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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
hahaah oh my god
supreb muahaaa
loved it
and kiddo epi was awesomeee

A young lady rose aww i am imaging her neelπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
from down shrieking "I got it sister " Seeing infront of an unknown person she asked "What can I do " He surprised to see a kiddo is asking " what can I do " 🀣🀣 here i ma getting clear picture πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
but seeing the stetho scope dangling on her neck , he understud she is a doc .
me also had this ques y but from past months i came to know i was wrong i m saying about red lines
Ohhh so this [Kiddo] young Doc is misunderstanding him
thanks for suggest that name

ABG very clearly described πŸ‘πŸ‘

And she was stilled to see the man she just met was actually a doc . She walked with nimble feet

hahahaahahaahah OMG superb superb superb

the young doc clearly mentioned about the patients case history and presently what the medications they are on . He is impressed the way she remembered all the cases and the reprts including medication

me too too tooo impressedπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Ram : That's why I thought you are kiddo .

haha so many are thought like same

Sister : sir you spoiling madam , she is a chocolate maniac and you are giving more .

but i am loving this choclate maniac kiddo very much

Ram: undoubtedly she is a "kiddo "

i haven,t any doubt we are clear


he called her "Hey Kiddo "

That's it ,Her temper raised she walked back to him with a rage in her eyes ,

,Im a doctor not a kidddo so Don't call me with that name

hahahaa i knew how it will be 🀣


and ram expressions descibed amazingly

the way he observing her lovely

and the way he is thinking about how she is behaving with sisters loved it wah

and eagerly waiting for raya milan and eager to know who will be priya i have my illussions alsoπŸ˜‰




Edited by lpsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

hahaah oh my god

supreb muahaaa
loved it
and kiddo epi was awesomeee

A young lady rose aww i am imaging her neelπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
from down shrieking "I got it sister " Seeing infront of an unknown person she asked "What can I do " He surprised to see a kiddo is asking " what can I do " 🀣🀣 here i ma getting clear picture πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
but seeing the stetho scope dangling on her neck , he understud she is a doc .
me also had this ques y but from past months i came to know i was wrong i m saying about red lines
Ohhh so this [Kiddo] young Doc is misunderstanding him
thanks for suggest that name

ABG very clearly described πŸ‘πŸ‘

And she was stilled to see the man she just met was actually a doc . She walked with nimble feet

hahahaahahaahah OMG superb superb superb

the young doc clearly mentioned about the patients case history and presently what the medications they are on . He is impressed the way she remembered all the cases and the reprts including medication

me too too tooo impressedπŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Ram : That's why I thought you are kiddo .

haha so many are thought like same

Sister : sir you spoiling madam , she is a chocolate maniac and you are giving more .

but i am loving this choclate maniac kiddo very much

Ram: undoubtedly she is a "kiddo "

i haven,t any doubt we are clear


he called her "Hey Kiddo "

That's it ,Her temper raised she walked back to him with a rage in her eyes ,

,Im a doctor not a kidddo so Don't call me with that name

hahahaa i knew how it will be 🀣


and ras expressions descibed amazingly

the way he observing her lovely

and the way he is thinking about how she is behaving with sisters loved it wah

and eagerly waiting for raya milan and eager to know who will be priya i have my illussions alsoπŸ˜‰






Lakhs you took so much time to type this comment πŸ˜†
haha i know what exactly you are imagining .
and you know she is goingto kill us for sure

and yes i wanted it to be like this so asked her to go ahead with it ..
she was sulking all the way ..

Thank you so much for the lovely comment
and you know whatt im going to post next part now itself

so brace yourself and your illusions also

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: luvsakshi



Lakhs you took so much time to type this comment πŸ˜†
haha i know what exactly you are imagining .
and you know she is goingto kill us for sure

and yes i wanted it to be like this so asked her to go ahead with it ..
she was sulking all the way ..

