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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm liking this story more with each update. U never disappoint!

I think I'm goin to enjoy reading bout tika man & his kid getting to know each other.

Amidst all this emotional frenzy Pia with her sardonic remarks is engaging and provides a pressure release.The caricature of Pushkar is a good foil to all the intenseness. Loved Reya's overture of acceptance of her dad in the car. And ofcourse JnB & their silent & not so silent sizzle make yummy read. Poor Ranveer & Jai,missed out of a precious 6 yrs of their kids life and the poor kids bereft of that special something only dads can bring into their existance.

Relished it absolutely.Looking forward to the next. Thanks.
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Posted: 18 years ago
Another fabulous update, I really enjoyed it, a true entertaining fiction!! Please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
OH my oh my...Pia and that too good?! 😆 😆 😆
anyways great update! im glad that your Pia is good and helping the lost lovers here! she really is an interesting character here...now for others...
lets see JB...well i guess it is like the new start of the old story...i don't know if that made sense..but wat i mean to say is that they are back to square one but in this case Bani is a little bold and since they are parents now...this should be interesting...

now Rano and Ranveer...they really are something...at least they understand eachother unlike JB...but lets see what happens...

the kids are just truly adorable! i love Reya and Rohan already...i think Sheena Billi you have competition with my client here: Saby...her Kabir is so adorable with the Baby talk...so u might want to show something extra ordinary...lol 😆 😆

plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
an update before it is due!!!!!!!!!just luv the acid remarks of the walia men,they've had enough shocks to last them a lifetime. reya was so cute, giving jai that awful candy!i liked rohan and ranveer, their first meeting was much smoother than his mamaji's! looking forward to jigyasa's punishment..
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Posted: 18 years ago
SwatiNarang:
Dear Swati, Thanks Yaar, Thukral is petting me and Taz; LOL - Got to tell my hubby about this one, he territorial, Billa is 'J' - You do hate the reptile yaar.. 😕 I understand perfectly. RanRanRohan's story continues, some explanations needed. JW bhi na, not able to control, afterall it's his wife, damnit!! And the day Bani sleeps with another guy that would be something... 😳 😳 😳 You know she is JW's and He is Bani's....LOL, you want Bani to break her self-control? 😆 😆 😆 We will see how that will work out.

Pooks: Yep, I think they had their fill of truths in the last few days. Some one needs to cut Jai to size, and who better than Pia, caustic...He is still mad that she ran away - keeps forgetting that he made her do it. Jigs is not suspecting a thing so far. She has to look forward to some real fun stuff. Reya is cute.

Punjabi#1: Hey Rimpy, thanks yaar! Next one is in progress, but going slow...

Ash9: Ash, Pushkar is acting like he did in the beginning of the KS, Jai is trying to please his daughter, poor guy...

Jigna_07: Sorry Jiggle, I thought you will see it anyway, you know me na, I don't send updates to anyone, too much work.... 😕 😕 😕 Jai is too blunt with Pushy, and Reya is getting along with Jai finally. DOn't worry, he is only whispering in Bani's ear - he knows better than to say anything in front of Reya.

Shree: Shree, thanks yaar, and it's actually early yaar.

Janu_2006: Janu, thanks for your comments, did you see the dedication for you?



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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam84


main yehaan hoon yehaan hoon yehan hoon yehan.....ab main yehan nahin hoon nahin hoon nahin...main laut ke aaoongi...abhi thoda paka ke ati hoon...abe khana... 😆

Kya Pakaya tha, you didn't even invite me?😭😭😭

dekho as promised i am back...😉

Glad you are back!!😃😃😃

Haila time for truth...so now all is out in the open...loved it when Ranveer asked if jai got punched or not...I wud luv to do the honors...😆

LOL, Dahling, just wait in the line, I have had many offers for that honors...

Pia gave it to Jai...good...but i dont like Pia she is OK here tho...

LOL, Yep - I hate her in real KS, but thought that I will make her different.

Haila Rohan Kanhai...reminds me of gavaskar...he named his Son Rohan Jaivishwa Gavaskar...haila behara bacha four great men in him...that is y he dint click...

Poor Kiddo, so many famous people to follow, no wonder he didn't click...

