VIRIKA SS: Band Baaja Baaraat... ch. 9 on pg. 30 - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 8


Jeevika looked over at the end table and checked her phone. It was 4 am and she was still not asleep. Nothing was even helping her sleep. She unlocked her phone and opened her text message. She opened the last sent message and typed on her phone...

"Viren are you up? I can't sleep" she texted her almost husband.

She kept staring at the phone hoping that little cloud would come and she could see Viren replying back to her. But it had been five minutes and he hadn't. All of a sudden she saw her phone was ringing... she quietly picked it up and went to the bathroom.

v - "Jeevika"
j - "Yeah"
v - "Wh are you awake?"
j - "Can't sleep at all"
v - "But you got quite drunk a few hours ago" 😆
j - "What is that supposed to mean?"
v - "When you usually get that drunk you crash like never before"
j - "Excuse me?"
v - "Like you didn't know" 😆
j - "Okay whatever. I can't sleep now and its really bugging me"
v - "Why can't you sleep? Nervous for tomorrow?"
j - "Very!"
v - "What are you more nervous for? Tripping on stage, getting late, or marrying a maniac?"
j - "In order... marrying a maniac, tripping on stage, and getting late last. I could care less about getting late. I'm the bride... everything goes on my time"
v - "Yes Ms. Bride, but doesn't the bride want to see her groom... And excuse me... a little offended by your worry-ness of marrying a maniac first"
j - "Grooms are something people just look at for like a minute... the bride is the most important. You know from her hair, to her elaborate lengha, then her jewelry, her makeup, her smile. So much goes into that"
v - "I wish I could marry you right this second now. I can just picture you tomorrow walking towards me. Slowly but steadily"
j - "How romantic, but seriously Viren. How do I get myself to sleep" 😔 I have to wake up in less than four hours"
v - "So early? Why?"
j - "Ugh don't ask. So many things in the morning from haldi to churra. I need sleep Viren"
v - "My busy bride" ❤️

Just as Jeevika was going to reply she heard a knock on the door.

j - "Viren, someones knocking on my door. OMG. Who can it be so early in the morning"
v - "ts me. Open up" 😆
j - "WHAT?" she said getting up from her bed.

Jeevika went and opened the door to see her fiance standing on the door still on the phone. She wanted to show him the "stupidity face" but she was finding this quite charming, especially the way he looked right now. The messy hair, and the sexy white shirt just made him a hundred times hotter.

j - "You're unbelieable"
v - "I prefer the word sexy"
j - "You're sexy and unbelievable"
v - "Thats more like it. Now can I come inside?"
j - "Viren you really shouldn't"
v - "First you wake me up from my sleep and now won't even let me come in. That ain't happening" he said trying to come in.
j - "Viren go"
v - "I was just going to help you sleep... fine I'll go"
j - "Okay okay, only ten minutes" she said holding his hand and walking inside her room.
v - "Thank god tomorrow tomorrow I don't have to wake up early" he said sitting on her bed.
j - "Thats why no one looks at the groom" 😆

Jeevika comfortably placed her head on her loves lap. She stared directly into his eyes as he kept fondling with her luscious hair. Viren knew the trick to helping her sleep, talking to her and playing with her hair. It was just something about his touch and the way he so lovingly strolled his fingers around. Slowly Jeevika started mumbling her words, and her eyes were shutting. When Viren knew she was totally asleep he placed her head carefully on the pillow and covered her up. He gave her a last kiss and whispered those three special words to her. He could see her smiling in her sleep also ❤️


I know its a short update, but bare with me because writing the wedding sequence will take some time! After all, this is like the climax to the story ❤️ I promise I will make it as amazing as I can... But in the meantime do hit like and comment below 😃 Also I'm up for some crazy wedding suggestions you may wanna read in the next few updates!!!
Edited by Kays94 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My Oh My
How On Earth U R able to make every updated so Dreamy yet so Realistic !
Every single time I read this story I actually feel like getting a virenji In my life .

he is ever so sweet , adorable , caring or I can say Perfect In every Way !
His sweet lil gestures made me go gaga !

The way he came nd made her sleep !
I will do anything to get a guy like him !!

I have told u earlier that this is the best story written on virika wedding !

Cont soonish twinne !
Edited by millee18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updateee... I just love it... it was sooo sweet when he came to jeevs room and make her sleep... I love viren.. he was sooo unpredictable I just love it... really excited for ur next update.. I know that's gonna a jhakkas type.. :p update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update!
love it!
was cute!
just fantastic!
nailed it!! :) :) :)
cont soon!
thnxxx
tc!
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update.. thank u for keeping us so engrossed n mesmerized with ur stories.. eagerly waiting for the next update.. 😊 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
BRILLIANTTT KEEENII!!!! i lovedd thiss updateee!!!
cant wait for their marriage to get over actually! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWWW... THAT WAS LIKE THE CUTEST, SWEETEST, ADORABLE AND ROMANTIC... KAYS BABY LOVE YOU FIR THIS :-* <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
awe thats so cute virika ph conversation was do sweet nd romantic their argument at the odd hrs loved it buts its short any way waiting for a special update of the wedding with lots of romantic moments do update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing !
Lovely !
Cute ! The update was very sweet !Simply love it ! Thankyou for the PM !Much love ! Update soon ! :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update😊
Loved it
Loved virika's convo😳
Viren made her sleep...that was so sweet...
Each n everything was PERFECT...❤️
Waiting for virika's grand wedding
Continue soon
Edited by MyKryan - 11 years ago

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