Aaslok the opposite of love part 12 18/10/14 - Page 26

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Thankyou for the lovely update it seems as if its righjt out of the mills & boons book. A fascinating read 😃
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I like a jealous lover but not completely a villain. He has to have a hard exterior but a soft interior side.

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Originally posted by: KareenaIPKKND2

Thankyou for the lovely update it seems as if its righjt out of the mills & boons book. A fascinating read 😃

thanks dear if you feel like this😊
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Originally posted by: KareenaIPKKND2

I like a jealous lover but not completely a villain. He has to have a hard exterior but a soft interior side.

well i am thinking only about not confirm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love how you are able to captivate your readers minds by transforming an ostensibly good guy into villany! Unless a virtuous woman like Astha uses celestial indigestion to set him back instead of sending him down the slippery road where his evilness is unable to escape, the point of no return.
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Posted: 11 years ago
No, pls not a complete villain..
Its ok if he harms astha's father.😆
But, wanna see J shlok & a possessive lover to astha who cannot think of hurting her!
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Originally posted by: ..Neha..

No, pls not a complete villain..
Its ok if he harms astha's father.😆
But, wanna see J shlok & a possessive lover to astha who cannot think of hurting her!

ok but he will hurt her father it is obvious that she will be also hurt
is'nt it
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no no...i do not want him to harm aastha...otherwise he may b a bas***d
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no no...i do not want him to harm aastha...otherwise he may b a bas***d

did i say that he will hurt Aastha
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Part 5

"do you really like the girl or there is something hidden in it Mr. leader cum businessman..." Niranjan curt tone touched his ears. He looked instantly towards him first time,

" you know it is look like that I am not talking to my father... but a critics who always examine my all things..." he said in angry voice, Niranjan didn't bother his tone as he became use to of that.

they didn't share a personal communication after the death of Anjali Agnihotri. they were so close to each other until her demise, he was too lively in his life and thought his father as like best friends. His laughs made the house heaven and they enjoyed sweet and sour life but suddenly everything became change with the death of Anjali who connected them with each other. She was the only bridge who connected to the two corners but everything shattered with her death. He was very happy go lucky boy who didn't care about life but after her mother death he changed in ruthless man overnight who thought that his father values and principles killed her mother. This one realization changed everything between them. They became strangers with each other. One stood with his values and principles and other one wanted always only showed that everything was only power. Their clash of thought made them like enemy. Niranjan always became the hurdle between his wrong deeds but he could never stop him as he became more powerful than him. slowly as time passed Niranjan became the low profile person. He left his most of social life and became solitary person with the memories of Anjali. Sometimes Shlok came to meet him but they always ended up in stand against with each other. Today also history was repeating itself

"so tell me just one thing... would you go to their home or not?" Shlok asked again at one last time

"I will surly go but you have to assure me that it is your pure decision and you will care the girl..." Niranjan told with sighed but in very strong way

"I don't need to assure you anything dear father... if I will have to assure something then I will assure to that girl not any other... you take it just like that my happiness is hidden in this and I am sure that as a father you always want to see me happy or isn't it?" he was great player of words so Niranjan could not get any clue from his talk.

" yes dear son I always want your happiness and if you are right this time then I will do what you want..." atlast he became agreed on his demand.

"ok so I invited them for dinner and I want that you should call them also... and for this you have to come to my home..." Shlok planned everything and it looked like he just informed him. Niranjan looked him instantly on his demand

"I agree that I will call them but not in your mansion but in this home... our home..."he smiled towards Shlok who just clinched his jaw to hear that but composed himself quickly as it was his quality that he was very fast in hiding his emotions from others.

"ok I am ready..." he replied in very calm tone and Niranjan left surprised on his calmness. He felt the signals of storm behind it.

***********...***********

"Kaka everything is set to play... you have to just wait and watch..." he told to the anxious Ranjan who was worried for his project which stuck due to Avdhoot.