And wot is this bout eating woman…haila we look good n all they wanna do is eat us…uff men kab samghenge wot we want…lol


Sammy, question, what do women want, LOL, I have no idea about these matters, care to enlighten me?😆😆😆

The Ria Jai interaction was so good...lmao she gave Jai a candy that also which Rohan found...poor guy...can so imagine is expression...


Yeah, serves the Khadoos right - Reya is going to bring him to his knees.


and he is otta control when he is wid Bani...can understand boy no nothin for 6 yrs...cough cough...i still have it...am takin syrup...will soon be better...


LOL, this persistent cough needs to be checked by Dr. Veer!! For pests, only anti-biotics work!! 😆😆

Aur ye kon sa driver hai...fire karo yaar gadi chala raha hai ya amusement park ka see-saw....kabhi idhar koi gira...kabhi udhar...JW ko problm ho raha hai...😆spl wid Bano rani fallin on him....


I think JW paid him to do that, or may be it's the Bangalore roads!

And Jai behave...no licking off cnady shandy....ur daughter is there god dammit...Baad main karna😆



I think he is just teasing Bani Rani....he better not misbehave in front of his daughter...😡😡

chalo bhai main jaoon ab....thoda kaam dhaam karoon...

Ha, tu chal, jaake kaam kar! Kya kaam hai?😕😕😕

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sheena,

How are you doing? After a long, long time today I got to read the chapters I had missed...They are absoluteley amazing....Loved reading each of them a lot and the best part there exists no more secrets egarding the kids...J&B will always remain a favorite, but I particularly liked reading about Ranveer and Rano....not many concentrate on others except J&B...

I know over the months, the readership has decreased, but I do religiously read the chapters whenever possible and definitely try and leave a comment...me will impatiently wait for the next update.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sheena,
It's been so long since I commented and I'm truly really sorry for not being able to comment. It's been so hectic with two jobs and college, barely get time for myself.

Anyways, wanted to let you know that I have been catching up with your ff and been loving it. Damn, talk about being shot multiple times in the same minute eh? Truth after truth, that's gotta hurt. But I'm really happy that Ranveer now knows that Rohan is his son and vice versa.

I loved the simple conversation between Riya and Jai, its good that he's trying to bond with his daughter and really become involved in her life. i'm really looking forward to him becoming a family man in every sense.

I hope that BOTH Ranveer AND Jai will give their piece of mind to Jigayasa. She's destroyed so many lives. Can't you just get her murdered or something? I'm really looking forward to her punishment.

Again, very sorry for not having commented in so long. I do read it, just don't get time to comment.

Update soon.

Anam
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Posted: 18 years ago

Omg Sheenu; I'm so sorry!!

For some reason I've not been able to keep on top of KS FFs!😕…..I have about another 60 in my favourites list!😵…..Eeeks; I'll probably catch up when everyone's finished!😆

Urm; anyways…

(Sorry for the scattered thoughts…..I'm munching on a bowl of fruit and alternating between reading your FF and writing these comments😕)

Warning: Long, useless and boring comments coming through😈*

Part 35:

As usual; a great poem/quote to start the FF of with👏……Honestly honey, you make me think in the summer holidays!😆

Aah; Bani's feelings are very similar…..they remind me of how you put out Jai's emotions….was that intentional?!🤔

You have both idiots suffering without need and blaming it on each other…..Love is blind but it leaves you incapable to think as well I guess…

I loved how you brought out the change in Bani!👏……believable and really well done!…And wow; she's gone in to writing!……I remember Saby's FF now!…..I hope the JW in this one wins her back like he did in her FF!🤔

I think it involved a lot of kissing….Ooh; I wouldn't mind that!😉

But I'm upset to see that she gave up riding – I really enjoyed reading those parts.

As Bani goes through the past; it starts to make sense – even to someone like me!😆

I love the fact that the three sisters stuck together and battled it out holding hands👏….even to this today I think that was the true essence of KS; I guess they thought of it as a better idea to replace sisterhood with a strangely successful love story….🤔

But you've brought out the emotions wonderfully without saying a lot👏….What I loved the most was the fact that even after it all; Bani still feels something for Jai (and he does to – just waiting for him to show it!😉)

Have we been introduced to Vikrum before?!🤔

Short term memory loss here so you'll have to fill me in!😆…..as usual I love the fact that we have someone beside Bani – may be not romantically involved but hopefully it'll come in useful later!😃

The way you've crafted each sisters life is wonderful – strong independent women is something I've always liked!

