MG FF: Bound to the King - COMPLETED [ch. 10-13 posted June 2018]

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AshelySpinelli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

nice part geet refusd 2 bow down well she hv great self respect nd i like it👍🏼

nd dat made maan angry

waitng 4 d nxt part

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Craziest_MG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

brave girl
Maan will have some tough time ahead

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CherryBlush

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Love feisty Geet 😈 👏 awesome reply of her 😃

Awesome part ⭐️ update soon

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Superb Update.. But Short 😔
Loved Geet's fierce attitude ! Denied to bow down to the Majesty Maan 😳
Interesting.. ! Keep updating...

...Sheen...❤️

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Adi is good advisor, kind-hearted, he knows how to treat even the enemies..

Maan seems arrogant ruler..

Liked Geet's response and the royal atmosphere created very much..

so is she there for a purpose..what was she doing in his palace.

waiting for next.

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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hey Khumari... its Mishti Mohabbat here.. like others I was also a fan of your previous writing: Tremble... and when I read your name in the forum again was happy to begin reading this story.

A historic concept of kingdoms and its rulers. Maan seems to be representing the top of the cream ...the arrogance, high headedness as well as unbounded Power..seems just right fit as a character of Maan.

And Geet ...what an introduction!! Floored by her boldness. With an uneven voice and in weak form she still stood at her guard and shined in her pride.

Lol I actually hope she is not a princess... but rather family of a warrior or a warrior herself! Now wouldn't that be cool ..or a commoner even better!! ( I am getting carried away in my imagination) .

But please do continue soon ...looking forward to the next lambaa chapter ..Heheee

thanks

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gurtimuskaan

@gurtimuskaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

nice update. Maan is more egoistic king n geet didn't bow b4 maan which made him angry. Adi seems to be gentle. Waiting for nxt

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kumari3

@kumari3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Thank you all sooo very much for your feedback, much appreciated! A very HAPPY DIWALI to all those who celebrate! Big hugs! <3 <3 <3

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: kumari3
Thank you all sooo very much for your feedback, much appreciated! A very HAPPY DIWALI to all those who celebrate! Big hugs! <3 <3 <3

You are most welcome !
You dont celebrate it?