Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 31

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Outstanding update dear. .
Love it..
Egrly waiting for virman challenge. ..
Poor viren ...wt will he do ????
Egrly waiting for next chapter. ..
Try to update soon. ...
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PART 23

Mehandi ceremony..

Rum was divided by using a piece of cloth..
One side was virat-kushal n other side.manvi-tanya...
Manvi and tanya were siting with her arms stretched out.. N girls applying mehandi on their hands..!!

Virat was siting with an irritated face..

Virat (thinking)
Hel yaar.. I thought Having all rituals together would be like a kind of blesing.. Bt all my dreams broke.. Being with manvi in same house.. In same hall.. Bt still not able to see her..

Jevi : virat stop hiding ur hands..
Virat : no ways.. Manvi is puting it na.. Then y should i..!!
V mom : virat dont be stuben..its a ritual..
Virat : no ways mom.. This mehandi i cant tolareate.. Firstly u will takes hrs to aply then.. Have to sit like handicap.. No ways..

Vini goes near virat n says in his ears..

Vini : dada.. U wanna meat mom tonite..??
Virat looks at vini with a confused look..
Vini : i have a deal if u aply mehandi.. I wil take u mom...
Virat : angel no pranks...
Vini : its not a prank dada... Fair deal..
Virat : bt i cant sit like a statue .!!
Vini : u dont need to.. Muma had bought instant mehendi for u.. It will just take 15 mins then u can wash u hands...
Virat : but angle ill look like a clown.. With ful hand mehandi.. Mehandi is for girls..
Vini : oho dada.. Jevi aunty will just write ur n mom's name...
Virat : promise..
Vini : promise dada..

Jevi aplied mehandi on virats hands...
Vini : now my turn.. Jevi.aunty cone plz..
Virat : bt u promised only names...
Vini : dada.. I said Jevi aunty will just write ur n mom's name...
I never promosed that i wil nt aply..!! N dont forget my deal..
N winks at virat..

Everyone laughed on vini's prank..
Vini drew diferent shapes on virat's hands...annoying him to core... He had to agree.. He had meet his manvi.. N most importantly.. He cant be angry on his angle..!!
Then vini moved towards kushal.. N drew shapes giving him same deal...!! To which he hapily agreed..

V mom : vini is dublicate copy of virat.. Ful pranster..

Viren : i agree.. Now she will take all our renenge from virat...

some of the girls were dancing n ladies singing some songa with dholki..!!

Lites goes off n spot lite fells on vini n jevi..!!!

both jevi n vini came forward n started dancing...

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

O hariyali banno

Le jaana tujhko guiyyaan aane waale hai saiyyaan

Thaamenge aake baiyyaan, goonjegi shehnaayi

Angnaayi, angnaayi

Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan

Haathon mein khilnewaali hain

Tere mann ko, jeevan ko

Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai

Mehandi cermony ended with ful masti n lots of teasing...

All elders went to their rums..

Virat : will this cloth ever be removed..!!
Kushal : ya rite.. Now the cermony is also over..

Viren : if the cermony is over then wat are u doing here go to ur rums..!!
Virat n kushal gave him weired looks...

Jevi : guys we still have one cermony left...
Virat : now wat... This weding cerimonies..

Jevi : finding names in mehandi.. If u are nt intered then its ok...

Virat : are who said im nt interesed...
Jevi : jst now...
Virat : u did not listen to my complete line.. I said these wedind cerimonies.. Im loving it...

All of them laughed at virats coment...!!!

Anji removed the cloth from between..
Virat's eyes fell on manvi...
He was memorised by her beauty.. manvi was wearing a purple pink lehanga.. her hairs were properly tied in a bun..!!
virat n manvi manvi shared a cute bt small eye lock.. which was broken by manu..
manu : jevi aunty... which game is this... how will dada find name..??
jevi : its very simple.. now ur dada n kushal will find their names writen in ur mom's n tani didi's mehandi..

vini : thats fun.. lets see who will win.. all the best dada.. all the best kushal bhaiya..!!

virat moves n sits infront of manvi.. taking her hands in his.. starts funding his name manvi keeps on moving her hands to distract virat...n so does kushal n tani..!!

virat n kushal : i find it..!!
manu : thats not done its a tie..

