke saath fit baithta hai 😉

loved Soan & Swarnali relationship & their discussion about Karna.😳

its simply mindblowing & funny also.😳😆
Yes Shon spilling all the beans to Swarnali about his dearest bhrata and his weakness for women 😉 😆

so, Swarnali came before Karna's marriage.😉
Yes... perfect timing Isn't it 😉 😆

so, Duryodhan & Shakuni is coming.Why Shakuni yaar???😡 plzz usse Gandhar main hi rehne do.😕 - Kya kare yaar Shakku mamu is so chipku mamu... doesn't leave his priye bachche's side at any cost 😆 😆

& Shakuni taunts Karna about his lineage.now God save him from Swarnali-astra.😆
Yes Shakku Mamu is not aware of Swarnaliastra & its effects. Just let him come once 😉

& congrats afterall Karna & Swarnali became ba-ddies.😆😉
Yes... they finally did become ba...ddies 😆 😆

beautifully wriiten.

superb.

in Bengali "FATAFATI"(means extraordinary)

waiting for the next part.

Thank u Madhu 🤗

Originally posted by: Texie-Shady

i like this naughty Shon and u ought to update soon di . I m really interested to read more . Protective Karn , it is gonna be interesting . Arya ki possessiveness dekh na chahiti hu 😆

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Loved it..I imagined myself as Swarnali 😳
Waiting for next update..

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

oh!! fantastic dear!! u made swarnali and karna as good friends..right..then he is still unmarried..all maidens are having a look at him while offering prayers..haha..that was nice dear..beautifully written buddy😆 come on..dury is coming..and what next..and another thing..does karna knows that he was not the child of radhama and adirath

Originally posted by: vaikartana

Hemaaa loved it totally.Swarnali is so lucky.She got Angaraj as a friend.The update is too good Hema.It succeds to invoke all kinds of emotions in the reader.It carries love,fun, care and intimacy.And the part where Karna blushes...my cutiee Angraj🤗❤️I love your style Hema⭐️