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Chapter 16 ( Part 1)
30th September 2010 :


'Badi ammi , aap kyun tension leti ha ? bakshi yaha he hogi , yaha kahi , mei dhoondhta hu na' the elder brother remarked as he thought he'd find his lost sister , on this big occasion day , this day meant a lot for them because it was the day when Jalal's father LATE MR.HUMAYUN built the Mughal Empire ! Build it strong .. And they celebrate it every year !

Leaving Maham behind he walked past her ..

'Bakshi .. bakshi .. where are you ? hey darling?' the big brother called and called her around her room , around few more rooms , over the hall .. but he couldn't find her
What the ? where could she have gone ? and that too without informing ?' 'Jalal beta? did u .. found her?' the worried mother Hamida Bano asks her son ..

'Nope ammi Jaan ..' he replied .

Each passing second increases more tension .. it was almost 15 minutes they were searching for Bakshi , but not even a single person could find her .

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'Jalal beta .. I'm .. i'm getting so worried , where could she be ?' the tension , the atmosphere , the heat has increased so much . The young girl was not in the palace , the brother was getting bad thoughts and so the widow mother . It has never happened that Bakshi had ever gone somewhere without letting her mother or either her brother know..

Jalal had called all her friends , but none knew about her , in fact as per their saying they haven't talked properly to bakshi since quite a few days .

'Jalal..' the mother started crying , tears flood her eyes .. 'Ammi Jaan..' Jalal hugged her tightly against his chest .. 'Shhh..nothing happened , believe me..I'll bring her back, she must be fine , don't cry please' What can he do ? He can absolutely do nothing , he was helpless , for the first time in his life , Jalaluddin mohammad Akbar was helpless..

His eyes were moist as well , but he knew , if he will get emotional , then who'll control his mother ? That's why , he cleaned off the tears before they come out of his eyes.
Breaking the hug , he keeps his hands on his mother's shoulders and look deeply into his mother's eyes , they were red rimmed .. He wipes off the tears with his fingers..

'Ammi Jaan , i'll go and check her room once again , it might help us ..It..It might give us a clue or something that where can she be .' exclaims Jalal as his mind worked more cleverly .

Peeping inside Bakshi's room , Jalal looks here and there .. looking for something , something which might give him a clue , clue that ..where could his lovely sister could have gone .. He wanted her back , by any means .! He went near the bed and rolled off the pillows , the bed sheet , the blanket and everything but nothing , he kneels down and stared down at the bed , nothing ..

But , what was he hoping to find ? What ? He himself didn't knew , he was going crazy , after all he was the elder brother of a young sister , who was a teenager . 'Bakshi's...cupboard, i haven't check it yet..I .. should check it..' and he opened her cupboard , he couldn't see anything except lots and lots of beautiful dresses ..

He turned back hopelessly , but wait .. He stopped , he saw something and he hurriedly turned back and saw a piece of paper on the side of her clothes 'Huh?' Jalal was confused , he hurriedly took it out and opened it , it was a letter .. written in Bakshi's writing ..

He started reading ..

' My dearest bhai , Jalal..
Today , your sister was totally helpless . I'm totally ashamed of myself today , bhai .. i have let you down today ' he imagined her sister crying ... He couldn't control himself anymore , tears rolled down his eyes as he continued reading..

'Bhai Jaan.. If possible do forgive me , please bhai ..
Bhai Jaan..I couldn't keep this inside me anymore , please please do forgive me , if you think this is forgive able , though i know its not .. but i know you will '

His heart was hammering , he was being killed every second as he read the letter further and further , he was dying inside thinking what should have her sister gone through ?

He reads ...

'I've broken all the restrictions of our Mughal Khandaan .. I don't know , how to say it in front of you , but bhai ... I've had sexual intercourse with Adham ' . His eyes , they couldn't believe that he just read that , his .. his mind wasn't accepting the message his eyes were sending ' NO way ' was the only two alone words rushing inside his body , he couldn't really believe it .. He can't.

'Bhai , Adham had made a MMS , and since then he have been threatening me everyday and makes me spend uncountable nights with him .. and this time he had threatened me to give him 8 crores , which i can't , really..' His heart broke into piece..So tiny pieces , for a second , he felt as if there's no heart inside him , there's no life in him anymore .

'I couldn't ask you for the money bhai , but all i can do was to kill myself , or run away I don't really know what i'm going to do to myself today , i have not yet decided whether i'm going to suicide or just gonna run..but you all , will never ever see me again..' Jalaluddin Mohammad was crying , he was sobbing .. His eyes red .. swollen eyes , he have never ever imagined that something like that will ever happen , not even in his wildest dream..

It was something , he can't even imagine to think and see where he's standing . His heart was totally shattered today , he had lost a beautiful gift of God today , his sister , his life , his Bakshi .. He miss her ..

