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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: alyna

Really nice
hmmm abb mzaa aya sujal ko 😆 😆
kya kahey ga sujal..kya pyar ka zhar ho ga?dekhayee next part jo sara g late hee likhee gee

Dear really nice.keep dis hardwork.u no sara that really hard to write a story and continue and u r doing gr88 job. 😃 .If u want 2 earn name in dis field then Inshallah u will get success 😳 .

Muahhhhhhh 🤗

Alyna jee.. aisa mat kahein aap! plzzz..! Main jaldi post keroongi naa..😆😆

😆Ab kitna jaldi.. yeh main nahi jaantii..!😃

But.. thanks alot for ur comments...!! Really.. i feel on the cloud 9!😃

I really wanna write something in real now..!! Author banne ka bohat shauk hai mujhe... bachpan se....😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sara!...continue soon plzzzzz...can't wait 👏 ...by the way my name is misba 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey sara!...continue soon plzzzzz...can't wait 👏 ...by the way my name is misba 😊

Oh okay.. thanks Misba... m just gonna post the story abhii... wait for few mins..😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
Recap: Sujal takes kashish and muskaan for shopping…kashish asks him if he loves preeti or not…

Part 25.

Kashish: bohat pyaar kerte ho preeti se?
Sujal was shocked to hear this from Kashish!!
Sujal: (stood closer to her) kya kaha tumne? Main aur preeti se pyaar? (narrows his brows)
Kashish: main jaanti hoon Sujal…(starts walking aside) sab jaanti hoon main.. k tum aur preeti ek duusre se behad pyaar kerte ho..
Sujal was still shocked…listening to her quietly..
Kashish: maine preeti k liye tumharrii aankhon mein pyaar dekha hai sujal…
Sujal k chehra ka close up hota hai… his face flashed…. Usse kashish per ghussa araha tha…
Kashish:pehle shayad mujhe bhi yakeen nahi tha… lekin jab us din maine apni aankhon se dekha.. toh mujhe bhi yakeen hogaya k tum preeti se bohat pyaar kerte hoo…
Sujal: kya dekha tumne?? (says it straight forwardly..he wanted to know k kashish ko uske baare mein kya pata tha… makkaar toh wohh tha hee.. hehehe)
Kashish: jis din muskaan jeejee ki shaadi thi.. us din main preeti k ghar arahee thii…aur wahan aaker maine dekha.. k.. (tells him the whole scene)
Sujal: WHAT??? (he was shocked.. completely)
Kashish: apne pyaar ko aur mat chupao sujal… mat chupao…
Sujal: kya bakwaas karahee ho tum??( he was annoyed now)
Kashish: ek baar mujhse kaha hota… main khud preeti k papa se tumharii baat kertii… yun chup chup ker pyaar kerne ka koi faida nahi…
Sujal: tum apne hosh mein toh ho na kashish?? Tumhara dimaagi santolan theek toh hai na????
Kashish : haan Sujal…(LOL) main apne hosh mein hoon… ab tum sachayee mujhse na chupao.. plzz…(looks away)
Sujal: huh.. sachhayee?? (frowns)
Kashish: preeeti meri sab se achi saheli hai sujal… main usse bachpan se jaanti hoon.. wohh bohat jazbaati kism ki larki hai… agar usse uska pyaar na mila.. toh najaney wohh kya ker bethigii…(lagta hai kashish paagal hogayee haii.. hehehe…)
Sujal: what the hell…(shakes his head to and fro)
Kashish: plzz.. sujal.. plzz.. tum preeti se jaa ker uska haath maanglo.. (begged him)
Sujal: yeh.. kyaa kehrahee ho tum???? (didn't know what to say) haaath maanglooon…??
Kashish nods quickly…
Sujal: tum kaho toh taaaang maang leta hoon…
Kashish: huh??
Sujal: well… good night.. main sone jaraha hoon….
Kashish: plzz sujal (usse rokte huye)… meri wajeh se preeti ko saza mat do….. tumharii aur meri larayee mein preeti ki zindagi barbaad na keroo.. plzz.. shaadi kerlo usse.. plzz sujal…
Sujal: shut up Kashish!! Just shut up!! (said it quickly.. and full time ghussey mein)
Kashish chup hojaati hai after looking his ghusse waali condition…
Kashish: sujal…
Sujal: chup!! Ek dum chupp!
Kashish stared him…
Sujal: kisne kaha tumse k main preeti se pyaar kerta hoon? Haan? Kisne??
Kashish: maine khud dekha tha k tum…(says it slowly..)
Sujal: main kya haan?? Main kya??? Us din tumne joh bhi dekha tohh sirf tumhari aankhon ka dhoka tha… aur kuch nahi.. samjhee?
Kashish: dhoka? (surprised)
Sujal: haan.. dhoka… sach baat toh yeh hai k tab mujhe preeti bandage ker rahee thii.. kyunk mujhe chot lagi thi…
Kashish was stunned..
Sujal: tumne soch bhi kaise liya kashish.. k main preeti se pyaar kersakta hoon… kaise soch liya tumne???
Kashish looked down…
Sujal: main pyaar jaisee cheez mein yakeen hee nahi rakhta..'
Kashish looked up at him now…
Sujal: mere liye larkiyaan sirf time pass hain.. isse zyada kuch nahi… kuch bhi nahi…
Kashish looked away…
Sujal: aur preeti k saath bhi main time pass keraha tha… jaise baaki larkiyon k saath kerta hoon…
Kashish tension mein parh jaati hai…
Sujal: (faced her) aur tum najaney mere aur preeti k baarey mein kya kya sochrahee thii… how stupid of you…
Kashish glanced at him…
Sujal: bas.. itna hee jaanti ho mujhe?
Kashish usse dekh rahee thii…
Sujal: tum achi tarah se jaanti ho k Sujal kabhi kisi larki se pyaar nahi kersakta .. u know me.. isn't it?
Kashish nodded lightly…
Sujal sighed..
Kashish: im sorry sujal… mujhe pata nahi tha k…
Sujal: (interrupted) bas,, Kashish… ab tumhein mujhse maafee mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi...
Kashish remained quiet.. looking at him…
Sujal: kaafee raat hogayee hai… tum jaa ker sojao… subah tumne jaana hai…
Kashish: main bhool gayee thi sujal…. K larkiyaan tumhare liye sirf time pass hain..
Sujal glanced at her…
Kashish: sirf time pass… aur shayad… main bhi tumhare liye ek time pass hee hoon..
Sujal was shockled…
Kashish wahan se chali jaati hai… and sujal waheen khara rehta hai….still in tensed condition…
Sujal: (to himself) main toh khud bhi nahi jaanta kashish, k tum mere liye kya ho…


