Thread 2RagnaFF:Richie Rich v/s Mother India Note - Pg 122 12/3 - Page 40

Originally posted by: _AmyChoco_

So the update starts with Raghav reeling under a whirlpool of emotions. When the heart is so much burdened with emotions..only two options..fight or flight..Rags is so past the fight stage. The fights with oneself r the toughest. He is already losing with himself and so he opts for flight. Sometimes, u just have to go far frm ur thoughts to get a fresh perspective of things. I especially liked the driving around cluelessly part. It gives a deep insight to his confusion. Normally our mind would be alert in a strange environment and hear we rt alking abt Rags who is ever attentive.😛

I was watching "Journey to the center of the earth" where in a scene, they r lost and demotivated when Brandon Frasier gives this compass to his nephew saying maybe this will guide him home. Now a compass is supposed to guide u in the right direction..but it played an impt role in the subsequent scenes where the boy got separated frm the uncle..and the compass provided companionship and solace!! This was just like the lights guiding Rags home. I liked it how u brought out a literal sense to the word "Lights" as well as a deeper meaning..Here the lights he see is a temple..the abode of God..a source of enlightenment. His presence is a light that drives away all darkness!!👏

Of all the people, never thought our Manda would be in the car and would be doing a cameo in this chappy. That part was funny.😆

Although there was a lot of hungama and shor sharaba around him, Raghav was silent there..partly frm ego and frm fear. Then he hears a familiar sound cutting thru the silence in his head.

Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor.. (frm Hasee toh phase)

A meek girl using her wits is protecting him..He is awestruck that her mere presence is taking away all his worries..

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai (frm Ek Villain)

This entire temple scene for me was very symbolic. They join hands ( union) to go before God and seek his blessings. After all God makes unites. Amongst the suffocating crowd (life probs & his past memories) her touch reassured him saying that she would be with him..In the crowd when they nearly lost contact, for me (dunno if u had intended this way) it symbolized his past accident and the fear of losing her due to his MU abt the marriage..and then they found each other again. Him taking her forward can mean her progress in life.His encircling his hands around her...meant that he would always safeguard her irrespective of all the inconveniences he wud hav to go thru..cus for him, if she is there he can sail thru anything!!😳

What Rags mind refused to think out aloud..that panditji said..and that was it..all the pieces were falling in place..⭐️

to khuda se maang loon
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai (frm Ek Villain)

I loved how Rags wud take a serious situation and turn it into a nok jhok session..cuz Kalpi was very uncomfy after hearing what the pandit said. Their talks brought down another wall in between them ..U have carried this thru the subsequent chaps too..and I am really liking the tu tu main main.

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tenu takda ravan... (frm Hasee toh Phasee)

All he yearns is a glimpse of her, to be with her and talk to her always. I loved Ro's interaction with Piggy..I thought u wud make them a pair and viola in ur latest chap, I see that u hav mentioned it..But one doubt, isnt Ro younger to Piggy?

Good..that u didn't dwell on Rags jealousy a lot..cuz it wud have lost its touch after a limit..

Ab kya kahein meri "auto" rani,😆 teri updates kamaal hain kamaal👏

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

OMG chapter 32 was amazing I was laughing throughout the whole chapter!! Loving Rags attitude and roshish playing along was even better!:)
So, all the cupids wants raghav to do is to express his feelings and make it known to Kalpi!! Awesome!

Marie! Would appreciate it if you translate each and every hindi words you add in to you ff! Reason being, I don't want to miss a single word LOL im serious by the way 😉 and you know I know who Seth ji is so I am not goina say here 😉 and you know i know what he owns 😉 I'm not gonna spill 😉
So finally RR gets to know who roshish truly is 😉 boy was he happy!! Can't wait for rain!! Hope it pours 😉

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

OMGOood!!! Im in awe!! Love it!! The way you describe the scenery was breathtaking! I'm a lover of nature! And the thing with holding your hand to your ear I do it sometimes! It sounds like wind just passing through like the ocean and if you open and close your hands it sounds like you're out in the ocean! Truly amazing!!
The way you brought out pari an his nanus name on the wall was so touching it only showed how close they where to Kalpis family! And how they loved their little angel!! Even the pundit knew about Seth ji and every year as a rule they came! So much love and respect they have towards Seth ji!! And I think the teaser is "he's family" what is his relation to kalpi and her family? Correct me if I'm wrong!! The emotions rags felt when kalpi told the pundit that rags is family made him feel that he belonged!! He wasn't alone! I so love how you brought that out!
OMG!! "The light will take you home" his home is with kalpi 😉 only with her he will see what he has been missin in his life! And he already is seeing it! Everything just adding up!! His nanu telling him the he will love pari and he was already in love with her not even knowing that she was the one his nanu was talking about!! Destiny! That's what this is!! This update was so emotional I feel in love with your words! I got the picture loud and clear!! Beautiful update Marie!! Just beautiful! You touched my heart with this one!! Remarkable!!
Waiting patiently for 34 ;)take your time ;) and this was more than expected! Plz I beg you!! Take full credit because you truly deserve it![BR
So my question is where was raghav when kalpi was with his nanu and his father?!

