The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 92

ohh wow didu...suprb update...3 thngs i want 2 say izz
1- i luv u
2- i luv u
3- i luv u dida...
Haah finaly keh diya...feel gud...


Gosh...kalpi gussa...hummm... Nice...luvd it...bechara rags..hehehe...bt luvd his honsty...wow wt a hubby...kash sach mei boys rags jese hote...wel leave it...jo nahi ho skta uske bare mei kya baat krna...back 2 update..haan to kahan thi...ya kalpi gussa..wt rags nd her dever sammy...1nce more hehehe...u kno i read dis update at 3 am...nd my mom...my bad luck at same time she pasd by my rum...she said '' bricka pagal ho gayi ho itni raat ko pagalo k jese q hass rhi ho''...i said nothng...was scolded...again hehehe...back 2 update...haan..to yaa kalpi lost in her thoughts...koi nahi baby hota hai...socho socho aur socho mei bhi bas ragna ragna sochti hun...chalo mill k sochte hai...nd sammy also in his daydreamng...gud going sammy..ask chahat di 4 ur dream grl swtoo...she'll provid u a butyful grl..promiss...nahi to mere bhai ko u can maro him...mera badla bhi pura ho jaye ga...



Dida flashback was supr dupr fab...sachi mucchi...wow...
Nd finly sonal ko sach pata chal gaya 1/2 hi sahi bt pata to chala...

Nd gauri is sad, guilty...koi nahi aunty ji...bas apne kalpi ko pucha wahi kafi hai abhi k liye..nd luvd dat she said she need her dil not doc...aawww...so swt...

Pakhi...vamp..kya khna...gosh mere ragna k lfe mei koi problm layi na to i'll kill u...i'll eat u up..i'll 4get dat i m veggi...haann...

Nd didu...never ever 4gt to pm me...never...ye nanhi si jaan ki jaan chali jaye gi...koi prdhe ya na prdhe...i m crzy redng all ashna ff spcl dis ff..nd vish di's kvg...nd sum more...

Well di how r u..i kno aap keho ge ab yaad aya tere ko meri..bt cant help..sari galti ragna ki hai meri nahi plzz dato ragna ko..mere ko nahi...i'll cry nahi to...
Nd plzz update nxt prt as soon as posibl...i m intezarkeroing...

Nd thnx 4 such a butyful nd long update... Muaahhh muaahhh muaaahh...bas thak gayi itni kissie deke...baki nxt part k liye

Wonderful charu!! Love how rags shakes his head at one side!! Only he can do that and look so DAMN HOT at the same time;) Kalpi knowing the situation and trust raghav so much she should know that he wouldn't do anything that is not called for!!
She knows him so well, but still she sometimes act otherwise!!
I love the change room scene;) and im also glad that they both told eachother how they felt and rags making her understand why he's doing revenge and also making understand how dangerous it is for her!!
Loved her red dress! Although I would have love to know what my sexy wore ;) im picturing a white shirt with first three buttons undone;) hmm yummy ;) and black pants;)!! LOL
My Gawd!! Poor piyeeush!! This guy will never come close to kalpi again:)!! Love the office scene it was much needed for them both! The longing and craving to be with eachother was there in that eye contact ;) boy how I love the unbuttoning of Kalpa shirt;) and what came after ;)! Still think you should have made him to Fling everything away from the table and made sweet love to her there;) maybe you can bring this in one of the lunch time!! You know 'desert'??;)
Hey charu this ff is so unique !! Whatever you choose to do it's fine with me darling;) karva chaut?! I think you should incorporate it because it will surely bring out the love from both! Seejng that they are going through this ordeal!! Any excuse to bring them together would be awesome;)!!
Oh and Sonal reading I between the lines was awesome:) I loved how you revealed the truth to her:)) without Kalpi hurting her;) that was amazing;)! As usual charu you have outdone yourself again! Never underestimate you ability;) it's truly remarkable darling:)) love you my charupoo ;)

Hi Charu, didnt expect 2 lovely updates at a time & u get me glued to my laptop at 3 AM, my hubby is sleeping while Im reading about Kalpi's hubby😉. Awesome updates but plz dont take this negatively its only my point of view though maybe insignificant, I dont think that Kalpi wearing a designer dress should sit on the floor while visiting Gauri, knowing that she will go for a dinner date later. Again concerning the dress, I guess Rags should have complimented Kalpi when she wore it remembering how he made her try it b4 though u already mentioned it thru kalpis flashback, but something should have come from Rags also coz Saaks didnt fail to mention it. Also u should have given us an intimate RagNa dance just to match Saaks dance to show Saaks that Rags is the husband. Plz its only my pov, I remain one of your favourite fans & looking 4ward for ur next update.Plz dont 4get to PM.

wow dida...suprb update...nd no r
agna dance... 😭 koi nahi...



Nd dat peeyush 😡 ...very gud rags...thik kiya uss ullu k sath...1 meri taraf se bhi marna tha...meri kalpi ko hug krta hai...mota...kabhi apni shakal dekhi hai...kahan humari kalpi...aur kahan tum...don't u dare touch her...nahi to...rags ne sirf thapar mara...i'll kill u idiot...




Nd ahem ahem...office romance was 😳 ...well itne dino ke intezar ne apna rang deekhaya...wow...again me..blush blush...



Nd plzzz flush pakhi, peeyush,sahil,neetu,prem...nd yes dat kamla also...flush dem...hate dem...nalayak sab...ragna ki zindagi k, romance k dushman...go to hell u idiots...



Nd sonal nd saks...nice...saks playng wth rags..hummm...gud going dude...bt wanna warn u he is rags...will kill u nxt time...agar tum kalpi ko haath bhi lagaya...to kya ur her besttie...nd sonal...finaly..she got 2 kno dat ragna is in luv...well i m happy...very happy...ab bechari kalpi k sath KBC khell rehi hai...lage reho dear...

wow wow charu double dhamaka😳

Amazing update
continue soon🤗

Hi Charu, thank u for beautiful updates. Totaly awesome amazing chapters.FB about dress was awesome.peyush bechara😭 hugging Mrs.singhania😆and received gift (hard slap 2.5 kilo ka hath)from Mr.Singhania👏.pakhi still dreaming to get Raghav😡.Office romance was😳😳hawt.wating for there weekend out with saks and sonali.

ohh double update...thnx...

Hi charu how are you dear? Update is superb. Air gisthara raghav Sammy ko clear kardethe hair ki WO kalpi se kuch chupana nahi chahtha.kalpi gussai mai raghav ko coffee dekar Kathi hai vote part bohath natural laga. And vo flash back scene jisthara rags kalpi ko dress pehnathe hair o god iam 😳 😳 . acha kiya kalpi nai sonal se jhoot nahi bola andsonal understands things immediately as a good friend. Pakhi paagal 😡 ko bath samjab bhi du to vo selfish awrath kabhi ragnas ki pyar ko nahi samjegi.ulta kalpi ko tespohchawgi 😡 .Ragna ki office romance 😳 and jealous rags is superb. And hope ki aap apni break jalthi katham karegi. And your very talented writer vo romance ho revenge ho emotions ho Sab mai chahath touch tho rahtha hai .By dear 😛 😛

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