"how can I only wait and watch... I am trusting you and my all hopes are depends on you... I invested my whole fortune on this project if it will fail then I will come on road so you have to solve it at any cost..." he pleaded to him as his whole life depended on Shlok.

"kaka you know me when I want to win then I win..." he said with smirked on his face.

"now you should leave as I also have to go somewhere..." Shlok said and got up from the couch with lit cigarette in between his fingers. It was the signal that he was no more interested to talk now. Ranjan left with worried face. he was afraid to the situation where he was stuck deeply.

Shlok puffed the cigarette and thought with all his evilness.

"kaka I will win also this time because you will lose badly... Avdhoot malik didn't do anything but I did. It is all my game and you cannot even reach from where I think... until you will get to know this... I will get what I want... it is my revenge story and It is me who will chose to how will be this game..." Shlok smiled

He took his phone and dialed the number.

"hello uncle... this is high time now... just show your cards..." he said and cut the call. He knew that here he was the grand master.

*************...************

"Aastha, we are going out tonight for the dinner at Agnihotris..." Avdhoot informed her who left surprised. It was first time in whole 3 months when they were going out. She became happy to think about but somewhere she didn't want to go there due to the two intense eyes. She felt that those eyes always followed her everywhere. But she tried to jerked away those thoughts and started to select her dress for night.

Suddenly her phone started to ring. She saw the private number and picked the call confusingly

"Aastha..." she could not even utter a single hello when a caller took her name in his husky voice.

"yes... who is it?..." she asked in determined tone as she was a very brave and confident.

"I want that you wear the necklace which I gifted you for tonight..." she recognized the voice with this single sentence.

"which necklace? Mr. Agnihotri?" she evinced him more than asking, he smiled on her curt tone

"so miss Aastha you cracked my identity..." he smirked lightly from other side.

"why did you call me?" she asked in irritated tone

"so you want to warn me that I should not call you..." he was trying to be free with her while she interrupted him and cut his words abruptly

"would you please tell me why did you call me?" her voice became little high as he was annoyed her

"if I say that from now I will call you and meet you regularly then what will you say?" he was checking her patience. She cut the call when she could not tolerate him so long.

"idiot..." she cursed him as he spoiled her mood. Suddenly she realized that he was talking about the gift. She opened the gift quickly and she left stunned to see the diamond necklace in it. She quickly closed the box and became anxious.

********...*********

They reached at Anjali Niwas on time. she was looking stunning in black suit with cudidaar. Shlok saw her with longing eyes. She broke the gaze instantly when she felt his eyes on her. Avdhoot and Niranjan went inside as they met after so long so they became lost in their old days while she was consciously looked here and there.

"you are not looking ok..." suddenly he came to close and asked

She jerked away from him in a moment "no I am fine..." she didn't look into his eyes.

"so you didn't wear my gift... why?" his husky tone made her more conscious

"look mr. Agniho..." she could not complete her words when suddenly he cut her in middle

"Shlok..." he said when she looked him like fool "what..." the word slipped from her mouth unknowingly

"you can call me Shlok... I think it is good name to take..." he smirked while she became more stiffened

"please take back your gift... I can not take this... its so expensive..." she gave him a box while he looked unaffected by this gesture of her

"so what if its expensive..." he asked like it is very small thing to care

"I don't like this..." she said in strain voice

"if you don't like necklace then its ok I will buy anything else but if you don't like my gesture then you should take it easily..." he said in very serious tone. she felt if he tried to warn her.

"look I don't like to take a gift from strangers..." she tried one last chance

"but I am not stranger... you know our fathers talking about our alliance..." he bent on her little as she was short in height in front of him.

"what..." She left shocked to hear that while he was admiring her petite figure.

"why are you looking shocked..." now he started to mocked her while she tried to understand the situation

"I cannot marry you... I don't know you... we are completely different..." she replied in urgent tone if she missed the chance than she will lose but her words made him mad

"if you don't know me then start to know me..." he held her arms and said in passionate way just inches away from her face.

She felt truly scared first time from him

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Edited by lively_roshani - 11 years ago

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