Thank you so much for the lovely comment
and you know whatt im going to post next part now itself

so brace yourself and your illusions also


no no actually i typed all this with my left hand usually i m right handed person thats y i took time
yeah for sure already she warned πŸ˜†
i am readyyπŸ˜‰
Edited by lpsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: lpsakshi


no no actually i typed all this with my left hand usually i m right handed person thats y i took time
yeah for sure already she warned πŸ˜†
i am readyyπŸ˜‰


Why you typed with left hand .. kya hua right hand ki

lol .. will see
how its going to be

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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: luvsakshi


Why you typed with left hand .. kya hua right hand ki

lol .. will see
how its going to be


kuch nahi hua i am having lunch that time
and i magination me thoda time tho lagega naaπŸ˜‰

haha
waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
waiting for next update
Edited by armanz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37





She is coming down disconnecting the call she said to him .

Thank you he briefly said both of they waited for Priya to comedown .

When Finally what seens to eternity , when priya came down . he gasped his breath seeing her sindhoor on her forehead

Closing his mouth "OMG I asked Unmarried doctor ,Looking confused young doc stilled with anger "

What you mean she paused her voice this time cutting "Sir " from her sentence

Ram: umm sorry , I mean to say .. Meanwhile Priya came to the young doc

Priya: hey darling , who wants to meet me and why you called for that .

Ram: interrupting their talk , sorry mam actually You are not the one I wanted to meet , its just I confused Name , sorry for troubling you .

That's okay , She left from there as she has some work and Ram gulped a large amount of O2 .

The young doc is muttering sumthing under her breath . Turning his side : Im getting late "

Ram:One min , I wanted to meet Dr .Priya sharma , Young lady ,Not married

Young doc : scrunched her eyes ,her eyebrows knotted suspiciously "why you wanted to meet her "

Ram: uff how many times I told you ,Its personal with frustatation he said "Kiddo kahin ki "

Young doc "Now she was flaggerbastered with his behaviour

She pointed her index finger at his chest "Mister ,First You are the one who asked me help

And you are the one stopped me from my way

And You are the one asked about Priya with out mentioning surname

And You are the one calling me Kiddo from when we met

And If its personal Keep it with you I don't wanna listen it " walking away from him ,she turned her head and said " My name is Dr .Priya Sharma , sudhir sharma's daughter "

Ram almost choked up when he heard that , Oh god .. his knees shaken up and he ran after her this time calling her name very sweetly

She is walking briskly but some one said to her "Doctor some one is calling you "

She had to stop in her track , He huffed for breath " sorry yaar , Im so extremely sorry " I Don't know you are Priya sharma " hmm Dr.Priya sharma .

Priya: Im not going to accept your apology saying this she about to spun on her way . He blocked her way telling "Sudhir uncle asked me to talk with you sooo "

Priya stopped in her tracks ... God whyyy ??? Her neatly kohled eyes rolled pausing his gaze at his eyes she questioned him .

Spotting a near by caf ,Ram asked her " can we sit there and talk " he pointed towards caf

Priya : Sorry , I don't want to talk near this hospital area , at this lane down there is a Bringe coffe shop , will meet there

Ram:come I will give lift

Priya : I have my scooty and driving licence bhi

Ram: laughed at that quickly balnced with a stare , She was so cute how proudly she is saying that she has driving licence that means indirectly she is telling she is not a kiddo ..Lol .. But he liked her

Whatever he thought about his future wife ,all the qualities are there in priya , so he is very much eager to tell her about his opinion . and wanted to hear about from her side moreover he has someother connection too with this girl [ you will come to know in future]

Priya is pissed off with the match starting itself . first of all she don't want to get married with a doctor ,knowing few of them in her class and seniors . she decided like that but when Amarnath uncle asked for priya for his son , everbody elated , they have told that they will come to see girl 4 days back but some how they didn't appear , Priya's parents felt very bad about that and she took holiday also just because of match fixing .

She cursed the man who invented "marriage " she started her scooty towards the caf . asusaul someone started following her . and yesterday Amarnath uncle came with their family without notice and her parents called her asked her to come home immediately . she took permission and went to home only to visited by so many ppl in their hall . she wished "Hai " to them stood there . sudhir introduced her ,in between she got a call from hospital ,she told to her dad " I asked for 30 mins permission " have to go back , I got late in traffic .

