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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

I don't know how you express and convey such emotions in such few words.

I loved the way you have used this lovely song here too.

Arnav is Khushi's and she accepted him and took him as part of her life.

Beautifully written, Rae.

Do keep writing.

Its a pleasure to read your work.

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faffy

@faffy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

They are soulmates and soulmates don't require words to communicate - they have a language of their own which speaks louder, deeper and clearer than mere words!!! A powerful and stirring narration of their complete surrender!!

Very, very moving...😭

And yes, yes, yes...will be thrilled to bits to read your earlier works!!

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Oh so beautiful, always keep writing Rae!

Thanks for the PM :)

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Beautiful ending loved how she waited for him to tell her everything that he kept in all his pain their pain their break and she waited for him to become completely hers and then their amazing 3 shot thanks for the pm and i would love to reread YNTOO.

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Rae.. Thank you for the p.m firstly dear! :D

The last part is my most favourite.. I've read the whole 3 parts together once again n by the time I came to the end , it was totally n completely emotionally intense ... There was a whole sense of fulfilment.. The final line which speaks about the protectiveness which washed over khushi for her Arnav was very very heart warming n I felt very proud of the woman she is! Also immensely loved how uve conveyed the feelings without a single dialogue...

Rae.. I would really lovee it very much to read your completed story of ArShi.. It is absolutely a delight any time of the day to read about this couple.. I love your writing very much n hv been able to read only a couple of ss only but now yeh dil maange moeee , ahaa!! ;) :D

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Oh yes! Reading the last update reminded me of a dialogue from origins sin where the hero says " I want to give everything to her n take everything from her.."

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Beautiful piece...

Again writers who write stories surprise me again.

Love the way you incorporate song lyrics with story

Khushi realization ...how she decide he's only for hers no matter what

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arshina223

@arshina223

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Absolutely marvellous piece of work.

The dialogues were not needed, your words did all the work.

Beautifully described their emotions, their feelings, their regrets and so much more.

beautiful!

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Often people say lovers speak an excusively language, one that is only understood by them, be it through their actions, mannerisms and most of all their heart..and as a writer you have conveyed it so masterfully through your words...one could say the song was written for your love story...

I would love to read YNTOO...