And of course; Rohan and Reya sound adorable!😳

Whoohoo; Jai again!😃

Aww; cute little five year olds on ponies!….I can imagine that….strangely that little girl reminds me of BD!…..Bani's daughter by any chance?!😕

The little boy – definitely somehow related to Rano!….I still remember that epi and Rano's cheeky conversation with him.😆

Aww; bless him!…..who'd want to 'whoop' a cutie pie like him?😒

I was right – it is Reya!…..Not much of a surprise though!😆

And Sheenu; believe me when I say the loss of interest is momentary…..after you finish this FF you'll have ideas swimming in your head!😉

Chapter 36:

Aah; I'm loving this girl already!….she has a determined and wild side to her which reminds me of JW…...

The part with him flushing with anger was interesting……a sort of parental instinct or just a need to ensure that the kids are safe?

Again; I love Reya!…..trying so hard to put up a brave front…..definitely taken after her father!

Haila; she kicked him in the shin!……..wait; I'm going back to another FF………Honey; did one of his kids to something similar in your first FF?!

No wait; that was Sameer punching JW…..

LMAO; I loved that FF…….

Urm; lets get back to candle….

Aww; Rohan is so damn cute!!……..For some reason I'd like him to be JW's son as opposed to Ranveer's……..oh well; I think he'll make a good dad as well!

Again Reya silently challenging JW – woah; this girl reminds me way to much of my sister!!

The blending of the shadows was very ingenious…..I guess it symbolises JB together?!

And I loved how JW had a nervous reaction to it all first!

And they come face to face!

Whoohoo!!

After three tormenting parts; we finally get to imagine JB in the same frame!

Cool; calm and composed from the outside – bursting with energy and nerves from the inside!

Woah; they're actually communicating!!………that's a welcome change for two of the most loved duffers……..harsh but at least everything's out in the open…….and as much as I love Jai; I find myself siding with Bani……..temper tantrums can put you in a lot of trouble!!

But I loved his come back – haila; why can't we see this side of JW in the show?!

But am I missing something here – Pia had a baby?

Huh?

I'm guessing he thinks it's Pia's instead of Rano's?

And he declared his love……….urm; not the best way to do it but it'll have to do – for now!

Loved his determination to take his wife and daughter back……..didn't expect anything less!!

And as you wanted the good, the bad, and the ugly…..here you go!

Good: It's your FF!!

Bad: Urm; no sign of Sanyasi?!….where is he?!!

Ugly: To short!…..seriously!!

Chapter 37A:

"The father of a daughter…"

Woah; that is so true!!….hehe; fits JW and his daughter perfectly – they are so alike!

Love Jai's determined order…….but ouch; he could have been a little more gentle to bechari Bani 'all I am interested in is my daughter' – not the best thing to say when you want to win your woman over.

Aaah; I'm so proud of Bani!….at least she told Reya about her father and his family – see Jai; it doesn't hurt to be a little more understanding!

Loved Reya's reaction!!……..anything else and I would surely have been disappointed!!…….but I'm sure she'll come to love him in time – everyone does!

I loved the conversation that followed………but; urm; I thought they were fighting?…..no, seriously – where did Bani seducing him come from (and was he complaining?!…..Men!)

*Faint*

A kiss!!

Do I need to say anything else?!

Chapter 37B:

Aww; a part dedicated to me!!……..thankoo jaanu!!

(Even though I suck at replying to PMs and keeping up with FFs!)

The same poem – now one of my favourites!

Woah; are we back square one?!

Tut, tut – do these two do anything other than fight!…….no wait; they do – the kiss passionately when they get tired of talking!!

Haila; poor Bani!!

I hope JW feels bad for what he did – but I know he'll get her back!!…….my munna's sweet like that you see!!

(P.S. Waiting for that scene where he hangs Roshni on a pole!)

