REALLY CV WRITERS MOVE THE STORY FORWARD

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Astha in her dialogue said she only wants to work, so she can be close to Shlok and find evidence against NA. She does not work for herself or to make own identity.
Astha is all over Shlok like a rush, Shlok pushes her away. Writers need to give Astha some self respect. Na is responsible for all of Astha and Shlok misunderstanding , between each other Astha has yet to even try to find evidence against Na.
Also l am tired of Shlok daily one liner, Astha does not care about me. Find some proof to show astha, that your baba is innocent Shlok.

I think audiences feel story is dragging they want NA to go far as possible, to remove Astha from Shlok''s life . I feel if NA, his attempts are failing, then he will take a dramatic step. Like causing a dangerous accident for Astha. Or at leaSt plant evidence to suggest Astha may cheat on Shlok or she is stealing money from the office.

Ankush needs to quickly learn , Astha in laws are the agnihotri, and use this opportunity to cause trouble for Astha. This will worry Astha parents.

Why do writers shows kalaindi in laws are accepting her son, at least Kalindi mum in law. Should worry what, sociey or extend family and friends are going to think about Ankush Kalindi son, from first marriage. ( Good example would be for Sid mother to find out about Ankush and tell the Agnihotri family. The writers are failing to add to this story further, through this angle.

Conflict should come between Astha and kalindi, for keeping such a big thing from her.

Hope Kalindi learns about Astha and Shlok separtion soon.

Jyothi should tell Varad, that baba has two faces he is not as god like as they are all lead to believe. Why does not Jyothi tell Varad that is was baba who had Abhay released from jail, Na was telling Abhay to come and take Jyothi. When he knew , this would put Jyothi and her childs life in danger.Because Na does not value any women or girls life, NA says he does not care if Jyothi lives or dies.
That Na, himself has said to Jyothi she cannot prove her fathers true colours to her brothers.

I want to see Jyothi and Sid help and support Astha.
I also would like Ria to cause problems in Shlok and astha marriage.
Edited by lav57 - 11 years ago

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