Saaree raat Kashish yehi sochrahee thi k usse itni badii galati kaise hogayee…. Pata nai kyun… usse mann hee mann mein khushi horahee thii k sujal preeti se pyaar nahi kerta…she felt happy…lol

Udhar room mein sujal bhi yehi sochraha tha k agar wohh kashish ki misunderstanding door na kerta , toh kashish humesha se yehii samajhti k sujal kitna bura insaan hai… aur wohh preeti se pyaar kerta hai…

Well.. isi tarah subah hojaati hai… it was 11 am in the morning…
Kashish was ready to leave… muskaan bids her bye…
Sujal ko aaj jaldi uthna parh jaata hai k cuz wohh kashish ko station tak chorne jaraha tha….kaise bataon k kitni mushkil se utha thaa!
Kashish: acha jeejee… main chalti hoon..
Muskaan: apna khayaal rakhna…
Kashish nods.. they both hugged and… started crying…
Veena consoled muskaan…
Sujal: agar aap donon behnein isi tarah roti rahein toh Kashish ki train miss hojayegii…
Kashish: okay jeejee.. main chalti hoon…(hugs her again)
Muskaan: apna khayaal rakhna!!

Sujal and Kashish leave for the railway station… it was 11:30 by now…
They both were in the car…
Sujal kept looking at kashish time after time.. but kashish didn't look at him…
Donon k beech khamoshii rahee… suddenly.. ek dum gaaree ko break lagti hai…
Screeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeccccccchh…!
Kashish: … kya hua?? (jhatka khaate huye)
Sujal: shitt.. lagta hai break down hogaya… (well koi break down nahi hua hota.. yeh sujal ki chalaaki hoti hai.. hehe.. wohh jaan buuj ker garee rok deta hai…lol)
Kashish: kyaa??(became tensed)
Sujal: shiv bhaiiya ne kaha tha k car repair kerwa lena lekin.. main bhool gaya…(jhuutaaa kahin ka..)
Kashish: ohh noo.. ab kya kerein? (becomes worried)
Sujal : sochne doo..(sochne ki acting kerta hai)
Kashish: sirf 15 minutes rehgaye hain…
Sujal: let me think na…
Kashish: tum isi tarah sochte rahogey aur meri train chuut jayegii…
Sujal: wait.. main kuch kerta hoon…(gets out of the car)
Sujal: yahan toh koi mechanic bhi nahi milne waala…
Kashish: (gets out too.. holding her luggage)
Sujal: yeh kya karahee hoo?
Kashish: main pedalll.. chal ker jarahee hoon…(starts walking)
Sujal: array yeh kya Kashish?? Wait keroo.. shayad koi solution mil jaye…
Kashish: agar main yahan kharee rahee toh koi solution nahi milne waala.. infact aur problem barh jayegii…
Sujal takes a deep breath…
Kashish: is liye .. m leaving bye!
Sujal: array.. ruko toh… tumhein andaaza bhi hai k yahan se station kitni door hai?
Kashish: jitna marzii door hoo..main jarahee hon.. (starts walking)
Sujal: GAWWDDD! Yeh larki nahi maanegii…ab isse kaise bataoon k garee kabhi kharaab huyee hee nahi!

