~Ashlok FF: Written in stars: Ch 50 on pg 138 - Page 93

Originally posted by: .logs

awesome updates... on cloud nine... loverd prof Romila scene... nd very angry wid Shlok's behaviour... NA is trusting Astha so much... but, here??

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

I'm a silent reader of this ff from day 1, today ur updates made me comment,

After reading last, 7 updates, I cried very badly, I cried unknowingly, even my pillow became wet dear

Seriously, I'm a huge fan of this ff, love the way u write, very well emoted

Truly brilliant updates, great job

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it

Thank u so much for great ff

Originally posted by: Tanvi.Alison

Lovely update Ashley... The last line broke my heart "Not everyone is lucky... some people are unlucky like me too"

I do not feel sorry for her though. Not because i feel she deserves the pain, NO, She doesn't. But one cannot blame her childish antics since that is how she has been brought up- sheltered and protected by the whole family, especially Varadh and Shlok. and now she misses their affection because they have suddenly seemed to have distanced themselves from her.

Having said that, I believe this is the right time that she needs to grow strong, and only hardships and pain will mould her into a responsible woman. I appreciated the fact that Varadh did not blurt out anything to Anjali and asked her to talk to Aastha. Neatly put, and very matured thinking indeed!

I'm confused with Shlok, on the other hand. at one point he behaves friendly, then he is all worked up to just ravish her in bed, and the next moment he is cold and distant.. He seems to be having the PMS symptoms at a time, throughout the year! I'm hoping that Aastha will not fall for the jealousy trap (May's birthday) and Shlok's plan backfires when some hot stud walks up to aastha and makes her comfortable, causing Shlok to remember that she IS his wife, whether he likes it or not.

I have said this earlier, and i will say it again, You are a brilliant writer! Your updates have gotten me hooked to this story, and I'm looking forward to another update already (preferably a triple chapter update again? - Yeah, i know, call me greedy, but that's what you've turned us all into with your updates)

Hope to see another wonderful update soon,

Love,

Tanvi

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

I love Romila fr wt she said! N u for ths chapter!👏 Dint quite realise Shlok had left her like she ws nt his wife bt some.. ...I hv so swear words fr him right nw...Astha dsnt deserve so much fr her childishnes! Glad She has NA😊

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

I m startng to utterly dislike Shlok nw🤬 Astha brace urself! Anjali is tryng to bring them togethr widout evn knwng wt keeps them apart..wish Astha had a real confidant😳

btw lv u fr 5 updates al at once😳

Originally posted by: micky11

the updates are amazing

Aastha is in semi depression

trying best for her studies

and shlok ruined that also

Aastha is getting support from NA only

and now if this event goes in wrong direction

shlok will try him also go against her

God save her

The best thing is to leave everyone and then they will know her value but before that she should expose shlok

He deserves slap from everyone

Originally posted by: mayurisb80

well Astha is too childish...she has to take up a few responsibilities and own up to actions...

i do agree that she suffers at the highhsandedness of shlok nd family,,but she too has to prove that she can change...

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Hi Ashley,

Prof.Romela ..beautifully written her part and she being the mentor and guiding teacher for a gals well being personally and professionaly very well etched and crafted ..

People say that comparisons are not good in life.. but unless u start comparing urself with somebody ..u will not realise where do u stand.. as PERSONAL SELF .. as what u are..

She trying to know and feeling the difference and what is and has been missing in life in GAURIS Incident .. wow too good.. I would say..

She calls NA feeling the insecurity and she will go nuts.. That's what we do.. when mind stops running we like to lean on closer people like father figure or best friend ..who understands and doesn't question u or what happened ..just blindly they come over.. NA character portrayed very well..

MENTAL DEPRESSION.. THIS HAPPENS ...yes.. WHEN a person is mentally depressed don't know what happens.. It happens that the world stops revolving, u start hating urself, feel like killing urself, feel searching for something to lean on to move on in life.. again.. u need to come out of the cocoon by self rather with help..

THE POSITIVITY OF HER .. THAT IM NOT SCARED.. MANY LOVE ME.. I LOVE EVERYBODY.. I NEED TO LIVE.. that's the spirit .. her PMA..

too good..

Kavya not been asked to play.. IF WE PLAY WITH KIDS WE BECOME KIDS.. just to remind her that she aint kid anymore and remind her THAT SHE IS DIL and not baby.. I guess this is the underneath hidden meaning..

Ataya and Anjy.. they want them to resolve their issues.. nicely put.. unless u talk with eachother how will the matter resolve.. so COMMUNICATION MUST.. IN EVERY RELATION..

EGOS - OF WHO WILL APOLOGISE OR SHUTTIGN THE DOOR.. IT IS A FORM OF LOVE..

HE ON HER AND SHE ON HER..

I don't go by what they did.. I go by characters how they are emoted.. the story is written by u.. so I don't have any rights to criticise on their acts.. but sit and enjoy the story to the core..

U ARE ONE DAMN GOOD WRITER.. I SAY..

THIS PART AFTER WEDDING .. IS LIKE ME GOING IN TO MY

MEMOIRS OF TRANSFORMATION OF COLLEGE GAL TO RESPONSIBLE WOMAN..

THANKS FOR MAKING ME RECALL THOSE..THANKS A LOT..

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Chap 49 and 50 ..

Neel Posted ..Thanks a lot Blue..

Really .. Im Sad for Astha.. Only one thing comes to my mind to utter..

SHE HAS NOT SEEN THE WORLD.. BEFORE EVEN SEEING ANYTHING ..HOW CAN GOD OR FATE BE CRUEL TO HER..

SHE IS A CHILD WHO IS ABOUT TO TAKE AND KEEP THE FIRST BABY STEP IN REAL LIFE ..INDEPENDENCE ..FREEDOM.. LIBERTY.. COURAGE.. FACING ANY ODDS...

I GUESS SHE SHOULD COME BACK... SHE HAS TO SEE THE WHOLE HAPPY WORLD WITH HIM AND HER LOVED ONES..

EOD.. A LIFE IS LIVE AND ENJOY EACH AND EVERY SECOND ..

GOD PL BE WITH HER.. HERE WITH ASHLEY WHO WRITES STORY..

VERY WELL WRITTEN..

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

n shez reachng half century😃