I Love Your Enemy : DhruNi (Completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 2




Note: Here Manik and Alya are not together (as showed on yesterday's Episode), so Manik is still angry at Alya.
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Four of the Fab5 were sitting on Cabir's dinning room waiting for his mom's tasty food to come. And who was missing? The enemy Lover.


"Taan ta naan..." Cabir's mom entered with a tray full of food. As she was setting down the plates on the table she asked "Aree tum saab itne chup chap se kyun ho? Aur Dhruv kaha hai?"

After a moment Manik answered "Who aunty usne text kiya hai ki who college mein hi millne wala hai."

She looked suspiciously at them, "Tum saab k bicch kuch huya hai kaya?"

"Nahi aunty esha kuch nahi. Who to..." Alya tried to answer but really didn't know what to say.

Instead Mukti answered for her "Actually aunty kaal raath ussne humen kaha ki who ek ladki se payaar karta hain."

"Dhruv ko payaar?" Cabir's mom was surprised. "She must be really special."


At hearing this Mukti covered her face with her hands, Cabir rolled his eye, Alya just shook her head and Manik sarcastically said "Oh she is."

"Ufff...Tum saab to aise react kar raheho jaise...jaise Dhruv ko kisi ladake se payaa huaho" She tried to joke.

"Mom Dhruv ko jisse payaar huya haina usse to accha hai ki who kissi ladake sehi shaadi kar leta." This made everyone chuckle and also earned him a playful punch on the arm from his mother.

"Wahsebhi Dhruv ne kaal khud kaha hai ki itna serious nahi hai. Eh saab to overreact rakrahe hai" Mukti said.

"Kaya overreact? Thik e to hai. Ussne humari dushmaan se payaar kiya hai." Cabir replied dramatically.

Cabir's mom sighed "Dekho beta bujhe uss ladaki k bare mein kuch nahi pata magar jitna mein Dhruv ko janti hun who toh tum logoke sivaye kisi se baath bhi nahi karta. To agar usse payaar huya hai toh who mere liye serious hain. Aur rahi baath tum saab ki toh eh tumhehi decide karna hai ki tumhe dosti nibhani hai yeh dushmani."


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They were now driving to S.P.A.C.E and the car was mostly silent except for Rose's blabbering about these and that. Oh yes, they had to pick up Rose too because she was missing Cabir so much.


After they reached, Manik parked the car and they all headed towards the entrance but only to come to a halt after a few steps. Because they spotted Dhruv with Nandini.

"Hum rukh kiyun gayee?"

"Babe who Dhruv aur Nand..."

But before Cabir could finish Mukti almost screamed "Seriously?!? He ditched us for that girl."

"Oh Mukti, payaar meh to esahi hota hai. Choori choori milna, time spend karna, ek dusre ko dekh k smile kar na. Haina Cabir?" Rose said dreamily. This only caused Mukti to glare at her.

"He looks happy." It was a simple statement but shockingly it came from Alya.


They all just looked at her dumbfounded. Seeing their expression she smiled sadly and said "Look at him guys. No matter how hard we try we can't deny the fact that she actually makes him happy."

"This is coming from the girl who sent goons after that girl." Manik said bitterly.


"Yes Manik. And I know I made a mistake but you can't hold that on me for the rest of my life. Maybe it's a high time for us to stop being stubborn and accept the facts. And as Cabir's mom said it's our time to decide. So, yes I'm choosing my friend and his happiness over my enemy." and without giving them a second glance Alya left.


They all just stared at her retreating back still shocked by what she said.

After a while Manik heaved a sigh and what came next made Cabir and Mukti's jaw drop to the floor.

Because Manik said "I think Alya is right."



~Author's Note~

1) Thank you all for the words of appreciation. It means a looot and that's why I updated part-2 super fast

2)OMG!😲 Manik and Alya supporting DhruNi...Heehehe😆 hope you liked it.

