New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well yes i think we should write stories only that much which we can manage iam not questioning somebody's abilities...but i have seen if not offending anyone Saima-Syed ,she manages 4 stories at a time and that to with finesse but she can do that she is doing it...but sincerely telling iam just a reader and i can say these words but it is the writer only who goes through all the hardship of writing a story so they should do that according to their comfort..

saima-syed is a talented and creative writer, and yes she handles many stories in one time, hat off to her 👏, this is what we call TALENT

if I have to compare myself to her, i'm a new born child so i have years to grow ...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

saima-syed is a talented and creative writer, and yes she handles many stories in one time, hat off to her, this is what we call TALENTif I have to compare myself to her, i'm a new born child so i have years to grow ...

Well i didn't compared Saima di to you because as you said she is Multitasking,and way ahead and i can say experienced in her writing skills and as you pointed out you will take time to grow so...that is clear, and i don't think it will take years to grow just some more writng on this FORUM will make it...for you .

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great4life_2005

@great4life_2005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#673

Ive not got the pm yet... 😭

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well i didn't compared Saima di to you because as you said she is Multitasking,and way ahead and i can say experienced in her writing skills and as you pointed out you will take time to grow so...that is clear, and i don't think it will take years to grow just some more writng on this FORUM will make it...for you .

This forum help me to improve, my english, my writtings and to realize an old dream. We always learn and when I said year I mean it, I read one sentence that I really love and express perfectly whatI mean: I only know one thing is that I know nothing, from Socrates

Allah didn't create us equal, some are beautiful, other are clever, other are funny, taller, smaller, generous or crazy. Some grew faster than other. This is what makes people looking beautiful to my eyes, because of their emotions. of their experience. Anyway, I'm out of the subject , but it's just that I don't like comparison, even I know that you didn't mean it and you didn't do it on purpose.

Anyway, I have to start writing something

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fatuimamotala

@fatuimamotala

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#675

Wow superb update👏

And they finally confessed

super duper awesome

thanks for the pm

please please please please update soonish

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: great4life_2005
Ive not got the pm yet... 😭

Done 😃

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#677

Originally posted by: jas91
res
unres

Brilliant updt Rada👏⭐️👏
I m speechless 2day kya bolon😕
Asya's Emotional turmoil, frustration, pain, helplessness is very well written👏👏
& than there confession apologies Loved it😃😛
There Kiss was brilliantly described☺️ widout any vulgarity😉
I want 2 read other version 2 but kya problem hai warning ke saath post kar de yaar koi bacha nahi hai yahan.😆😉
aaj i m giving just this small comnt plz sorry its soBrilliantlywritten that i m short of words.😳
PS - Mujhe thoda thoda doubt ho raha hai kahin yeh bhi dream toh nahi hai🤔

jas puttar shubh shubh bol yar

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#678

Res

for chap 20 comment

But have to read the other version first😆😉

Unres

God it is hot in here wow asya went far so unexpected but so acceptable

It has been months of built up tension love passion everything had to explode

It was pure pleasure and a joy to read and experience cold shower needed

So glad they didn't go all the way he respect her so much but it was a nite and I don't think it was wrong

So love the chapter it was full of angst love and passion

Asad was tired of being pushed and played with he just let it all out

It was all or nothing stop running zoya and face the music

Love how he said face the Man U love or claim to love

And she said the same too

So the both let it all out and he begging him to still love her and not to stop

And she will wait and let his love grow again if it faltered

He was so overwhelmed he couldn't believe it he had to kissed her to see if it was real

Boy and was it real and they just couldn't get enough of each other

Love how she persuade him to send Elena home and how he told Amir he will take care of zoya

Really asad ur office but he made it romantic so cute

And she learned how he helped her and she irritate him with his OCD

And then we had passion overload hmmm

Loved it can't wait for more

Guess this will be ending soon

Or no

Continue soon

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Maha

@maha2012

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#679

Most beautiful confession ever!!
I want to you to face me, I want you to face the man that you love, he yelled at her. ☺️
the way asad explained her the true meaning of love
His confession😭❤️
"my destination will always be you, No matter where I run, and how long I run I always end to you . Be my dream, my special one, be my final destination, my house, my love. Asad Ahmed Khan, O, Zoya Farooqui, am in love with you, I am deeply, madly and impulsively in love with you. And I hope that your feelings for me are not ash and even if it s at the size of flame, it's enough ",☺️
Asad gives zoya their first kiss☺️ in the rain
I love you's n stealing kisses
"Do me a favor, keep saying I hate you and each time you will say it, I will kiss you again and again and again"☺️
I wish i could quote the entire update..it was just beyond words
loved it❤️
update soon!!!

Maha

Edited by maha2012 - 11 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

i know I've made a bit hot 😆, but i was myself in a naughty mood 😃 thay day
but I think it's out of their characters to write like this, I should have stop only at kisses and touches, it would have be enough, but one of my readers told me that we do many things stupid when we are in love.
So I let their wild dream expressing themselves throught their bodies.
next chapter, Nisha and zoya will discuss and you know how Nisha is, i will try to write this funny part between them 😆,

and I swear it's my first time in this subject, I test it and I only have a positive feedback from all of you, i 'm happy 😳

sorry 4 late reply Rada i was away from IF 4 few days😳

Jisne bhi yeh bola correct tha cuz we do stupid things in LOve😆 mujhe thoda ajeeb laga at 1st cuz kuch time pehle tak dono lad rahe the emotial part tha phir achanak itni hotness aa gayi aur woh bhi AAK Tameez aur Tehjeeb ke rakhwale doing nughty things on his office's balcony 😆

Awesome 1st attempt it was👏👏