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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi



Oh Sansii... what a coincidence 😳 Infact I spent many days thinking about the name I would give to the main protagonist. I wanted a name which relates to gold u know somewhat to match with Karn's golden boy charm . My own name is related to gold but this name is familiar in Western India. Swarnali however, is found quite familiar in Eastern India, the frontiers of erstwhile Anga kingdom 😆


😆 exactly even I was shocked to see the lead Swarnali😲😳 I knew it this is the reason u asked Jamy the synonyms of gold in sanskrit hey na😊 I guessed it after ur PM I knew who was the hero and why u wanted to know the synonyms of gold😉 Oh the Sherlock me😆

Oh thank u so much dearie😳 for taking out time to read my story even during ur exams
🤗 All the best for ur exam dear 👍🏼

This always deserved it and so did u😳

nd Thanks🤗

Thank u Sansii. I would like to keep it simple and at the same time touching too 😊


👏



@U: Very True Sansii. Infact Swarnali feels lonely & she devotes all her time to her dream machine like a mother and has emotions attached to it



Oh god... Pati se pehle Sasuma dhun li.. 😆 Waise kaun kiski Sasuma banegi yeh toh samay hi batayega priye... 😉

😉 I know who I am😳

Wow what an arrangement. Bahu wont understand Saas & Saas wont understand Bahu. So no chance of Tu Tu Main Main...what a relief to the hubby/son 😆 😆

🤣 true😉

Hayee mere Arya😳 he is my dream man😳 My hero

@ Bold: ☺️


Yes... this may perhaps raise some brows & break the shy shell of some 😉

😳


Aww... I thought u were imagining urself & Arya in this scene 😳 😆


Ofcourse i am too Swara😳 I imagined myself only😳 just I want that dream to turn real😳


Thank u Sansii for taking out time & giving wonderful comments 🤗
You deserve it🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Superb chapter Hema🤗

Simple and precise yet engaging and lovely👏

Thank u Sansii
🤗

Moments later she came back with plates and bowls of rice kheer and fruits. Swarnali was already having hunger pangs and as soon as she saw Radha serving the food, she got up from the bed and was about to pounce on the food when she stopped her tracks sensing the other three people staring at her with shock. Bhojan', Radha gestured towards the food with a sweet smile. Bow-jan...err no Bhujan, no is it Bhojan', Swarnali repeated. Adirath gave a mild nod and gestured her to be seated and have food. Swarnali smiled and followed as she was told.

This reminds me something similar😛 I too do the same let it be anyone's house they should also understand that I am hungry na😳 though they think me to be a kid and giggle and pull my cheeks till they become red and forget that I am a grown up now😭 that is unfair😡

@ Bold: 😆 😆 This used to happen to me when I was kid


They finally reached near the river bank where there was a line of twenty odd people varying from old men to young and at the one end of the line was the mighty warrior with a golden heart. Swarnali recollected all that she read about Karn's selfless charitable nature and how people used to throng near the river bank to get alms from him. She carefully studied Karn's face, he was looking somewhat different. There was a smile in his face while giving alms to the people, his eyes showed joy & respect when the young thanked him & the old blessed him. An unexplainable satisfaction was reflecting from his face.

This is what is true atleast I believe it he was selfless though his genorisity is misunderstood as a thing to erase his impression on society in some books I love my Arya🤗

Me Too
Love him a lot 🤗

You remember these lines:😳
He looked dazzlingly handsome as always. He stood as handsome as ever for donating the needy his revered guru witnessing his charity He noticed that the number of people increased each day as it was morning to noon he was donating. All visiting him could only hear "Granted!" with a beautiful smile of content that would lit his face each time he saw a light of happiness in the visitors eyes!!

How can I forget these lines. It was from ur first OS right - Karna's Vows 2nd part. U know I have bookmarked the thread & used to read it sometimes 😛

This again proves that nobody can sketch Karna like his Karnalilas⭐️

@Bold: Very True

Also,
Now swarnali with the help of gadget communicates with Arya😳 So that translation tool will now blossom a cute bond between them😳
Yeah... BV's chamatkari device ka kamal ab rang layegi 😆 😆

Waiting for it😳
continue soon😳
Yeah... I post next chappy soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti



😆 exactly even I was shocked to see the lead Swarnali😲😳 I knew it this is the reason u asked Jamy the synonyms of gold in sanskrit hey na😊 I guessed it after ur PM I knew who was the hero and why u wanted to know the synonyms of gold😉 Oh the Sherlock me😆

Aww... my sweet little Kalyugi Sherlocki 😆 😆 u guessed it right. See we Karnalis think alike & its all becoz of our cool & hawwt arya 😎 ☺️
BTW I needed those synonyms for some other personal purpose too

Oh god... Pati se pehle Sasuma dhun li.. 😆 Waise kaun kiski Sasuma banegi yeh toh samay hi batayega priye... 😉

😉 I know who I am😳

😆 😆

Wow what an arrangement. Bahu wont understand Saas & Saas wont understand Bahu. So no chance of Tu Tu Main Main...what a relief to the hubby/son 😆 😆

🤣 true😉

cent percent true 🤣

Aww... I thought u were imagining urself & Arya in this scene 😳 😆Ofcourse i am too Swara😳 I imagined myself only😳 just I want that dream to turn real😳

😳 😳 ☺️ 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hema dear!! another wonderful update!!!ummah for it..ur gadget remains me James bond..😆 but it was beautiful..so finally she started speaking sanskrit.again ur words describing karna was awesome..esp:: he don't want another awkward situation infront of all..🤣 update soon ma..want to know whether he was married..after or before swayamvar..come on
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
you read Karnas Vow even now😲
Aww thankoo🤗 I thought such long OS no one will read but I ws really surprised when u all read it even when I was new here😳😃
You read my other updates Double too😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

Hema dear!! another wonderful update!!!ummah for it..ur gadget remains me James bond..😆 but it was beautiful..so finally she started speaking sanskrit.again ur words describing karna was awesome..esp:: he don't want another awkward situation infront of all..🤣 update soon ma..want to know whether he was married..after or before swayamvar..come on



Aww Thankoo Dhivii 🤗

James Bond 😆 😆... Swarnali became a Bond to talk to Karn... she has something or the other ready in her sleeves 😉 which will aww Karn 😆

Karn was unable to save himself from Swranali's sudden talk... so he took extra care not to repeat history again...which by the way will be hard for him 😉 😆

Married or not 😳... that will be soon disclosed in upcoming chapters. I will do provide hints so do read carefully 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

you read Karnas Vow even now😲

Aww thankoo🤗 I thought such long OS no one will read but I ws really surprised when u all read it even when I was new here😳😃
You read my other updates Double too😳



You wrote a gr8 OS on Karna's Vows Sansii. Along with Shapit Vidya which u wrote on my request 😳 & of course who can forget ur CNAT stories 😆 😆.

Yes... I have bookmarked most of the stories related to MB theme for future reading 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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~Thank you for liking this story with your valuable & sweet comments~
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Posted: 11 years ago
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