Originally posted by: vasishna

RESSS

unres fr 32b

heyyyllooo mariee..

wow a double damaka updates fr us uh..

I thought of unres-ing it wen u ll cumplte d 33 part bt I guess it ll take tym fr u to update it so here I cum to comment..

mariee.. u made raghav too jealous yaar.. as he couldn't bear rohish presence n dat too beside his MI never!! and to top of it Sammy adding salt to his burning jealousy by raising d topic love which had raghav ignored early and realised wen he met his MI.. and even rohish s lso nt less as he is teasing his future jiju frm nw itself.. and I lykd d dialogue of raghav where he ll be thinkng dat nlyy he has d ryt to fight with her and then he became superrr happy wen he came to know dat nlyy he n his MI ll be continuing d journey... I really loved reading did jealousy raghav track!!! so der s an other jodi on line uh.. rohish n pakhi.. waiting fr it..

Unres fr 33

god!!! mariee.. wat have u done to me..?? as I woke up I saw ur update n I read in it full peace.. it was lyk a morning gift fr me.. a wonderful gift which I won't forget easily as I can't cum out of d ragna dreamland which u mentioned..

haye haye hayeee.. it was sooo beautiful n amaznggg.. and I can't choose nlyyy one or two scenes to tel hw much amazing it was as d whole update itself is jus awesome and u really did made dis update perfect n fantastic!!!! (I really loved each n every scene so I dint want to mention ny scene)..

the way u connected all the things lyk his nanu s already connected to kalpi as pari and his mother saying dat lights leads d way and nw all those made sense to him.. it was superbbb yaar.. and I'm nt getting proper words to compliment u a lot..

and ur imagination abt d temple n with rain n all.. hayeee it was outstanding.. and yeah even I'll try dat thing which u tld lyk closing d eyes n jus feel to wind, our own heart beat.. hope I'll get sumthng in it.. and abt ragna moments no need to mention at all as all were amazngg yaar..

I'll give dis update an award.. yess an award ie.. "best ever update in ur ff" and i mean it!!!

thnx fr dis beautiful wonderful amazing fantastic n awesome and so soon.. update.. love u loads dear.. 🤗 🤗🤗 😃

Originally posted by: rani214

Lovely update

pakya kalpi convo was cute

So d trio came up with new plan...sammy indirectly convinced Raghav to come for the trek was superb

Roshish teasing pakhi piggy ...perfect name lol

ragna eye-lock n raghav gazing kalpi's beauty n kalpi blushing was awesome

Knw u r not gng to give confession so easily but eagerly waiting for the drama to unfold whc u have stored in for us😉

mariee tune kamla ko itna bada role kyu diya😆

Loved d teaser

Originally posted by: sweet1308

Lovely update waiting till u update

Originally posted by: shonali164

resh
unres😳
part 32 b
love to see jealous rags while kalpi n ro is talking, ha ha truely if he ws driving he actly did accident by seeing dem.😆
oh wow dumb pakhi did sumthing gr8 dat aww ws superb, n cz of it sammy ki batti jali🤣 n he tease rags wid his own words.
Future saale se hoshiyaari wow dats perfect saala for rags😆I thought he liked KAlpi ...who's this
Gloria ?? Bechara ro got cnfuse nw whose dis 3rd cartoon in RR's lyf😕
finaly ro's atleast 1 sentence made rags happy, dat he is going alone with his MI 😳 n i hope trio's plan wl work.
Part 33.
Finaly rags got to knw dat ro is kalpi's brother, i just love dis sentence rags wl engulfing ro in tight hug😃
wow RR vs MI race its superb. Love to see rags enjoying the things wich he miss in his childhood. Its so touching part dat rags doing competition for fun.
Yes kalpi ask him dat he realy doesnt belive on love n love d way kalpi explain him abt love n nature.(i wl definitely doing it maaru i wnt to listen dat sea sound hope i may listen it)
kalpi tied RR's lace wow😆 i lv dis mischeive kalpi.
Dis is bestes n loviest twist i read among lots of ff's dat seth ji is none other dan rags nanu who love kalpi as his grand daughter n want rags love as well as marry her. I just love d way u potrayed rags emotion aftr knwing nanu's n kalpi realation.😳
finaly rags undstnd he truely love kalpi n he is ready to accept it widout any fear. N yes der he took step to confess😊 hope rags tell her, dat 3 magical words. Maaru please no cheating please made cnfession in dis natural beauty.
P.s. Belated happy diwali darling🤗
Mag faral khalla ka?😉

Originally posted by: abxetz

Nice update dear 😊

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice update

Complete soon Eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: aryagr

Lovely updates. W8ing 4 complete chap 33.