Viren virat n kushal were feding thier repected patners.. As tge ladies had mehandi in their hands...

Vini came runing n sat in virats laps

Vini : dada im hungry...
Virat gave a bite to vini..
Manu : thats not done.. I also want...
Manvi :come here my baby..
Manu sat in manvi's lap..
Now virat feeds manvi vini n manu.. One by one..
Manvi : viru.. I wil not eat.. If u are nt going to.eat..
Virat : relax jan.. First u all eat.. Ill havey diner later..
Manvi : no means a no viru..

Virat acepted his defeat n all for of them shared a family time..!!!

Manvi : comon kids.. Time to sleep...
Vini : no mom.. Today ill sleep with dada...
Manu : n me too..!!
Virat : lets goo kids..
Manvi : viru how wil u handle both..
Virat : dont wory muma manu..!!
( virat cals manvi as muma manu wen manan is with with.. So that it does not creat confution b/w mom n son..)

Late at nite..!!
Virat : angle did u forgot our deal..
Vini : no dada.. Im waiting for manu to sleep.. I know dada.. He cant hide secrets..
Virat : smart girl..
Vini : come lets go..

In front of manvi n tanya 's rum..
Vini : kushal bhaiya.. U hide here.. Ill take mom with me.. Then u can meet tani di..!! N dada.. U go to terace..

Vini moved inside the rum..
Ran to manvi n sat beside her..

Vini : (shaking manvi ) mom.. Mom..
Manvi : ( shocked..) wat hapen vini.. Wat are u doing here.. Its too late...
Vini : (puling her hand ) come with me mom..
Manvi : bt where..??
Vini : come na plz..
Tani also woke due to the noise..
Tani : wat hapen vini..
Vini : mom plz come with me na.. Dont make noice.. Coz of u tani didi also woke up..
Manvi : ok lets go..

Vini draged manvi towrds terace..
Manvi : baby wat hapen.. Y are u taling me to terace..!!

Vini open the door n ran towards virat..
Vini : dada i never break my deals..!!
Gud nite..!!
Gives a kiss on virats cheek..
Virat : gud nite angle.. Now go n sleep..

Vini ran from terace leaving virat n manvi there..!!!

Virat came towards manvi.. N took her n a hug..!!
Virat broke the hug.. Took manvi's hand in his n kises her hand..!!
Virat made manvi sit on a bench n sat beside her...
Virat raped his one arm around manvi n took her hand in his..

Both of them spent hrs siting there on terrace..

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Awesome update...
Loved it...
Vinny is soo clever...
She had make a deal with Virat and Kushal...
Loved the terrace scene..
Awesome..
Pleasee update soon..
And thank you for the PM..

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. TOO GUD. U UPDATED THIS STORY AFTER A VERY LONG TIME BUT STILL I REMEMBER IT. COMING TO UPDATE IT WAS AWESOME AND SWEET. LOVES MEHANDI CEREMONY SO MUCH ESPECIALLY VINNY. SHE IS SO CUTE AND SWEET AND AT A TIME INTELLIGENT ALSO. HOW HE CONVINCED VIRAT FOR MEHANDI IS AWESOME. LOVES VIRAT CALLING TO MANVI AS MAMA MANU. LAST PART OF VIRMANS AT TERRACE WAS AWESOME. NOW WAITING FOR VIRMANS MARRIAGE. SO THIS TIME TRY TO UPDATE SOON. TAKE CARE DEAR.😊😊😊

Awesome update dil.

Sweet n lovely update
Loved d kids

nice update vini is so smart update
soon

After long time...
But love the update
Specially i love happy sappy n wedding celebration...
Love mehandi song..
Vini n virat part was outstanding..
Love perfect family dinner scene..
Virat's part of wedding rituals was amazing..
Thanks alot dear for pm..
Try to update soon..
Keep rocking

Awesome update