Aww; bless little Rohan!!…..(He's joining my list jaan…..Munna; Sanyasi; Natuu and then Rohan!)

Don't worry bacha you'll find out who your daddy is soon (Hint, Hint)

Tsk, Tsk……..JW should no better than stoop to bribery!…..but hey; he's not a businessman for nothing!

Ooh; Jai squaring his jaw!!………does that mean he's unhappy with Sanyasi?

Eeeks; I hope not!

Chapter 37C (Urh; how many parts are there exactly?)

'Forlorn, My Love, No Comfort Near' – Urm; a love poem…….the voice has lost his love and it's about his feelings?!

Aaaaah – Sanyasi!!

Haila; I'm so happy!!………Finally!!

Oh; Love how you kept his current look – but of course here I'm imagining him to look quite sexy!

Aditya – another character I love!!…….But he doesn't need to be worried for his son anymore; I'm sure Sheenu auntie's got something lined up for our dear Sanyasi!

And of course – they have reached their destination!

Woah; a girl just parked in his spot?! – and he's getting her car towed away!?…..Aah; I see that he's inherited his mamaji's short temper!

Haila – where did Rano tapak from!?……..Ooh, no worries – a quicker meeting!!………Okie; so she's the one to park in his spot……..aah; I think he'll forgive her!!

And wow – what a meeting!!…….So they're in a conference room – not the most romantic place to be in lying in your lovers arm but hey; I guess we can work with that!

Omg; wait – you did not just stop there?!!

No worries; I'll just scroll down………I have it word you see!

Chapter 37D (Haila; when will Chap 37 end?)

Ooh; Adi's a smart egg – caught on quickly!……..can imagine him with that boyish smile on his face watching RanRan!

And Omgggggggg – I thought Sanyasi was meant to be a – a sanyasi!?…….as in pure and all!!…….those aren't the kind of things a Sanyasi says!

Loved the fact that his eyes were on her throughout the whole of the meeting!……..and that man on his right might want to run before Ranveer gets his hands on him!

Ouch; someone waiting for her in Bangalore – Rohan?!……But I'm sure Ranveer doesn't know that!

Aww; poor Rano!……and Ranveer's actually grinning about her car being towed away…….well; I guess it gives him more time with her!

Oooh……..loved him kissing her fingers!

Honey; why are the men in your FFs so good?!

But he really should control his temper!……..I'm sure he won't want to strangle Rohan when he actually meets him!

Okie; so Rano had full intentions about allowing Ranveer to know about Rohan………but he doesn't……..Urh; I'm guessing Jigyasa has a hand in all this?!………Grr!!

I absolutely love JW trying to get information out of Bani….

[Quote]Don't underestimate my intelligence, Bani! I don't like you withholding information from me."

Pity he didn't actually say that in KS!….God knows we might not have had to see at least have the twists that the Kreatives showed.

Waiting for the evening out – it'll be nice to see Jai interacting with the kids!…….ahem; and maybe even Bani to!

Part 38:

Ooh; I can imagine a cute little Reya – just like her mother…..but seriously; he should keep his eyes away from Bani – it's getting him to excited!

Haila; it's Jai's birthday!

Happy Birthday to you;

Happy Birthday to you;

Happy Birthday Dear Munna;

Happy Birthday to you;

Omggggggg – thawing's definitely started!!……aww; I can't wait for them to be a happy little family!

Okie; fireworks started again!

But at least it's a fair fight…….two stubborn people battling it out!!

LMAO; Bani calling him a bully……and how can anyone hate him?!…Haila; Impossible!

Woah – Bani; being chained to the bed……….Lol; it reminds me of Jai in Tazo's FF!

Aww; bowling scene was cute!!…..Rohan's growing on my by the second and even the small JB contact with Jai helping her to bowl was😳

Love the relationship that Rano and Jai share!!…..sweet; and I guess now the truth will come out in the open.

Ahem; no comments from here onwards except 😳

Chapter 39:

Aaaah; I love Aditya!

Ranveer talking about Rano with his father was sweet - but I can't believe the office actually has bets placed on him!

Oh well; I guess it's not everyday you see your stern boss with his lady love!

