Aaslok the opposite of love part 12 18/10/14 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept..waiting for next continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: katj

Something different and interesting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant, intriguing and romantic prologue!
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Originally posted by: Surish

Brilliant, intriguing and romantic prologue!

that was also a first part😊
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Part 2

"Smarty, I don't want to live here..." Aastha frowned in irritation to Avdhoot malik who didn't bother her protest. It was almost 3 months passed since he they sifted in the city but she didn't adjust herself in the life of Ahmednagar after leaving a metro city behind.

"I told you natkhat (naughty) that you cannot adjust here but you insisted to live everywhere with me now just be with me because it has already late to go Delhi and take admission in DU and also I will not do what you wanted..." Avdhoot took her class and she pouted in anger

"Papa..." she always came on papa from smarty whenever she became angry with him and in the moment she was very angry with him because she didn't want to live in the city where everyone looked conservative and rigid. She liked to be live like free bird and here, She didn't feel comfortable in these 3 months. She came with Avdhoot because she thought that she could fit in every situation but here she found herself total misfit. Avdhoot told her that she should live in Delhi but she became adamant to come along with her father as she could not live away from him.

Avdhoot malik basically belonged to Haryana north India. He spent his early life in Delhi even his all family and relatives lived in Delhi. He was government officer as he always used to transfer here and there close to his native place so he didn't face any problem yet and lived with his family in Delhi. But this time he got transferred in Ahmednagar near to Pune. There was the difference of culture, difference of language as there was majority of Marathi population. Everything was different here from their city.

He decided to come alone here but since her mother death Aastha became too touchy with him and she didn't be agree to live alone in Delhi with the family of her uncle and her grandparents. Neelabh who worked in Satyapath branch of Pune also tried to convince her but she didn't hear anything and came with her father.

But now she was suffering from home sickness as she used to live in joint family where everyone pampered her very much but here Avdhoot was busy in his work and he could not spend much time with her even if he wanted so most of the time she had to live alone. Neelabh always came to meet her on his leave day but he also was very busy.

She took admission in masters in mass communication as she always followed Neelabh choice. This was the girls collage; she tried to adjust hard here as she always studied in co education. she didn't like enjoy gossiping and too girly stuffs so she could not become free and comfortable there too soon that's why she complained to Avdhoot and tried to convince him for applying a transfer appeal from the city.

But Avdhoot malik was very principled man and never like to leave his work in halfway. As he came here he found the big loopholes in new township project of Ranjan Agnihotri so he decided to reveal his misdeed publically. He didn't know the involvement of Shlok Agnihotri the most famous youth leader of the area in the fraud but he was digging the matter and very close to know about other involved name in the case.

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"Neel... you have to come here..." she was speaking to Neelabh over the phone who was trying to excuse as he was busy in his work.

"I don't know why everyone suddenly become against me... first smarty said to no for transfer and now you also..." she shouted in irritated voice.

"Natkhat try to understand... what about my job..." Neelabh said in obligated tone. He could not see her in bad mood.

"Uff... you are also talking like smarty... you have to come... I don't know anything..." she gave him a warning.

"Hey what are you trying to hide from me... tell me directly..." he asked to her as he felt her hidden motive. She gave up in next minute as she could not hide anything from him. He always caught her whenever she tried to do something without their knowledge.

"What I have needed to hide anything from you... it is just a small thing..." she made her voice like she was innocent or didn't care about what he was talking.

"Oh really so Miss Malik can you tell me about your small thing..." he mocked her and thought in his mind

"I know as your pumpkin mind thinking a very big thing for me... please god save me..." he thought and made a poor face in his silent prayer.

"Actually the things are... oh you said na that I should participate in extracurricular activities so I did but..." She paused in between her nonstop babbling.

"But????" he asked curiously as he was waiting for the blast.

"I am taking part in drama based on Sassui Punhun love story..." at last the cat was come out from the bag; he sighed to hear this as he could not understand what the problem in it was.

"It is good... very good..." he praised her in her effort to adjust in her life

"so we didn't have any boy for punhun role so I suggested your name and assured to my theatre teacher that you will be surely do it..."she hurriedly said without any pause or stop while he was just trying to understand what she said just now.

"What... I what... pun... what?" he was shocked and confused on her

"You will be my ... I mean Sassui's punhun... you will be na????????" she asked in too innocent and emotional way so he could not think anything but he had to be agreed.

"ok baba I will see how it is possible now be happy..." he said and cut the call. She jumped in joy on her win.

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Shlok became obsessed with the picture of her. He took the envelope and cut the entire picture to remove Neelabh and Avdhoot from that. He forgot about all the things around him except her. Suddenly his phone started to ring. He pressed the ok button without even check the number.

"Hi dear... how are you?" the seductive female voice hit his ear.

"Swati... why are you calling?" he didn't want to hear her voice in the moment when he lost in Aastha's dreams.

"You didn't call me and you didn't come to see me from a long time... what happen?" she asked in her as usual sexy voice.

"Ummm... yes I am very busy and I will may not come for some time..." he made an excuse to get her out from his league

"oh come on... why are you making excuses to me... just tell me who is she... is she more beautiful than me?" she replied in mocking way with smirked tone

"yes... You are nothing in front of her and I want to get her as soon as much..." he told her in straight forwardly manner.

"oh dear then get her who can stop you..." she slightly laughed but inside in her heart she got burnt to hear the other name from his mouth. She cut the call with this and Shlok threw the cell phone in the corner and closed his eyes again.

Swati was the time pass for Shlok whenever he felt low, she consoled him. She lived on his expenses in Pune. She was his collage mate who was mad for him. She left her family for him but he never felt love kind of feeling for her. She was just the girl for him who offered herself for his work and in return paid by huge amount and enjoyed Levis lifestyle.

He didn't feel like that before which he felt for Aastha. It was entirely different. He became mad for her. He was not so serious with this also as he thought that it will be also over when he will meet her and win her like he did before.

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"Oh thanks god Neel you come... I love you for this..." she saw him and hugged him in overexcitement.

"Ok so it is me who made excuses in his office for the leave and you thanked to God... very good then you call to god for do the role in your play ... I am going back..." he acted if he became angry.

"Ohhh come on ... my sweetu... leave the acting... You cannot do it well..."she pulled his arms and mocked

"Oh really then I should definitely go back..." he again chided her when she stared him in warning look.

He laughed to see her face, she ran behind him to hit him ...

They were rehearsal hard for the play as they were playing the lead roles in eternal love story of sassui punhun.

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Edited by lively_roshani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Nice update roshani.
Thanks fr the pm.
Eagerly waiting fr ashlok meeting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
very nice update I m waiting to see how astha will react with shlok in first meeting of ashlok
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Nice update...
When will Ashlok meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Nice update Shlok love so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Superb 👍🏼
What next 😕
Eagerly waiting for the next update di 😉

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