Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #4 [ Completed ]

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#351

Ek peek-a-boo ke khel ne zindagi ko gulzar kar diya...

Arnav aur khushi they ajnabi unko mila diya...

Dono bane they ek duje ke waastey...

toh Rab ne dono ko unki qismat mein likh diya...

Dono they sahil ke do kinarey, jinka milna tha mushkil..

Arnav ne dushwaar raston ko asaan kar diya...

Ban ke Prince Charming, Khushi ko apni Princess bana liya...

Aur arnav ki family ne bahein khol kar Khushi ko apne dil mein basa liya...

Safar itna haseen jis mein haseen doston ka sath...

Manzil ko jis ne unki char chaand laga diya...

Bandh gaye bandhan mein Khushi aur anrav..

Rab ne unki jholi ko khushiyun se bhar diya...

Kriya pari ne unke zindagi ko aur bhi khubsurat bana diya..

Payal aur summer ne bhi sath nibhane ka ehed kar liya...

Aur yun Pee-a-boo ka khel khatam hua...

Jis ne humare dil ko moh liya... 🤗

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Vandy Vandy Vandy! Uff! Main toh jaise hoon hi nahi

You wrote mature content! 😲

Res for the rest

Edited:

This was a Cindrella story with neither villains nor tricky twists of fate.

Every girl wants a Prince Charming like Arnav who is ideal in every way that counts, including the family he comes from. Arnav had it all and he saw to it that Khushi has it all too but not out of charity. He supported her in a way that built her confidence, career, and relationships with family and friends. Not that she was wanting in any of these areas. But with Arnav, she bested herself. Yeh Arnav mujhe de de Thakur

Shyam ki toh! 😡 I liked this fighting/ aggressive Payal. She learnt to survive in this world on her own as her own woman. Sumer compliments her perfectly. Caring and goofy. Whattay balance!

Poor Anjie! In love with a man who loves someone else. Poor Aakash! In love with a woman who loves someone else. Two negatives make a positive. Thank you for bringing these two souls together 😊

I have always been fond of Supriya Pilgaonkar and I could very well imagine her as Arnav's mom. You couldnt have chosen better

Your creativity shone in the selection of the wonderful, coordinated rich outfits. However, you outshone yourself in the descriptions of the various spots in India and abroad ⭐️

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#353

blissful ending! finally the family is complete in all sense! arnav and khushi lived happily ever after! i used to eagerly look forward to every update!

am gonna miss this stry like hell! if u r gonna take a break then do so but do come back with a bang! looking frwrd to more f ur stories! dont make us wait for long !

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Perfect ending to the perfect story 👏 ...I loved the way you incorporated each important character into this finale including jhas. Very well written story with very positive vibes in it 😊 . I love each song you have used throughout the story!! Will wait for your next story for sure 😊 . Till than have fun 😊

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Brilliant story...thanks for the PM

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#356

I m going to miss PAB... 😔... Will miss Arnav's love, care and above all desperation for Khushi... Will miss khushi's innocence, her sweet smile and her famous blush... Will miss Sumer and Arnav banter, Sumer's jokes, Payal teasing, Anjali's excitement... Love them all...

Epilogue 2 is simply amazing... Everyone is finally happy and content in their life with their love beside them... What else one could want from life...

Thank you so so much for writing this beautiful story... 🤗... Will wait for your return... Till then happy reading...😊

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#357

PAB was FAB

Just what an arshi fan wants

with right amount of positivity, romance, friendship, companionship, overdose of love (no complaints there) and very minimal evilness, justice duly delivered. Although it was a little difficult to visualize Akash with anjie, at the end of the day all that matters is everyone is happy.

What strikes the most is the optimism that flows beautifully throughout the fairytale. And it ends too on a beautiful message on adoption.

PAB is a celebration of love and no one could have done justice to it like you have done Minty. Love you. Stay blessed my dear.

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Last comment on this one!

I can imagine what Sumer must be going through seeing his girl being surrounded by all those useless elites. But the true love and deep understanding they have shared over the years helped them stay bonded despite the challenges. Seeing them married and happy makes me very happy. I only hope Sumer did not forget to eat in the hustle-bustle of his wedding.

Akash has finally manned up. I understand convincing Khushi and seeking her forgiveness wouldn't have been easy but then all his efforts seem to be worth since he has his best friend back and also someone he can lovingly cherish. And I am glad he doesn't know about Arnav accepting him. Thoda aur pareshan hone do AR ko!

Now coming to our beloved couple, their story has been nothing less than a fairytale and they rightfully deserve ever bit of it. What they have done for their family members, for their employees, for the kids at Ashadaan and for our little Kriya is beyond words and in return they deserve the overwhelming hapiness of parenting their own baby, of raising their own little angel. Inko kisi ki nazar na lage.

Take a bow!

Beautifully written Mints!

Will miss reading this. 😊