She said " nice to meet them " looking at amar and Krishna . she walked off in huff .

And yesterday she clearly said to her father she doesn't want to go ahead with this match , firstly they didn't tell us why they have not come when they intended to come , secondly no information regarding that , thirdly without info they have come to see .. and moreover im not intrested in marrying a doctor . You know papa most shadists and most alcoholics and most chain smokers are in doctors . she reasond out her point .

Sudhir said "Most handsome , most polite , more patience , most great persons are also in doctors priya , he said lil bit harsh . she walked back to her room with moisty eyes ,and tomorw at the mrg breakfast table sudhir told her "That Boy may come to talk with you "

Ohhh god tshe thought , she turned her scooty toward s the parking , she went and sat a deepest corner of the caf .Her thoughts were lingering on her match and her papa's words .

When He came she looked at him seeing his stare she signalled him to sit . He sat down ordered him self a hot strong coffee ,turning to her he asked what you want kiddo . bits his tongue

She gritted her teeth said I don't want to take anything , im okay with it . please talk what you wanna talk .

Ram : hmm err , how to start it im ... Keeping Dairy milk infront of her he about to say something

Priya : cutting him in middle , if its about the match " im sorry im not going to marry you , pushed the chocolate at his side

He was baffled asked " whyyy ""

Priya : I don't want to marry doctors . so there is no further discussion on it so please forgot it here itself , she got up to leave

Ram : he blocked her way , I know the problem is not me , the problem is with "Doctor " degree than for your kind information you are also a doctor . than why this indifference , his male ego hurted .

Priya : im already seeing how my friend is suffering marrying a doctor , I don't want to pace all those so better we cut it off here only .

Ram : kiddo . you are truly a kiddo ,but seeing you im not feeling you are rejecting this offer for being Doctor .before he shoot his question she shot up

Priya : mind you , Im 23 ,

Ram again blocked her , why you haven't tell you only priya sharma in the morning ,

Priya: you are talking with me and I don't know you , so obviously I thought you asked for another Dr.Priya . Its your mistake you haven't told the proper name .He gazed at her eyes

she brisked away from him because she is feeling his gaze is hunting from so many births , she is feeling intoxicated near him . when he came near she almost wanted to hold his hand .

Ohh god . priya get your life , turning her scooty she fled from there /and the other vehicle also followed her back .

Server brought the strong coffee for him ,Ram smilingly ..ufff bhai to deal with this kiddo I need cold coffee . he laughed at his own joke , he asked sudhir to come to the place ,after talking with him both left from there .

Later in the Home , sudhir asked about match to priya . she simply said he is not intrested in this match . Sudhir said we are going to function on Friday be ready for that , take leave , and im going to announce my official declaration with collaboration of my company , priya nodded and left .

After 4 days ,Sudhir asked priya to get ready as they were going for "Sagai" of his friends son . Her mother have her peach colour gagra to wear . Priya took some extra time to pamper herself that day as she got holiday . when she came down , Sudhir & shipra eyes become wet by seeing their angel pretty well dressed . they blessed priya .Priya confused why they were getting emotional .

Sudhir cut them off he made them walk hurry as they are getting late . Priya eyes fluttered open seeing the huge gates of the mansion , It was filled with Roses and the other flowers but her look struck on those roses which were linely on the pathway of bothsides . she stepped out of it , Sudhir introducing her to many she gladly meeting them asking her mother , why Papa is introducing each and evry person today .. Shipra tugged her hand "sshhh just stay calm " .