Kashish yun hee sarak per chalrahee hoti… door door tak kisi ki garee nazar nahi arahee hoti… she keeps on walking…. Just then sujal comes on the same car.. and zorrr de horron deta hai…
Kashish: tummm??
Sujal: garee mein bethoo…(looks straight)
Kashish sits in the car…
Kashish: garee kaise theek huyee?
Sujal: bass hogayee…(holds the stearing wheel tightly)
Kashish: kya hum paanch minute mein station pohanch sakein ge??
Sujal: tum mere saath ho kashish… 5 mins mein kya… main tumhein 2 mins mein station tak pohanchaoonga…
Kashish smiles…

Well… sujal is tarah se garee chalata hai jaise koi aircraft hoo..hehe.. full speed u know..
They reach the station…
Kashish runs to the info department area..
Kashish: excuse me…
Man: jee?
Kashish: sundernagar ki train kab niklegi???
Man: wohh toh 5 minute pehle hee nikal gayee…
Kashish: kyaa??? (she was stunned)
Sujal uske peeche khara hota hai… and he gets upset as well…hehe.. acting ker raha hota hai upset hone kii… yeh sab usi ki wajeh se hua hota hai…

End of part 25.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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woooooooooooooooooooow..heheheh sujal dramebaz hehehe..loved him...awww. hehehehe........so kashish is back for aanother day?? hehehe....hope aj jhagre k bajaye koi aur ahem ahem baat ho jaye 😉 😉 😉 continue sooooooooooooon plz...heheh waise kashish preeti ko le kar chum hi ho gayi thi haahaha bechara sujal.......khair bechara bhi nahi hai.....as you said makar hehehehe...loved it yaar plz jaldhi likhna next part 😳 😳 muaaah
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow sara dear aweosme part yaaar loved it tooo tooo gooood ...awesome...awww naughty sujal chal abbbh dil ki baaat to batao....he likes kahsish uska dil keh raha hai lekin woh khud usseh deny karr raha hai... 😳 😳 😳 hope he tellls her soooon...continue sooon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
ahhahahahahaha....i lurved it....bhut fit thi!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sara awesome yaar !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 .........sujal is so shocked to heared those words from kashish mouth 😆 .....that he loves preeti 😭 .....kashish finally tells sujal what she saw at muskaan wedding day...leaving sujal angry 😡 , shocked 😲 ...n a bit surprised 😉 (coz y is kash feeling sad abt)......kashish said that sujal should marry preeti 😭 ...n sujal is all shocked ..... beechara shock pe shock 😆 .....he tell kashish what happen that day....n says that she know's him better then that....n kash is looking down gultily 😭 ....after some time kash say that she know's that girl are a pass time for him as...and also she is a pass time 😭 ...this last sentence gives him the buggest of all the shockes 😲 .....sujal thinks that even he doesn't know what kashish for him 😉 ...(realise soon 😊 ).........in the morning sujal is going to drop kashish to the train station....when he stop the car with a jerk 😛 .....he says that the car has break down and kashish get tensed as she doesn't want to miss the bus 😭 .....sujal and his ideas to stop kashsih from leaving 😆 😊 😉 ......when they reach there kashish find out that the train left 5 minutes ago 😉 ....kashish is all tensed 😕 ...n sujal is acting that he's sad, but inside he's really happy that kashish is not leaving 😉 😆 😊 ......wordefull story sara .......keep it up......continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sujal: tum kaho toh taaaang maang leta hoon…
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Lovely part!!!

Hehehe!! Sujal ghar aaker kya bolega.........hehe ...usse khoob daant padne wali hai 😆

continue sooon!!!

luv,
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sara coooooooooolllllllllllll part 👏 . really loved it 😉 . that was hilarious when he says taang bhi maang leta 🤣 . anyway now kashish's train miss and that's going to be more rocking than ever 😆 . ho sakta hai that sujal kashish ko sundernagar chodne jaye aur aise mein woh usse aur pyaar kar bethe 😳 . god really eager to know how things will go on after this 😉 . continue soon plz...... can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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