Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

awww!!!Hema dear!!!! 🤗 🤗 👍🏼 fantastic dear...beautiful writing style!!! amazing writing👏 👏 👏 awesome darling..making a knot and releasing it in the course of writing is the best tactics of writing..it makes readers to stick to the story..

Thank u so much Dhivii 🤗
Yes I m trying my best to keep my readers hooked to the story and I would like to end every chapter with suspense 😉

"Now what will I do...ok lets have some coffee perhaps that will cool me down. She settled down in her desk with coffee and checked her personal mails. She went through the pictures sent by one of her cousins remembering the happy days she spent with them. But few pictures reminded her of some bitter past. She suddenly felt uneasy and angry for remembering those things she long decided not to ever recollect.

this one cleraly depicts the present situation and environment of her present life

"How r u baby? Did u miss me? Well your mommy missed u a lot", Swarnali said with a smile in her face and patted the machine.

simple and clean words to describe the perfect bonding

Yes Swarnali is practically alone in her life with a troubled childhood as I mentioned in the Character sketch and this made her made attached to her dream machine as her own part.

Her eyes were scanning the young man from head to toe like an X-ray machine. He looked like a god, radiant and divine, his physique looks giant and muscular but yet well-toned & chiseled. Sharp jaw-line with a fair golden complexion unlike the Indian males used to have. But what captivated her more was his eyes... his mysterious eyes as if another world lies within those pair of dark brown warm eyes. Oflate she noticed the golden armour shining across his muscular chest & a pair of golden earrings.

☺️ ☺️ @ U 👏

Even I went ☺️ ☺️ when I wrote this line imagining Aham standing in front of me 😳 😆

You are Angaraj Karn...you... you are reaalll...'and again fainted in his arms 😆

superlike for this..I imagined myself in that situation..how I would react!!! and I m excited to know in which period of my karna's life she has entered..super mydear!! update soon

Yes this is what my aim is. I want Karnalis to imagine themselves as Swarnali who landed up before her hero 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

Thank u Maha 😊. Yes she hugged him making Karn feel embarrased 😳 and yes there are lots to come. Just stay tuned 😉

And congrats for being a Groupie 😊

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Hemaa🤗 What a chapter dear🤗

you know my Nani calls me Swarnali😳 and Mom Abbreviated it as Swara😳😃🤗

Thankoo so very much🤗 I love you😳❤️

Oh Sansii... what a coincidence 😳 Infact I spent many days thinking about the name I would give to the main protagonist. I wanted a name which relates to gold u know somewhat to match with Karn's golden boy charm . My own name is related to gold but this name is familiar in Western India. Swarnali however, is found quite familiar in Eastern India, the frontiers of erstwhile Anga kingdom 😆

You know I have exams 2morow nd I was gonna RES here but after reading the characters I couldnt stop myself😳😆

Her name is Swarnali thats enough for me😆😉

Oh thank u so much dearie😳 for taking out time to read my story even during ur exams 🤗 All the best for ur exam dear 👍🏼

She head back towards her lab in a bad mood thinking how to spend the night. "Now what will I do...ok lets have some coffee perhaps that will cool me down. She settled down in her desk with coffee and checked her personal mails. She went through the pictures sent by one of her cousins remembering the happy days she spent with them. But few pictures reminded her of some bitter past. She suddenly felt uneasy and angry for remembering those things she long decided not to ever recollect.

So very deep emotions and emotional turmoil expressed in such a simple sweet language👏⭐️ and its always better to keep things simple then exaggerating them I could feel ur Swara dear good Job⭐️🤗

Thank u Sansii. I would like to keep it simple and at the same time touching too 😊

She came near her dream machine. "How r u baby? Did u miss me? Well your mommy missed u a lot", Swarnali said with a smile in her face and patted the machine. Its all because of that ill-mouthed Dr. Greg who was responsible for issuing me a memo from higher authorities to stay away from you for 3 days. How cruel? You are my dream project... my life, I know what's better for you...but he has to poke his ugly nose and his ugly intentions and separated me from you", said Swarnali with a pouting face.

Aww such great love and attachment ⭐️ I can understand it very well😊

Once u put your complete effort in something it becomes your life be it a non living thing too you suddenly feel some cute emotions towards😊

@U: Very True Sansii. Infact Swarnali feels lonely & she devotes all her time to her dream machine like a mother and has emotions attached to it

How did I land up here with u all in this ...err mud house... wow I never saw such simple yet exquisite mud house in my life', exclaimed Swarnali. "Are u alright, child", said the woman (In Sanskrit). Oh...aunty I can't understand what you are saying' said Swarnali with a bewildered look. The woman looked up to the young man and he came forward towards Swarnali.

Woman speaking in Sanskrit she is my Sasuma right😆

Oh god... Pati se pehle Sasuma dhun li.. 😆 Waise kaun kiski Sasuma banegi yeh toh samay hi batayega priye... 😉

Swarali did not understand it🤣 and even Sasuma expressions would be the same😛

Wow what an arrangement. Bahu wont understand Saas & Saas wont understand Bahu. So no chance of Tu Tu Main Main...what a relief to the hubby/son 😆 😆

Swarnali gazed at the young man. Her eyes were scanning the young man from head to toe like an X-ray machine. He looked like a god, radiant and divine, his physique looks giant and muscular but yet well-toned & chiseled. Sharp jaw-line with a fair golden complexion unlike the Indian males used to have. But what captivated her more was his eyes... his mysterious eyes as if another world lies within those pair of dark brown warm eyes. Oflate she noticed the golden armour shining across his muscular chest & a pair of golden earrings.

Hayee mere Arya😳 he is my dream man😳 My hero

@ Bold: 😳 ☺️ ☺️

Are you a companion of Gandharva King or an Apsara?' (In Sanskrit) Gandharva, Apsara', she almost yelled. No I don't want all these, I just want to go back to my baby ... I mean my machine' saying this she climbed down from the bed limping her way towards the door.

😆 did she think he was giving her Gandharva or Apsaras🤣 she looks poor in fantasy Gk too😆

Yes...she has to work hard to get used to it cause google baba wont be able to help her now 😉 😆

She glanced at him and something strike her. You are Angaraj...Angaraj Karn from the epic. OMG!!!' she exclaimed unable to believe her eyes. She went closer to him and touched his face. Yes you are real...you are real' saying this she suddenly hugged him shocking the already confused man. He felt embarrassed by this sudden move of Swarnali. A stranger woman suddenly embracing him that too in front of his parents. He tried to release himself from her and said What are you doing Devi?' (In Sanskrit). You are Angaraj Karn...you... you are reaalll...'and again fainted in his arms 😆

She hugged him😲 Oh yes what else u expect from a Karnali author😉😳

Yes... this may perhaps raise some brows & break the shy shell of some 😉

Hmm she fainted in her arms☺️ Hamara chance kab aayega

Aww... I thought u were imagining urself & Arya in this scene 😳 😆

Originally posted by: Shalini09

OMG! That was awesome...oh i just wish that I was the lucky one instead of Swarnali! :P lol :D anways it was amazing! :D