Ashlok FF:~*~The PREDATOR..~*~.Chapter-13,page-62... - Page 33

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sinah that was superb...that surprise date and of course that kiss...loved it...yeah it wasn't that hot as usual but was a good one...continue soon

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Last past was very good. Gave me butterflies. Please update soon

hey sorry for the late reply really loved the update it was to gd shocked that shlok had planned everything even sanjay ahuja to misbehave with astha... i wonder if astha will find out later... loved the scene where shlok asked her for dinner and how they were replying with notes too sweet and the last bit was getting interesting only to realize the part just finished so please do update soon really cant wait and thanks for the pm

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CHAPTER-13.

See the dazzle and lose your senses-

Feel the passion and glow and shine..

I will take you for a roller coaster ride girl-

I am The Predator and I'll ensure You are mine..

Astha was lost in the hot kiss..Lost in the way his hands tightened round her body,and pulled her close almost across the gears,onto his lap..

She held onto his shirtfront,as his hot hungry lips went on marauding hers with intense raw need.Her heart seemed ready to burst at any moment now with the taste and feel of him.

Everything about him was pulling her like magic,and asking her to drown in them.And she was doing just that,as his big rough hands squeezed at her waist,and his hot full lips sucked and licked hers driving her to the last brink of wildness.

Astha wanted the time to stop right then and there.After days without him,she suddenly wanted the beautiful crazy feelings he was arousing in her never to stop.She wanted-..

She forgot to think any further as he moved one hand to crush her silky hair,and his thumb caressed her neck beneath her open locks..A slight moan escaped her lips,when his tongue made entry into her mouth,and Shlok turned on the passion to a thousand fold..

Shlok was lost in the taste and feel of her body..He had meant it as a game,and it was fast getting out of hand..

There was something so addictive about her,that he just lost his control..And this time he was doing it again..Losing himself in her..

He wanted to have her,all of her..And it did not even matter he was in the risk of hampering his own self made plan in the process.

What mattered was that she tasted and smelled so delicious..And smelled like heaven,and he had his body hard for her already and he wanted to take her right then and there in his car..

Without further thought he had pushed his seat backwards,and had pulled her up above him.

"Shlok..!What-.."She tried to protest,but her words got stifled by his hungry lips as he pulled her down hard down to him,letting her feel his need for her.

A soft surprised gasp escaped her lips as her soft stomach brushed against his hardened self.But he did not let her think further as he pulled her down,and started kissing and caressing her milky throat and neckline,making her gasp and hold onto him tighter.

"God..What do you to me girl.."He whispered huskily against her throat,suckling and nibbling at her sensitive neckline making her moan and gasp some more.

He was moving his hand to the zipper at the back of her dress,when a car honked nearby making them both break free.

Astha quickly moved back to her seat,and looked away in embarrassment as she tried to fix her disheveled appearance.

Shlok looked at her blushing profile with possessiveness glinting in his dark eyes,as he licked at his lips that still tasted of her.

Without giving much thought to the interruption,as he knew there would more moments like this to come,he turned on the ignition and shifted the gear to be on his way..

Astha felt he was living in a fairy land story..

She was being pampered and treated just like an fairy tale princess would have been,but with added passion..

After their candle lit dinner at a famous elite restaurant overlooking the sea,they were now dancing together to the slow music that played.

She loved the way he held her body close to his.His hand tightening round her waist from time to time,as they moved almost as one..Astha tried to control the flush that spread across her cheeks at his embarrassing nearness,but it seemed he was not in the mood to let go..

And Astha let herself relax against his hard strength..Letting him reassure her with his presence and hold that he would be here..Atleast for now,she could let herself go..And let him in..

Astha would not have relaxed however if she had seen the smirk that came to Shlok's lips,as she lent completely onto him.

His one hand moved soothingly to her back,and caressed it lightly,while the other tightened round her waist pulling her closer.

He gritted his teeth,and inhaled her fragrance slightly,as his body reacted to her instantly..

He moved his hand along her spine lightly,as his pulse quickened with anticipation,but he stopped himself just before touching her rounded hips.

He was not ready to pounce yet..When he took her he did not want any hesitation,and holding back.He had to take her their slowly..Until finally she would be his in every way..

Shlok Agnihotri was the renowned predator,and playing with his prey before the final kill was his favourite pastime.

She was yielding to him alright..But it was merely the beginning..And she had to be taken all the way before she,his prey,was ready to be taken completely and thoroughly.

His body tightened some more,as he imagined her writhing and moaning below him even then.He lowered his head and inhaled her beautiful scent,and smiled in satisfaction..

It did not matter that right then and there he wanted to carry her to a darkened corner and devour her right then and there,until she was screaming and gasping for him to take her,like the predator he was..

But of course he would control himself..Till the time was right..He smiled to himself again as he swirled her around to the music,and melting her more to meet his requirement..All part of his plan..Little plans that will lead to the master plan..

They had a quiet journey back,and Astha was not sure what she expected as he dropped her home..

Would he..Or would he just..?

She could not think any further,as he screeched the car to a halt infront of his apartment.

She quickly said a thank you and an embarrassed bye as she got out of the car.

She had just reached the door to her apartment,when she felt him behind her.

She had not even heard him getting out of the car,nor walking up the staircase to her second storied flat.

She turned round slowly with her heart thundering like anything.

And suddenly he loomed closer,his stance looking dangerous as he pushed her up against the wall.

"You forgot something.."He whispered huskily coming closer.

And Astha could not stop herself from looking at his full male lips so close to hers.She licked at her own nervously,and inhaling an unsteady breath looked up into his dark glinting eyes.

"What..What are you talking about..?"She whispered softly,kneeling backwards,as he came closer..

"What do you think..I'm talking about..?"He whispered in a husky dangerous voice moving his lips closer to hers..

DEAR FINALLY YOU ARE BACK! Missed your writing snf you of course!
Wow what an update! The kiss...their date...the making out in his car...just wow! Too hot to handle!
Somehow it seems like he just plays with her..and that would be so crazy!
Pls continue soon and do pm me :D
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