Aaslok the opposite of love part 12 18/10/14 - Page 55

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lively_roshani

she is perfectly fine due to her lovely daughter's care😆
i came back after assuring that she is absolutely fine or not...

my hometown is haryana
i am livein delhi for job and studies😊

i know very well about daughter's care,bcz my mom also got 2 lovely daughter's for her😳😆
so u r from haryana,ok dear😃
where is next update😉is there any updates today...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DEVU.NAIR

i know very well about daughter's care,bcz my mom also got 2 lovely daughter's for her😳😆
so u r from haryana,ok dear😃
where is next update😉is there any updates today...

yes
daughters are the precious gift from god to parents
yes i will update tonight \
it almost ready just few things left 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lively_roshani

yes
daughters are the precious gift from god to parents
yes i will update tonight \
it almost ready just few things left 😊

@bold true👍🏼
ok waiting
Posted: 11 years ago
Roshani I am always a fan of or writing dear. I love them and I love the prologue tooo will read the res spoon and will comment for sure and or ff beyond the limit was fan honey the last chap was heart touring I cried a lot honey when shook died its a special story to meee
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashlok

Roshani I am always a fan of or writing dear. I love them and I love the prologue tooo will read the res spoon and will comment for sure and or ff beyond the limit was fan honey the last chap was heart touring I cried a lot honey when shook died its a special story to meee

thanks dear
i am very much overwhelmed by your love
thanks for liking beyond the limit
and yes that was a very special story for me also😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 8

She was so afraid to face Avdhoot. She only knew how everything became normal between them after the past incident but she didn't know that it will happen again in her life. She didn't want lover or husband in her life but she wanted her father again. Avdhoot was her father for her. Her only family after Neelabh. She called Neel and told him everything as she could not live without share all that to anyone.

Neelabh was her loving and caring brother, whom she assumed always a best friend before the siblings. When they came to stay with Malik family, she was very young to understand about a lose they had to bear. Neelabh was a quite mature child despite his age, he knew that from now they had to live with Maliks as they were their foster parents. He always felt that Malik family Showed more affection and right on Aastha then him which bother him very much as he didn't want to live on their mercy with her sister so long but he left shocked when he found out the whole truth.

It was shocking for him that his little and innocent sister was victim of malpractice like child marriage and his parents were also guilty in this same as Malik so he could not complain about this to anyone but he decided to make the things right. He left Malik home after he got insulted by Avdhoot when he confronted them. He tried to take Aastha with him but Aastha who was shattered after knowing all this denied coming with him.

She accepted it as her destiny. She loved the family very much and she always considered them as like her own parents.

Neelabh was so angry with Aastha due to her childish and stupidity but how long he could be angry with her after all she was his little doll so he decided to convince her slowly for come out from all this. He was waiting for the right person for her.

*********...**********

Shlok instructed his mans to keep eye on her 24x7. He could not meet her due to his plan against Ranjan. He didn't want to lose his game due to his little stupidity. He could not wait so long...

He decided to get over all the mess.

Till the evening Avdhoot malik emerged as a public hero as he exposed Ranjan Agnihotri misdeed but in reality Avdhoot was feeling stuck in all this mess. It was Shlok who called to media overnight on his identity and gave them all the evidence against Ranjan Agnihotri and exposed him publically without involving in the mess. All the credit went to Avdhoot Malik so that he was obliged to file the case and FIR against Ranjan. He could not take his feet back as Shlok didn't leave any choice for him.

Police arrested Ranjan under the charged of fraud and deception with public and shares holders of his company. He became bank corrupt over the night. He lost his everything. Now he was behind the bar. Shlok came out clean from all this, when media questioned him about his relation with Ranjan he put the last nail in coffin...

"He was my uncle but my father and my family disowned him... we didn't share any contact with him since then so don't try to connect me with such person... I am a mass leader and I am working always for public interest..." He gave a statement in very humble and innocent tone and walked out from the media crowd.

"Now time to look after my personal matter... I am coming my dear..." he thought about Aastha and smirked.

***********...***********

In next morning, he went to meet her at her collage but became disappointed when he got to know about her absence. She didn't come to attend the classes from last week. He recollected that it was exactly one week since he proposed her for marriage.

