Ishra OS - TRANSITIVE RELATION - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is just awesome!! One of my friends pointed this thread to me as she knew how badly I've been waiting for an Ishita-Raman heart to heart... Just loved what you wrote in your OS... THIS would be the perfect conversation if the Cvs were not busy chasing Ashok's shiny pajamas and sunglasses 🤢 ... You've been true to the original character sketch of Raman and Ishita..the ones who used to have mature conversation... . Thank you for that... 🤗
And the end to the OS... Just nails the scene !!!
Fantastic OS! 👏




Edited by GanBarunFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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If the writers of YHM visit this forum then can they please read this and learn! This was so beautiful, I wish we get something like this on screen.
I loved how conversational your OS is and the dialogues are so very believable I could imagine Raman-Ishita saying this on screen.
Best part for me was how you integrated the name plate in your story and how it signifies Ishita's intimacy with Raman. Thank you for this, I really needed it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi bhanu this is probably the first time I have read your work and I'm so glad I did, the moment I read the first paragraph I knew it was going to be good and it was only better!
Enjoyed reading it. If only you make it a TS 😳


P. S the elusive hug was at the right moment and I totally imagined it with such intensity and almost imagined ishita holding his face in moonlight peeking through the window and then her backing out and him approaching. Okay enough of my blabbering. Will go read the rest of your work too!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh wow Bhanu, finally managed to read it. awesome story, why don't you write more often ladki??? 😡

Yeh OS tha kya? Kyun yaar? Is mod par mat chodo - update de do pretty please.

👏 👏 👏 👏
Edited by Veeann - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing😊..so perfectly written👏..Cuuld visualize the entire scene in front of my eyes..seriously CVS need to read this..thanks a ton for this OS🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome really well written so wish to see seething like this which won't happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Awesome... This is what we want to see in the serial but we get totally opposite one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have literally imagined every single word, scene action that you have described and have gotten close to feeling what I would feel if this really happened. So first of all, you are an amazing writer to make me feel this sort of anxiety, apprehension and excitement through a OS.
And second of all, considering how everyone and their mother is sort of going crazy on how the tracks are ruined right now, I feel like maybe just maybe things might be taking a turn in our beloved show.
So here is to hoping for the best and to reading more of your stories!


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh...brilliant OS that was..You're amazing ⭐️
If only the creatives of our show were half as fabulous and creative as our forum writers are, we may actually have got a meaningful and beautiful conversation like the one above.. 😔 I am glad we got another wonderful OS on this track...
It was apt and beautiful.. ❤️ Both of them poured out their emotions and finally hugged it out..That's exactly the way it should be.!!
Lol, I loved the way she trapped him and made him admit about his jealously..Poor boy..unwillingly he had to accept it.. 😆
Being Raavan Kumar, he eventually ended up turning the tables..Ahhh, would have loved to see her answer.. Why did it have to end.? 😳

Thanks for the wonderful OS, really loved reading it.! 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow bhanu...thats a beautifully written os👏

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