Never Alone... (Part 13: page 23)

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Me first me first!!

Resss😎

Unress! Yaaay you wrote the second chapter! 👍🏼

First of all soo sorry for the late comment! You already know my views on the first chapter, so here's the second chapter ke comments😉

I must say I am loving Zara to bits 😳 She does seem like an innocent and bubbly girl hehe

The beginning was so well-written. Hehehe the alarm clock bit sounds like moii😆

I have to snooze my alarm at least three times!

Jenny and Zara's relationship seems so nice ..waiting to see you pen down more of their scenes 😃

Alsoo I love how he calls her little devil😃

LOL the scene at the terrace.. that was so unexpected.. I was like whaaa😲

And then he appears in front of her😳😳

Love the first convo between Ryan and Zara..damn I love them already😃

Bechara Ryan..how could he not appear in front of her and save her! 😳

Ahhh Zara is the next one why why whyy.. ok I know why😉

Summerdale college.. I started dreaming about the place as soon as I read the name sighh😳 What a pretty name😃

Yaay he is going to be their tenant! Can't wait to read the next part..update sooonish please😳

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904129

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awsumm Heli Di..😊 The story is progressing so so good..❤️ I love the realtionship of Zara-Aunt Jenny.. The way u have described it was beautiful..!! Not typical sugar-coated relation but still love each other. And Ryan, I love this gurdian angel! The way he cares for Zara..Oh Em Gee! I soo wish to have a gurdian angel lyk him..❤️ And Ofc Zara is a sweetheart..❤️ Ryan had to present himself cuz Zara's life was in danger.. I loved their hug..❤️❤️ Sweeettt!! So Ryan presented himself as a new admission.. Hot Male Angel !!! 🤣 Zara has surely hit her head hard..🤣 Crazy Gurl! But God and Michael are not happy wid Ryan's revealtion to the world. Lucifer is behind Zara as she is soul! But I like in midst of all this they are bounding very well as frnds.. So he wud be staying in her house only? Cool! Thanxx fr pm.. Continuee Soonz!

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BitterBerry

@BitterBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Woww! That was fantastic!
Never thought Ryan would come out this soon, its exciting.
Ohh! Thats the suspence? I know there are more but this time you didnt made me wait more😆!

She couldnt notice thesmall extraordinary changes but could have dream of his? Now thts interesting and drawing his face! 😉, think she will fall for him!

Loved that terrece part🤣he wanted to push Denise coz he put Zaras life in danger.

And then Zaras funny reply and complementing him! LOL!
Loved all the tiny little things he was doing for her till now.

Now I am scared for what Mike said! Another mistake n he will be away!😲! And why Lucian Army needs a pure innoscent soul? Mike didnt cleared it out with him!

Waiting for next part!
Continue soonz dii!

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Awesome update Api.

This story is going too good..

I am a big fan of paranormal and this one is a wonderful one.

I am really loving the way you are giving twist and turn.

And the way you expressed every emotions and relations..

Kudos to you.

Thanks for PM and plliishshh con soonz..

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Unreserved my comment on page 3😳

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Atisha Khan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Well well, Ryan's cute devil called him angel!! 😳

Starting was beautiful...Ryan's little chores being an integrated part of Zara's life that she never noticed it.

And Jenny's strict love... don't know why I'm loving this iron lady.

So finally, Ryan made his bit of mistake... and no he is with her... in blood & flesh!

do continue...it's going interesting.

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

thanks for the pm 😊

um too busy these days so i'll not be able to follow this story... sorry 😔

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

wow!! awesome !!

loved it

Zara..little devil! love her! so innocent!

Ryan..the angel..so sweet!

now Ryan is visible to everyone.. he set up everything nicely!

waiting to read more

do continu soon

thanks for pm

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

res

unres
hi Heli
this story is taking a beautiful turn
I loved the not so cheesy relationship of Zara and Jenny
Ryan is like a shadow to Zara

I didn't expect him to come out in open all of sudden
bt that ws a pleasant surprise

the terrace scene ws really funny

now when Ryan is out in open the story is going to b even more interesting

i guess Zara is already falling for Ryan

continue soon.
Birdie

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