Priya sat in the sofa which was situated in the hall midway .. When a pair of hands closed her eyes , she startled ,

Please do LIKE & COMMENT , It will give encouragement to write

Edited by luvsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Oh My , what a twist it was , awesome , will give my detailed comment later

I just loved the twist yaar but frankly giving Giri's antics to Priya was so good to read.. and u knw what when Ram has fallen for Kiddo she has to be Priya only but not my Kiddo..Loved her expressions when he told which Priya he wanted to meet.
Oh so hospital area is banned for marriage discussions πŸ˜† but I understand her words about docs heard so many times from Giri. But Ram's expressions hearing her were worth reading.
She said No.. He took it to engagement!!! Ram toh Ram hain then will see what will Priya do.. And he took a dare step of planning against Priya with her dad..Will see how my sherni would react.
I just loved while readng the 2nd part so now I want 3rd part asap.. Its my bday gift na toh dedo abhi.. Plllzzz...pretty pllzzz.
PS: Who is following her?? Hmmm plz dont put her in troubles.

Lovevu n thanq for such a marvelous gift.. Want to read more so plz update asap.. Am just loving this...
Edited by armanz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
thanks for pm

hahahha OMG twist pe twist
loved each and every bit
rams expression when he saw married priya 🀣 that too closing his mouth
"Daaarling" suprb
raam corrected his mistake πŸ‘ yaha YD ki koi galati nahi hai
and the young doctor is muttering some thing o bhi batado bhaiπŸ˜‰πŸ˜† other wise all readers will imagine different different things πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Young doc : scrunched her eyes ,her eyebrows knotted suspiciously "why you wanted to meet her
bechara ram πŸ˜†

Ram: uff how many times I told you ,Its personal with frustatation he said "Kiddo kahin ki "
hahaaha i m imagining her expressions
omg mera pet dukh raha hai 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

She pointed her index finger at his chest "Mister ,First You are the one who asked me help

And you are the one stopped me from my way

And You are the one asked about Priya with out mentioning surname

And You are the one calling me Kiddo from when we met

aur koi hoga tho bhaag jayega haha

rams expressions good and he is calling sweetly her name i m thinking how it will be if ram calls sweetly"kiddooo" instead of her name

awww priya didnt accept his appology very bad kiddo she is
sorry neel meri comment ki puri asar tum par padegi
and ram ne lift offer kiπŸ‘

Ram: laughed at that quickly balnced with a stare , She was so cute how proudly she is saying that she has driving licence that means indirectly she is telling she is not a kiddo ..Lol ..

hahhaa but any way we are not going to accept it

But he liked her
we toooπŸ˜‰

and rams opinion is too good
priyas frustation is so real and natural to react like that
and first impressoinof kapoors is so bad infront of kiddo i mean priya πŸ˜ƒ
uff she didnt meet them properly

You know papa most shadists and most alcoholics and most chain smokers are in doctors . she reasond out her point

πŸ˜•πŸ˜²

she walked back to her room with moisty eyes
awwwπŸ€—

He sat down ordered him self a hot strong coffee ,turning to her he asked what you want kiddo . bits his tongue

hahaha
🀣 ab tho gaya

Ram : hmm err , how to start it im ... Keeping Dairy milk infront of her

hahaha koi aisa propose karta hai kya but smart try mt doc kapoor but loved it in her mind she is cursing her self for rejecting choclt


and rams analysation is suprb

Ram : kiddo . you are truly a kiddo ,but seeing you im not feeling you are rejecting this offer for being Doctor .before he shoot his question she shot up

Priya : mind you , Im 23 ,


hahahaha is it?

in behaviour its like 3

and the way she is effecting by ram s presence lovely described and i think ram also hav a idea about her feelings lets see what is that connection


Ram smilingly ..ufff bhai to deal with this kiddo I need cold coffee . he laughed at his own joke ,

wow loved it πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

he asked sudhir to come to the place ,after talking with him both left from there .

oh ram ne plan banadiya wow waiting eagerly

and waiting for ram and sudheer convo revealing

and sagai owww

.Priya confused poor baby


Priya sat in the sofa which was situated in the hall midway .. When a pair of hands closed her eyes , she startled ,

i think its ram lets see



Edited by lpsakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: armanz

Oh My , what a twist it was , awesome , will give my detailed comment later



Lol

hehe i know your reaction
go and enjoy in your conference πŸ˜†
will wait for your detailed comment

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