'Bakshiii..' he fell on his knees , hugged the letter tightly and he continued crying , crying out his heart . Tears flooding his eyes .
'Meri behan...Bakshi laut aao...' he cried and cried , though he knew nothing would prove to work , but whatever it was , he did it. He cried and cried ..

'Jalal ???' he heard his mother's voice full of concern , standing by the door , holding it 'What..?? what happened ?? ' her voice had all those fears , which she doesn't wanted to see been proved true , she can't take it.

Slowly , she starts walking . Her fears have already started haunting her .. Her fears and haunts walking beside her , with her .. never leaving her for a second . She was feeling as if someone's hammering her heart .

She went and sat beside her son , who was still on his knees and his hands covering his face and the letter in his lap . She keeps her hand on his hand and softly calls him 'Ja..la.l' her voice was shivering ..

He looked at her , the mother's heart stabbed as she saw her son's face . God !! He was crying , he was sobbing .. He have never ever had , and now .. Her tension increased more and more .. 'What happened ?? tell me please' as she said this , Jalal handed her the letter ..

She takes the letter in her hand , and read it .. She reads , and her heart stabs .. She continues to read , her heart is hammering .. She can't believe it , tears flowing down her eyes , it seemed as if a flood is going through both of the mother son duo.. Her breathing strange .. 'Jalal' she says , she can't speak anything else.

Her cries converted into sobs and sobs into her screaming ..
'Bakshiii...No you can't leave us beta ' she hugged the letter tightly against her chest .

The young son was not more capable to watch this sight of his heart broken mother and he broke into a hug , 'Ammi jaan , bakshi...' and both of the duo , cried their heart out loud ..

Hamida broke the hug and look in her son's eyes 'No no no no no no Jalal , it .. it can't be , i'm sure Bakshi is playing her games , you know na .. she love playing such bad pranks...' Her heart was not ready to accept it .. It shattered Jalal more and more and wounded his heart ever deeper ' Nahi Ammi Jaan.. its True , Bakshi has left ' he tried to make her accept the truth ..

'No ... don't ' she jerks away his hands .. 'There's nothing like that Jalal .. don't say this please' she kept her index finger on his lips , and then got up .. dried her tears with the back of her hand ' No , its not the truth , Bakshi is hiding some where , wait .. i'll find her' remarked the heart broken Mother.

'Bakshi .. bakshi beta , come out .. see this game is not going good .. please beta come out ' calls out the mother , hoping that Yeah , from some corner she'll hear her girl's voice ' Ammi jaan , i'm here ' . But all her hopes in vain , cauz nothing like that was really going to happen at all .

'Ammi Jaan .. ' cried Jalal in pain , trying to control his broken mother , and hugged her , but every time she tries to jerk him away , in order to look around the room for any sign of her daughter .

'Ammi Jaan , Bakshi is not here , please .. believe me ' he was crying and was continuously reciting those words ' No Jalal ' slapped the mother , and then holds his collars tightly ' Dare you say that bout your sister , don't you have a shame ' Jalal was not shocked at all , he knew the condition of her mother ..

He holds her hands tightly and shakes her body 'Ammi Jaan , this is the only truth .. You can't deny it .. You have to believe it ' .. He felt as if someone's wounding his heart with a sharp end of a dagger and hurting him again and again , again and again . But what ever it was , he needed his mother to come out of her trauma and to believe the truth , because the truth is never going to change .

' No .. nahii..no no ' cried the mother and hugged her son tightly , squeezing his shirt , her tears have started to make his shirt wet .. ' Jalal .. Bakshi...' she sobbed .. ' Ji ammi jaan ' Jalal hugged her back and slowly caressed her hairs .. and planted a soft kiss on his mother's forehead.

THE PRESENT

Hearing this , Jodha's body was shivering . She can't believe what have her in laws and her husband have gone through in the past , she doesn't even want to imagine it , but it was the truth , she can't deny ..

She looked at Jalal , his eyes were moist and there comes out his tears .. 'Shhh Jalal' she kept her head on his chest , his manly chest .. The most comfortable place where she want to die . Jalal snaked his arms around her and covered her . ' Are you Okay Baby ? ' she asks .. concerned for her husband .. 'Yeah baby , don't worry ' replied Jalal.

'Jalal.. I'm just so sorry..' Jodha echoes softly against his chest , ' Sorry ?' he asks - Confused . ' For just , making you scratch your past ' she herself felt bad though , she shouldn't .. Jalal broke the hug and made her look in his eyes by cupping her chin up.

Jalal : Jodha you don't need to feel bad about anything , there's no fault of you in this all , i don't want you to blame yourself for anything , got that ?