3) I also made a banner all by myself and some chapter pics too. Yaaay And also Thanks to Mina420 because I didn't know how to upload it so she helped me.😊

Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
wow ...this is ur first work???
i mean its brilliant 😃
loved it
bichara Dhruv
pm me nd update sooon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its just sooo beautifully written dear!!!!*:D❤️😳👏love DhruNi☺️itsss just soo perfect and awesome!*😳u r srsly an amazing writer dear*😉😳👏my poor cutiepie dhruv😳soo much in luv☺️awww❤️and alya understanding DhruNi❤️ is sooo sweeet!*😳😃pm me too pls wen u will update..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok a interesting plot u got there
& after yesterdays epi nah i wished Alya & Nandini could becm best buddies
about about Nandini n Dhruv situation if it happened it has to b Manik who will hab a say n accept the fact his best buddy is in luv with the enemy 😃
bring in the nxt part real soon plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz update soon
am loving it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow this is brilliant! Hard to believe you're a first time writer!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 3







Cabir sat on a chair and watched Mukti as she paced the room from this end to that.

"Mukti tu please rukh ja. Aag tu esehi pendulum ki tarha edhar se udhar jati rahi na to mein hypnotize ho jayunga, aur baad mein pata chalega mujhe Navye se payaar ho gaya hai."

"Cabir agar eshi baath tu dubara karega na to thappar parega."

"Aree tu un tin o ki gussa mujhpar kiyun nikal raha hain? Mein to ulta situation ko light banana cha raha tha."

"Yeh lightly lene whali situation nahi hain Cabir. Un tinoko ho kaya gaya hai?!? I mean Dhruv ko Nandini se payaar ho gaya aur Manik aur Alya uske suport mein hai. Have they gone mad or what? Mujhe to kuch samaz mein nahi araha."

"Okay. See, as mom said Dhruv being in love is something serious. As for Alya, Dhruv ne usse support kiya hain aur aab who kar rahi hain. Aur Manik, Mukti Dhruv Manik ka buddy hain. Who uski khushi k liye kuch bhi karega. If you want an honest answer I think they are right and don't give me that look, you wanted me to be serious I am being serious."

"OK. Sorry. Galti hogayei, whapass joker mode mein chale jaa."

"Mukti stop being so stubborn."

"Cabir."

"Mukti."

"CABIR."

"FINE."


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Manik entered the auditorium and as he guessed Dhruv as already there. He went there and took a sit beside him and that's when Dhruv realized his best buddy was in the room.

"Tune aaj Cabir k ghaar nahi gaya, aunty puch rahi thi."

"Hain, who kuch kaam tha.."

"Kaam tha, yeh koi thi?" Manik asked with a smirk. At hearing this Dhruv looked down at the floor.

Manik gave a sad smile. "Dhruv kal raath..." before he could finish Dhruv cut him off.

"Kaal k bare main kaya baath karni? Mene to bol diya jo bolna tha. Aur tujhe to bathaya tha na mene meri aur Nandini ka friendship khatam kar diya. Tum saab ko usse problem hai, uski whajese kitna problem hua. Lekin mein kaya karu? Who khud akar mujhse baath karti hai, jinta bhi duur jau who phir bhi pass ajati hai. Kitna dill dukhau uska?" Dhruv said full of pain in his voice.

"Toh esa math kar. Uska dill bhi math dukha aur khud ka bhi."

"Mathlab?" Dhruv was looking at his best friend as if he saw him for the first time.

"Mathlab, e jo tera friend hain na jisse tu itna payaar karta hai, usse dur math ja kiyu ki tujhe taaklif hoti hai aur eh mujhe pasaand nahi. Hain manta hu uske saath bohath problem hue hai lekin tu uske saath khush hain. Aur mere liye teri khushi se important kuch nahi."

Dhruv was shocked but still managed to say "Le...lekin baki saab?"

"Baki saab ka kaya! Cabir Aur mukti baccho jasi hain, kuch whakth de thik ho jayega. Aur Alya, who toh tere support mein hi hai. Ja k dekh tere shaadi k dress k liye apna fashion designer se appointment bhi leliya hoga."

This made both of them laugh and Dhruv's cheeks turned slightly pink which caused Manik to laugh even more. When they stopped Dhruv spoke up "Thanks Manik." he smiled and his happiness was visible in his eyes.

"Areee tujhe payaar keye ho gaya aab mujhse formality karega?!?" after saying this he pulled Dhruv into a hug.


The girl who caused so many problems between them now was the reason to bond them again. And must say a much stronger bond.



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Alya was standing at the girl's washroom, looking pleased at her reflection in the mirror. After she ran away from her friends, she came here and cried her eyes out for the last one hour. But now thanks to her ability to do perfect make-up no one will have a slightest doubt on her.