"Oh so its mean that I am not wrong... something is not so well with her..." he thought in his mind and left the place.

He went directly to her home as he could not wait anymore to meet her. He knew that Avdhoot was busy in the case so he must be in his office at the time. He pressed the doorbell. Aastha, who was all alone in home, came to open the gate but when she found him on the gate, she left shocked. She tried to close the gate on his face but it seemed he sensed about her plan so he didn't let her do this.

He pushed the door and dragged her inside with him. She became pale due to fear because of him. She didn't want to see or meet him. He held her both arms in his hands and saw her who was struggling to get her free from his clutch.

"Why are you here, my father told you that I cannot marry with you..." she tried to protest but he was staring her like he didn't pay any heed to her words.

"Are you listening what I am saying?" she confusingly saw him and asked.

"Yes I am listening what you are saying... but I am not believing..." He replied in his as usual calm manner.

"Leave my hand... otherwise I will shout..." she tried to warn him and tried to search any trace of fear on his face but he remained unaffected.

"I held your hand for lifetime... so don't dare to think that I will leave it easily..." he roared in anger now after seeing her resistance without reason.

"I don't like you... why don't you accept it..."she shouted in frustration as she could not tell him the reason of her denial, it was not good for the image of her father. She didn't want that people saw her father as a conservative mandarin criminal who didn't see the prospective of his wrong deed. She didn't want that people thought him a pervert who captured her into the lifelong loneliness cage.

Shlok saw her with clinched jaw "may I ask you why you don't like me... I am fed up now to hearing this line again and again so now please tell me the reason so that I can understand it properly..." he said every word with strain.

"I am not obliged to you for anything... now you can go..." she replied in curt tone and avoided the possible eye contact with him.

He left her with jerk. He stared her for some moment then walked out in furious way. She saw her hand which he held before some moment...she closed the door with thud and pinned herself to the door.

She was feeling if some tornado touched her... she remembered his words "I held your hand for lifetime..." she saw her hands in disbelief and babbled "I am not the one for you... you have to accept it..." she ran towards her room manically and locked herself inside. She accepted herself as a self imprisoned person who had no hope for future. She didn't have the right to see the dream in her eyes. She was so scared to think about Shlok for a moment due to her weak resistance against falling for him.

*********...*********

On the other side Shlok was fuming outside her home. He could not control if he dumped all the things in fire. How could she tell her so rudely like this? None could even try to speak in front of him and a tiny girl said him all this... she slammed her door on his face. It hurt his ego, but million dollar question was that why she rejected him in this harsh way.

"I am sure... she is rejecting me due to the man... her so called hero in the drama..." he thought and presumed that she was in love with Neelabh.

"Now Shlok this is the time for some action..."he told to himself and took his phone out from his pocket

"Yeah I want the man here until evening from anywhere... I am sending the information about him to you... take him to my farm house..." he ordered his man and cut the call

"Now Miss Aastha malik you have to confess what you are hiding..." he smirked...

**********...**********

"Who is Neelabh here?" a man asked and the person signaled towards him. The man went to him and asked

"Are you Neelabh verma...?" Neel saw them and nodded. The man signaled another man and they asked him to come with them

"But who are you..." Neel asked as he didn't know them

"Let's go with us... you will know everything..." the man said and Neelabh saw them in daring way

"I want to know here only..." he said fearlessly. The man looked him for some minutes and then asked

"O sahib you know well then us that what is your matter with our Sahib? Why he want to see you right now? We just follow the order so you have to come with us?" the man told him as much he knew

"Who is your Sahib?" he asked when the man said "Agnihotri Sahib..."

Neelabh was remain confused why Niranjan Agnihotri called him like this... he didn't think about Shlok so he went with them in their car.

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Edited by lively_roshani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. Thanks for pm

thanks and love ya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great update Rosh! Neel seems nice...
Felt so bad for Aastha, poor she, had to go thru a lot...
Now waiting fr wat Shlok is up to, wan to read more...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey great update dearest Roshni :D
So finally we got to know that aastha too feels something for him but doesn't dare to say it out loud :D
Too good to handle
I am neelabh will be helpful! Pls continue soon

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