Jodha : Hmm ( she nods quietly , but she was lying , cauz her eyes were denying her answer )

' Oh God ' says Jalal and hugs her even tighter . ' God Jodha .. ' and he giggles .. Jodha giggled back with him .. Finally , the saddies become happy once again , though both of them were not happy from inside , but to make each other happy they were smiling fakely .. Unware of the truth of each other , that they're both smiling fake for each other only .. How sweet nah ?

Hit likes and comment if you really liked this updated , i'm going to update part 2 soonish as well , its going to be a bit late , i'm sorry guys .. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 16 -Part 2-


The Next Day :

Sprinkling the water from her wet hairs on Jalal's face , Jodha giggled - innocently. Being disturbed by those drops of water Jalal opened his eyes and looked at his Angel-faced wife who was giggling up at her naughty move she made to wake him up.

"Good morning baby" She wished as her hands made their ways on his face and her long , slender fingers tracing his face and touching his lips and then playing with his ear lobes , she pressed a small , sweet but delicious morning kiss on her husband's lips.

Suppressing his smile he grabbed her closer to him and whispered into her ears " That's a sweet morning my love " she blushed as he said that. 'Really?' she teased him , 'Yep' he replied , moving him back by keeping her hands on his chest she pushed him back "Get off u ass , we gotta go out today , have to return nah'' Her Oh-So innocent face amused him .

'Yeah i'm .. i'm just jumping out of the bed , its just you who's .. you know what i mean.. who's playing that wild game of love with me.. i mean seducing me' , giving him a sweet slap on his cheek she said 'Shut up ! Okay ?' he brows creased perfectly.. 'Yeah fine..' he rolled his eyes..

He got up from the bed and made his way towards the washroom , before entering he turned back and loudly said "Yeah now i don't even have a right to flirt with my wife in the morning.. Al right !" .. "Jalal Go " she shouted.. ''Haan haan..." and "Bangg.." the washroom's door closed..

Jodha broke down into a couple of giggles "He's just way too much drama Goshh " .

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"How are the arrangements going?'' Adham asked his personal assistant.. "Going well , sir" the assistant replied.. "You may leave now.." he ordered. The assistant leaves.

"Well , finally.. " he smiled , "Let the game begin Jalal..." moving his hand over his hairs he winked up.. " There are so many things we gotta consider , so many accounts to be equal-ed.'' And therefore , he smiled drastically - the smile which suit's such evils like him , very much .

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"Okay so ,are you sooo happy now ?"Jalal says as he comes out of the bathroom . "Yeah so much .." Jodha laughs , " Yeah yeah , well someone said right , a wife is not a life , but a knife " . "What ?" Jodha laughed louder this time , "What do you mean..?" laughing she gets up and comes up to him , and stands infront of him . He rolls his eyes , " What do you mean?" he copies her , " Jalal.." she pats him on his shoulder , she laughed and laughed until her stomach hurts.

"WTH " she couldn't control herself now , suddenly Jalal takes her in a hug and throws his face in her neck , deeper , smelling her. Jodha closed her eyes in the intimate contraction and an electric wave just passed her body , her legs became jelly. "I just love you so much Jodha " he hugged her tighter , her breasts pressing against his chest .

"I love you too Jalal " she whispered , Jalal kissed her neck and then her ear , and swiftly bites her earlobe when she push him back and say "What are you doing ? " there's a blushy-smile on her face .

"You know well what i'm doing " he winks and holds her hands..

"Yeah but , this isn't the appropriate timing.." she says , moving steps back.

"Oh well ,so what do you mean ? Now i have to wait for the appropriate timing to make love to my mistress ?" his brows creased..

"Jal..al.." she blushed and ran from there .

Jalal laughed , " These women are nah.. so.. you can't understand'em " .

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" Chalo meri sherni , kaha hoo ? Jana nahi kya ghar wapis ?" Jalal called Jodha..

"Haan baba aa rhi hu , ruko toh.." she shouted from somewhere from the other room.

"What are you doing by the way ?" he asks

"Naach rahi hu.." she replied bitterly..

Jalal laughed , "Akele akele... mujhe bhi bulalo.. kisi ko toh entertainmnt milegi.." he laughed again.

"Just shut up damnit." She roard loudly

"Acha acha gussa kyun hoti ho.." he said..

Jodha let out a short sigh in exasperation . "This guy is just impossible , I wonder if I've wed the wrong guy" she was talking to herself , when Jalal heard it and replies "It's not so late , leave me.. bacha lo apni zindagi " he laughed " Shut up Jalal , will you ? " she shouts "Kuch bhi bolte ho.." she added.

"Maine kya kaha ?" he acted , "tum hi toh keh rhi thi ke shahyad tmhara mujhse shadi karna ka faisla ghalat hai.."