As she was putting her make-up away in her bag, the door of the bathroom opened and came in none other than her enemy. Ooops sorry, her ex enemy, Nandini.


When Nandini saw who was standing in front of her she got a bit uncomfortable. I mean it was just the other day that she found out that the girl in front of her, named Alya, sent goons after her. And you can never trust a member of Fab5. Who knew what they would do to you. Well except for Dhruv because he is different, he is sweet and special and...not the right time Nandini. Focus!

"I ummm...if you want I will leave." Nandini said backing away towards the door.

"No! It's ok. Actually I wanted to talk with you." said Alya.

"Why?"

"I...I.." Alya took a deep breath before she finally said "I wanted to say sorry."

After hearing this Nandini's eyes turned into the shape of tennis balls. Is Alya Saxena saying SORRY toNandini Murti?

Alya continued, "I know I was a complete b**** to you and it's hard for you to trust me but believe me I'm actually sorry for what I did. I really am."


Nandini was yet not capable of replying rather was getting shocked each passing moment and it was surprising that her eyes didn't come out of their sockets. She never saw this side of Alya and never expected to. She was actually opening up to her.

When Nandini didn't reply Alya kept on saying "I got so possessive about Manik that I couldn't even think straight. I blamed everything on you but it was so stupid of me..."

By now Nandini came out of her shock zone and called Alya by her name to make her listen to her but with her ranting going on in full speed Alya didn't hear. So, to make her stop Nandini took a bold step, she hold Alya's arm and gave her a shake.


"Alya, it's okay."

"What? Really?" Now Alya looked shocked, she didn't think it would be so easy.

"Yes, really. You realized your mistake and that's what matters. So, I forgive you." Nandini said smiling.

Alya sighed in relief "Thanks. You have no idea how much it means to me." and then she turned all excited "And just so you know I don't mind your relationship with Dhruv either."

But her exciting smile soon turned into a teasing one when Nandini said " What relationship?Alya tumhe ho kaya gayeya hai? Pehle to sorry bola aab Dhruv ko lekar!I and Dhruv are just friends."

"Oh, just friends huh? Ok then, I don't mind you guys being 'friends'" Alya said air quoting the word friends. "Aur Fab5 meinse sirf Dhruv hi tumhara friend ho sakta hai eya mein bhi? Aab to mene sorry bhi bol diya."

"Okay, now I'm confirm tumhe kuch huya hain. Tum thore der k liye ehi ruko mein kisi ko bula kar lati hun."

"No Nandini, I'm serious. As I said I made mistakes and now I want to make them right, so what can be better then being friends?" and as her final act her placed her hand in front of her for Nandini to take it "Friends?" she asked.

Nandini could see thesincerity in Alya's eyes and couldn't help but smile. She took Alya's waiting hand and shook it.

"Friends" she said.



~Author's Note~

1) I am surprised by the response I'm getting. Thank you so much guys for all the comments it really encourages me.😃So for all of you I made this part not only fast but long too.😊

2)Manik and Dhruv best buddies again and Manik accepted DhruNi. Alya and Nandini friends😲But Cabir and Mukti still being stubborn😭

3)Let me know if you liked it or not. And if you have any complain please do tell.

OK.Enough of talking I'm going to sleep now. It's 4:23am



Edited by anaddictof_KY2 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww😳such a lovely and sweeet update yaar!*:D❤️😃loved ManRuv bromance..😳.they are soo adorable together*such sweethearts😳...aww...alya and nandu friends!!!*😛😆😉thats different!*waiting for DhruNi romance..!*❤️☺️😳loved the update...pls do continue soon.😳.thks for the pm😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i really cant digest the fact that Manik is Okay with Dhruni 😆
c'mon it ain't possible without a hint of jealousy
& thnk u loads, u come up with a stry quite the way i like
u knw simple n real with no villains
hilarious was the part whn Manik said alya was gettin ready with the designer :D
Alya-Nandini scene Oh how i wish it was shwn in the shw 😊
its hard to believe ur writing for the first tym
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a lovely update and cute too maanik thank god monster cum gero maanik ne ego chod di... Vrnaaa... Hell loose ney loved the uodaye and alya is now frn with nandini great and maanik has no prob gud

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