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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 2

Scene starts in Raman's office.Mihir was panicked seeing Raman in that state.Whole office is gathered around.Mihir is trying to wake Raman up but Raman is unconscious.Whole the office is sad seeing Raman in that state.

Even though Raman was strict and angry but he was always there for them when ever they needed something Raman helped them and that made them call him Bhai as elder guiding person.They always felt that Raman is their elder brother.

Now that huge Raman Kumar Bhalla is collapsed to ground,No one ever dreamt such things even in their wildest dreams.

Some one is staff called ambulance and they arrived and took him to hospital.Mihir went along with Raman.He was trying to call Bhalla's but no one took his call.Mihir has tears in his eyes.

Then they reach hospital and Raman was taken to theatre.Mihir was still trying to contact Bhalla's but his dead became failure.

Mihir calls everyone Ishita,Mr and Mrs Bhalla,Simmi,Romi and no one took his call.He then realizes that everyone would be in court for hearing of Romi.

Mihir breaks down not knowing what to do.

Mihir then just leaves a message to everyone that Raman had cardiac arrest and serious admitted to hospital.

Mihir calls Mihika who reaches there immediately knowing about her jeeju's condition.

Mihika comes there and Mihir tells Mihika to wait here to look after Raman and he will go and inform everyone about Raman .

Mihika was waiting outside.She is panicked it is quite opposite to her character.She would'nt have imagined her jeeju in this condition ever .For her Raman was the best person she ever met.Who can do any thing for his family and strongest man she knew who faced many problems in his life than any one could imagine but still stood erect but now he is in hospital bed fighting with death.

Then Mihir reaches the court and he was already crying over Raman and he finally informs the family about Raman's condition.

All are schocked knowing about it.

Ishita is broken and she could'nt understand what is happening around her only one thing that she knows is Raman got heart attack.She fall on he rknees knowing it .Immediatly Pathak tells them to go and attend Raman he will somehow postpone the hearing for that day.

Everyone reaches hospital.There Mihika was sitting helpless unable to do any thing with tears in her eyes.

Mihir "Mihika doctor ney kuch bola .Kyaa huan?"

Mihika "Koi bahaar anhen aaaya?"

Ishita was crying profously.Mrs Bhalla was in same condition..Mr Bhalla was trying to calm others but he himself is trying hard to stop his tears.

Then they see Shagun coming there.Mrs bhalla is shocked seeing her there.

Mihika informs them that she called Shagun as they din't take their call and Shagun is only person who knows Raman better.

Then Shagun acts as if she is worried but no one is interested I her drama.

Then after around half an hour doctor comes outside.Everyone gathers around her asking about Raman's condition.

Ishita was in fore front .

Doctor "Aap Kaun?"

Ishita "I am Dr Ishita .Main patient ke biwi hun.Abh kaisey hain Raman."

Doctor "Yeh patiens kaa doosra stroke hain kyaa."

Ishita was confused as she don't know about it.

Mr Bhalla "Nahen Raman ko pehley kabhee nahen huan.Yhe pehlaa stroke hain.Kyaa huan doctor."

Doctor "Yhe patient ka pehla stroke hain.But uskaa condition bahuth serious hain,bahuth impact huan hain.We are trying our best."

Doctor "Patient ney last time kyaa khaaya thaa?Patient bahuth weak hain?"

Ishita was silent as are everyone no one knew what he ate.

Doctor was pissed "Atleat last time kabh khaaya yeh tho patha hoga ?"

Mr Bhalla "Subaha kuch khaaya nahen.Raath ko khaaya hoga."

Mihir "What.Nahen bhai kall kuch nahen khaaya.Who late time kaam kar rahen they."

Doctor "Aaapko yeh bhee nahen path kee patient last time kabh khaaya hain."

All are silent.

Doctor "Mediacal history koi allergy."

Mr Bhalla "Raman bahuth healthy hain.Hummesha apney health kaa khyaal rakhtha hain.Chotey chotey head aches key alaawa kabhee kuch serious nahen huan aaj tak,Koi allergy nahen hain."

Doctor "Patient bahuth dippressed lag rahan hain.Koi problem koi issue issey who disturbed hon."

Mihir "Reoblem tho hain lekin bahi ussey itnaa disturb nahen ho saktha ."

Doctor asks few questions and no one there have answers for it.They don't know what is bothering Raman and Shagun was standing in a corner silently.With a slight grin over her face.

Doctor goes inside and everyone are blaming Romi for everything.Ishita was crying there with heart broken.


(cont.)

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Oh my god! is it a heart attack?
I've been having these dreams again recently.
Continue soon.
But Ruhi will always need her papa Vikas. ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
bichara romi...
bd raman cant tak u lik dis...
vikas kuch romce r intrstng update karo...
our shw mein kum ye kya...ab tumbe tragy shuru kiya...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Heart attack..!! 🤢
No 1 knws wat raman ate last tym..
seems no 1 cares abt him.. 😒
al r tryg 2 solve d prblm of romi.. 😈
nyc part.. 👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
No one is thinking abt raman 😭 Bechara
Conti soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update vikas heart attack omg no one knows when he ate last time 😡 he is so alone update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really superb story👏👏👏
feling very sad for raman😭😭😭
continue soon...

i'm really very curious to read ur updates bhai..😛
plz try to pm me...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Hey..nice and interesting..hope Raman is alright
Oh and btw just one req please..can you pls increase the font size when you post? Its a lil hard reading this small a font..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Read the 2 updates !
Loved it !
Poor Raman !
No one even notices him 😡
He's so depressed and no one even knows about him !
Now he had an attack ! 😭
Bechara Romi though ! 🤔
Everyone thinking he's the first cause of his depression !

Did you read the book ?!
Him collapsing so reminded me of the scene in the book ! 😭
Hope he'll be fine and the MU will be cleared !
Awesome updates !
Eager to read what's coming next !
Do pm me if you send them please 😊
SAKIVIAM thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zola007

Read the 2 updates !

Loved it !
Poor Raman !
No one even notices him 😡
He's so depressed and no one even knows about him !
Now he had an attack ! 😭
Bechara Romi though ! 🤔
Everyone thinking he's the first cause of his depression !

Did you read the book ?!
Him collapsing so reminded me of the scene in the book ! 😭
Hope he'll be fine and the MU will be cleared !
Awesome updates !
Eager to read what's coming next !
Do pm me if you send them please 😊

yes I read the book and planned to take it from it.
not just reading I habe posted summaries of each and every chapter in it.

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