"So ? Now you're gonna peak in your wife's privacy too ? And gonna hide and listen to what I talk to myself ?" she scolded "You and I , we are not separate Jodha " Jalal somewhere , somehow turned serious. "Jal..al .. I'm just joking..and." he cuts her in between "Sometimes you should think before saying now , anyways just finish this and come , I'm waiting in next room , don't forget , we don't have to be late." He ordered and left immediately " Jalal. Jalal .. ruko toh " she called out but he didn't respond and left .

" He's right , I shouldn't have spoke too much . " he hit a light slap on her head herself. "I'm just such a piece of crap." She says and continues doing her work and wishes to finish it as soon as possible in order to not be late .

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Closing the door , Jalal sits on the driver seat waiting for Jodha to sit in too , he didn't spared a glare at her face. She looked so ravishing in her purple color LACE PUFFBALL SKATER DRESS LILAC , followed by her high heels in which she had wore simple makeup , by just applying the eyeliner and a little blush. Her long hairs were opened , and she had a cream color clutch clenched around her palm.

As she sat in her car , the smell of her perfume spread everywhere in the car and unwantedly Jalal spared her a long , dreamy and intense gaze. Looking her head to toe again and again. Worshipping his Mistress's beauty , locking her beautiful imagine in his eyes , her beautiful piece of cleavage was making him crazy , was driving him insane. And her long and sexy neck , he wanted to mark it with his love bites , he wanted her so badly.

He knew that this is a way of Jodha to bewitch him , knowingly he kept on falling and let her beauty bewitch him. She bit her lower lip in the most erotic way , making him harder. He wanted to rock his lady , right now , in the car only , he couldn't wait.

"You look beautiful." He exclaimed as he couldn't stop himself from worshipping her beauty , her perfectionism , her beautiful woman form and everything she had. She was just so gorgeous for him. "Really?" her eyes glittered and she looked more beautiful now , "Yes." Jalal said as he made his way near to her , she too got a bit near so it would be easy for him to do whatever he is going to do.

He crushes his lips over her lips. Possessing her in the most rocking way , strolling his tongue inside her mouth , parting her lips , sucking her soft lips , her soft breaths were erect against his skin , made him feel sexier and crazier , made him even more rocking. She ran her hands on his neck , massaging his nape , playing and fondling his hairs. While he licked her lips with his tongue , then pushed this tongue inside her mouth and tastes her . she've been so crazily mad for him , just the way he was. Both of them were rocking each other. This kiss was just enough for the time being .

They broke the kiss as both of them couldn't hold breaths anymore , and looked at each other. Jalal cupped her face in his hands and said " jodha.. we are not separate , we are one. Two bodies one soul. We are connected to each other. This is not your or my life , it's ours." He explained .

" I know jalal.." jodha said , keeping her hands in his lap and rubbing her fingers on his thighs. " It was just that I spoke over , I'll keep in mind this thing the next time , but please forgive me this last time please Jalal." She requested..

"Well, I'm not forgiving you until you give me what I want , until you don't satisfy my needs , I won't be forgiving you." He winked. Jodha patted him slightly on his arms and said " shut up , naughty man." She winked him back , her cheeks were all red with the blush.

"Chalo.. we will be late other wise.." she adviced. " Yea.." he rolled his eyes and switched his eyes off from the ravishing beauty seated beside him , and concentrated on the road then.

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They reached the airport , there was still half hour to go and they have reached so soon before it. "See , we're before time." Jodha murmured . " I know right ." Jalal replied , looking everywhere around. " We could have been doing something interesting this time rather then standing there.. looks fuss." She rolled her eyes. " And what could that something better can be ?" jalal said , strolling an arm around her waist. " Hshh.." she pushed him back. "Could be anything" she blushed. Jalal smirked.

They were unaware that a couple of eyes were stuck to them. Watching their each and every move. "You want anything , angel ?" Jalal asked , caressing her cheek bone with his thumb and fingers. "No , I'm fine , thanks." She replied , holding him by his upper arm. They were seated on the seating area for wait.

"Acha.. I will be back , I'll take a bottle of water from out ." he said , "No Jalal. Don't go nah." She requested him. " Arey baba , I'm just going to take water." Jodha wasn't still satisfied with him leaving her here alone. " Okay , but be back soon.." she said. Jodha bowed down and pressed a sweet , loving kiss on her cheek and on the tip of her nose. " Will be back , angel. " he said. "I'll be waiting." Jodha smiled, still there was somewhere uneasiness in her eyes , in her voice and on her face. Jalal left.

Hope you all enjoyed the update. I'm sorry if you found the update short , but i was running out of time , so many PM'S so i have to update this story fastly. Hit likes and comment 😳

Edited by ---Mehak--- - 10 years ago

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