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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: bluetides

now detailed review time 😉...
I loved story and had dreamed eating pan last night 🤣
itna paan khila khila ke ye haal kar dee Mao ki...

Jokes apart.. good concept and good plan ...
I liked the structural way CID team went to catch pan wala instead of showing " We are Police" attitude.

Abhi plan was awesome but when putting himself in such trouble .. like making sure drug dose is high, he should take proper measures to get help soon na...😳
The planning he has to put himself into danger... good but taking risk means you plan properly to get out of danger too .. Hope I didn't hurt you..

Really...😲😲

Kitnay Khayey...😆😆

Popat CID mein Kaam krta hay, FW mein Nahi...😈😉

yaar, its Not much Risky...😆

Unhun nay already Dekh liya tha kay Drug Deadly Nahi...😉😉

aur Get out kay liyey rakkha tha na...😛

Sahab ko...😈

Thank You so much for MAO Speedy Reading...😳😉

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Anjali

@anjali_mahajan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#562

Nice investigation 👍🏼
is story ko as a case represent krna ho to iska naam hoga
"Banarusi Paan ka rehesya" 😉
Dr. Sahab n Abhijeet sir teasing talk I always enjoyed 😛
n love vivek concern for freddy sir..always miss this DUO...
Nice attempt GD 👏

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Yes, that Silent Bond is Really Cool...😎
arry Baccha, there was No Risk either only a Drug Trace and it could Not be Possible without Risking (not a Life Danger Threat Yaar😆😆)...
Emo Contest Thora Kum rakkha hay Baccha...😉😉
Thank You so very much...😳😳

aap ki stry ki emo pey hi to dil ajata hey usko kam ker denge to kaise chalega???😕

khair jaldi jaldi ajayiye aur bhi ache ache stry ki saath😉...warna ACP sir se kehke popat ko CID se popat ko resign kerwa dungi😆

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MysticVibe

@MysticVibe

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

^^Di please aisa mat karna..
parii love my CID INSPECTER PARROT..

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pinky118

@pinky118

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

awesome story dada😳...maza aya pr kay😉

i dont know why but the title maked me laugh😛

really nice investigative story👏

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Himani

@.mOSAIc.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

Nice investigative story dada⭐️⭐️ 👏.

But, Was that paanwaala arrested in the last? If yes, then I have a query and if not ignore my question 😊. There are many cakes and other eatables where poppy seeds are used and there is a threshold set for it's consumption and according to the story, the accidental drug intake was in very less amount, so why arresting him, especially when he wasn't doing all this deliberately? I mean they could have warned him and created awareness among other paanwaalas to avoid any addiction due to continuous consumption of paan in future.

And according to the last part this man was unaware of what he was doing, so why slaps and all?

I think I am overeating my mind and probably yours as well ,sorry if my questions disturb you.

I liked how the fight erupted between the great doctor and Sr. Inspector, then how Abhijeet sir is calmed down by Daya sir and his concern for Abhijeet sir in almost the entire story.

Over all, a good story with an informative and helpful message in the end.

Thank you very much 😳.

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Parul

@..Candy..

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

As usual..Loved this one too...⭐️
I know i know..u r bored of this line..but all your fault..
You always make me love ur story..😛❤️

The Slent bond Between Abhijeet N Salhunke was really well potrayed..i always liked their teasing...😃
Investigative part was strong too⭐️⭐️

Daya sir's Last dialoge was too good😆😆
(Daya sir har cheeez acchi hi karte hai😳❤️)

This one also goes to my "Must be on air" list...😳😳

Keep coming with more..
Waiting...Love you🤗

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: anjali_mahajan
Nice investigation 👍🏼
is story ko as a case represent krna ho to iska naam hoga
"Banarusi Paan ka rehesya" 😉
Dr. Sahab n Abhijeet sir teasing talk I always enjoyed 😛
n love vivek concern for freddy sir..always miss this DUO...
Nice attempt GD 👏

ANJI come after a Long Break...😉😉

Nice Title 👏... or must be...😛

Qatil Paan...🤣

yes this DUO completely Missed Yaar...

Thank you so much that U Like it Yaar...😳😳

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: 1.KRITTIKA

aap ki stry ki emo pey hi to dil ajata hey usko kam ker denge to kaise chalega???😕
khair jaldi jaldi ajayiye aur bhi ache ache stry ki saath😉...warna ACP sir se kehke popat ko CID se popat ko resign kerwa dungi😆

amazing...😲😲

khair Baccha, Pure Investigative Story mein Itna Emo nahi dikhaya ja skta...😉😉

Story ka Theme, Era, Mental Chemistry, background bhi dekhana parta hay na...😳😳

itni Pohanch hay Tumhari...😲😲😲