It might look like I'm lacking with comments honey; but it's kinda hard to keep recycling praise!…..Tooooooo good!!👏

Rohan – adorable as usal!…..seriously; like Jai he reminds me more of Sahil than Ranveer!

Loved the idea of the pillow fight scene – cute!

And Jai in the shower…….I guess it's kind of hard to keep Bani out of his mind……..but he really should trust her more – lack of trust was what got him in this in the first place!

Confrontation between Jai and the three sisters was what was needed……..I'm guessing Pia's turned Cynical over time?!…..well at least she's not a negative character here!!

And; ahem – I thought JB were meant to be fighting!?…….

Whoohoo – Ranveer's in Bangalore?!

I'm guessing the kid's Rohan!!…..But hey; you didn't need to stop there!

Part 40:

Aww honey…..Just look at those who actually read your FF – we all love it and that's all that matters!

Okie; so the part started of all………..but where did that talking come from?!

Grr – that could have waited!

Lol; loved how Bani stood up to Jai and this time it was her who dictated the terms………Poor Jai – but he'll get a taste of his won medicine now…..just not to much; I still love my munna!

(P.S. Can Jigyasa come in front of Bani – just once?!……..I want to see Bani keeping her promise!😈)

Loved Bani giving him breakfasts wetly and walking away…….and of course; Jai's determination to get her back!

*Sigh*………Once again I find myself wishing that I could see this version of KS on TV- though it probably would have to be moved to much later time slot!😉

Rohan's meeting with Ranveer – again; cute!

I half expected him to be mad but I guess Rohan's to cute to be at the receiving end of anyone's anger!

Lurved their little conversation…….they seem to get on fine; I just wonder what'll happen when he finds out that Rohan is actually his son!

LMAO; loved Ranveer's comment about his own parents representing Tom and Jerry!

But I'm sure bechara Sanyasi is confused by now!

Haila; jai punched him!!…….Go my Sheru!….But I feel bad for Ranveer – twice in one day!

The convo was interesting…..poor Ranveer; he's having a harder time dealing with it than Jai!……..and with Pia and Jai there I doubt he can swoop Rano in his arms and kiss her!

I hope this doesn't turn ugly!

Chapter 41:

Wow; not as bad as I thought it would be……I kinda of expected Rano to snap at him but I guess Ranveer's to confused to take all that!

Loved Pia thinking about Ranveer's look for her new models!

With a look like that they would surely be a hit!

And Ranveer said it right; Rohan's to adorable not to like…..the kiss comment was cute!

Ranveer's emotions brought out so wonderfully!!...aww jaanu; you are to good!

Reya sounds so cute in her clothes…….but Jai needs to keep his eyes of Bani!.......I hate to say it but he's an old man and there's only so much his body can take!

Oooh; Bani's reaction is slightly similar!

Tsk, tsk…..not in front of the children!

Ahem – but he needs to keep a hold of his tongue…..Gosh that was harsh!

And now Ranveer's even more confused!

As for Pia – we need a guy for her……that way her cynical nature will be distracted – but I do like her character in your FF!

That said and done – whoohoo; Pushky's here!......I almost forgot about him!

Loved Jai's comment……even better; Loved Pia's comeback!

But; ahem…can't help but notice his sudden interest in Pia!

And of course – they seem to get on just fine as well!

Urgh – I hate those little curves in the roads…..they are so damn annoying and I always end up falling my sister who pushes be back….

Urh – anyways….

Jai's interaction with Reya was cute!!.....and is Bani feeling jealous because Reya's paying attention him and not her…….or is she jealous because Jai is paying attention to his daughter and not his wife?!

Aww; loved Reys ordering Jai around – definitely her father's daughter!!......Chocolate scene – honey; where do you get these scenes?!

Wonderfully done and I love Jai's teasing Bani!

And of course; Can't wait for Jigyasa's punishment!

Though Iwould have preferred Jai slapping her silly…..as they say – latho ke bhooth; batho se nahi maante.

Phew – finally finished!!

But I'm sorry if I don't go back to being a regular updater – I have to forums to handle so it might be a little hard!

Also apologise for the lack of emoticons......I kind of got lazy after the first part!😕😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sheena,
I have been silent reader of this FF. The chocolate scene in the last update was too good.

Looking forward to the next part.

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