AsYa TS - Message in a bottle, EPILOGUE, Page 25 (17/11) - Page 16

It was so beautiful!

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

hats off!
that is something so unique...n endearing as well...
kismat connection sort of!!! lol...
loved the concept and your words made me read it all in a go...
although it ended on a happy note but i wouldn't mind an epilogue...
coz u know...Yeh Dil Maange More!!!!

thanks Dear... your appreciation means a lot... yea its kinda kismet connection... ill try to give an Epilogue..😃

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

Read all the three chapters in one go!

This is simply beautiful...Such a beautiful and cute method of proposal...

Finally Mukadarr Ka Khel yields something good! 😆

Thanks Preeti... ho are you Dear?

hehe yea in this Muqaddar ka khel yielded something.😆

glad you loved the story.😃

Originally posted by: Amin21

Beautiful lovely amazing👏

really love it

thanks for the pm

waiting for your ss hope you to update it soonish

thank you Amin... glad you loved it.. ill update SS soon.😃

Originally posted by: sweetluck

Awesome Story...👏👏

Unique and interesting..😃

I thoroughly enjoyed and Loved it alot..😃

thanks..😃... really happy to kno that you loved this story.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

fabulous...

amazing...

luv it...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

Thanks Dear... glad you loved the story and appreciated it.😃

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

I am speechless Actually ,

I read all this three parts in one go ..

This concept was a Amazing one ...

I love this story a lot se bhi zyada ..

This is perfectly Beautiful ..

You penned it wonderfully ..

Asad's life style and Zoya's letter for stranger defining what love means for her ...

And Asad and Zoe's unexpected meetings ..

Asad remembering Zoya after so many years ..And that letter ..

Them meeting again in Goa ,

That beach talk and Asad connecting all the dots ..Realizing Love ...

Wishing Zoya to be Zoe was something so realistic ..i loved it ..

And Asad proved his qualification as a lawyer by remembering each points and going to the particular places where he met her .

and The Letter he left for her in the bottle ,in Orphanage was something so heart - touching ..

And the Evening ,

Asya -Dinner and Love Confession ..

I loved this Whole TS completely ..

Each and everything was penned down beautifully,..

This TS is a total package of Love, Destiny ,Realities of Life ...

I Loved each and everything so much ..

Awesome ,

Beautiful ,

Wonderful ,

Heart-Touching ,

Lovely ,

and Very Cute ..

Loved it ...

I definitely need a Epilogue for this and I need Asad to cook for her and Zoya to massage his tensed muscles of his neck ...

Pls ,Say ok for an Epilogue ...Pretty Pls ...

Love ,

Aish...

Aww thanks Aish... that's such a sweet and beautiful comment..

Such comments brings tears to my eyes... and i'm very happy and at the same time humbled to know that i could touch your heart so much with this story... it really means a lot..

And i'm also really happy when i see readers really understanding stories... whether its mine or others' as well...understanding not only what was penned but the hidden meanings they portray and the messages they give... and here looks like you understood the story really well.

thanks again Aish.😃

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Thanks.😃

Originally posted by: kaussar

Thanks Amu... glad you finally caught up with it and read it and liked it..
@ bold... yea even i strongly believe in that... thats the reason why i wrote it in the story that way.😃.
Or the movie must be nice... you should read this novel by Nicholas sparks... it doesn't have a happy ending like in my story and it is very different... but the story and letters are so heart touching...

Hey Kaussar 🤗
This was simply amazing
A beautiful story ❤️
U r a fantastic writer
Keep writing on my asya
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman ❤️