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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Very nice...
jaldi se randhir ko bhi realise kra do dat he loves sanyu...
post nxt asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey wow amazin update...
Its a grt story and never imagined sanyu and randhir talkin ji and al...
It was fun to read:):)
Updte soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Read all five parts in a go !!lovely storyline !! plz do pm wen u update nxt !
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
thankyou so much everyone for liking ... m really very happy :-)
will update in 2 days..has very hectic schdule..sorry :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 7

Next day at school..

Sanyukta enters in class..could not find randhir..
Ye randhir kahan h? Ab tk toh wo aa jata h..iska mtlb aj wo school nh aya ohh god. Kahin uski tabiyat toh khrb nh 😲

Kausto - sanyuu..wahin kya khadi hai..aa na..

Sanyukta settled on her seat..after 5 min all students went for assembly.. She was upset.. Her body was in assembly hall but heart with randhir..

Shalini (whispering) - jiggyy..jiggyy..

Jiggy - han..kya hua

Shalini - randhir kahan h? Uska bag toh class me h but wo dikh kyu nh rha.. Invisible ho gya h kya 😆

Jiggy - hehe randhir basket ball court me h.. Coach ne bulaya tha kuch imp. Kaam ke liye..

Shalini - okiee..

Sanyukta listens their conversation.. Finally uski jaan me jaan aai 😆
Shukr hai randhir aaya h..thankyou god..

At basket ball court..

Coach - students.. As u all know.. Next month inter school basketball competition hai..or har saal ki tarah iss bar bh trophy hamare school ko hi milni chahiye..got it??

Students - yess sir..

Coach - i have made list of players..its on notice board..u all can see it from there..
M here to announce the captain of FITE basket ball team..


Sahil to students - isme announce kya krna..sbko pta h randhir hi bnega captain because he is best..


Randhir smiles..😊

Coach - silenceee...!!!
Soo captain of team is neil khurana..


All students got shocked..😲

Randhir - how could this happen? Sirr.. I deserve to be captain of the team..i have played from last 5 years..

Coach - don't tell me what you deserve or not.. Neil will be captain..And thats final..

Disperse..!!

And all students were going back in there classes..

Neil to randhir - tch tch tch.. Toh randhir singh shekhawat will be a mere player for team..so sad ( evil smirk😉) looser..

Randhir😡 (angry) - kon winner hai or kon looser..ye sb jante h neil.. And muje pta h tumne coach ko bribe kiya h captaincy ke liye.. Isse jyada tum kuch kr b nh skte..
So looser tum ho..me nahi..


Neil - so wat? Everything is fair in love n war.. Looser shekhawat hahaha..

N he left from there..

Sahil - lets go randhir..ye toh hai hi kamina..why don't you talk to coach..you could give more money than neil..

Randhir - no sahil..i wont use these cheap tricks.. I will get what i deserve with my hardwork.. I m going to principal..

At pricipal office..

Randhir - may i come in sir?

Principal - yes..come in

Randhir - good morning sir.. I need to talk something very urgent..if u can give me 5 min. Plzz

Principal - yaa go ahead..

And randhir tells principal everything about coach n neil..

Principal - what ?? Ye tum kya keh rhe ho? Me abi coach ko yahan bulata hu..

Principal to receptionist - send Mr. Batra in my cabin immediately..


After 5 min.

Mr. batra urff coach - may i come in sir?

Principal - yess..
Mr. Batra ye me kya sunn rha hu.. Tumne ek bacche se rishwat leke use team ka captain bnaya?!.. How could you do it?


Coach - no sir.. Its a lie..Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya..who told you ?

Randhir - maine btaya sir ko..

Coach - ohhh so its you..i should have guessed it..

To principal - sir..this boy is lieing.. Just because i didnt made him captain ye mujh par aise jhoothe ilzam lga rha h..

Randhir - no sir.. M not lieing..

Coach - ohh so if u saying truth then on what basis you are saying that neil bribed me ? Do you have any proof?

Randhir - no i dnt have any proof but that doesnt mean m lieing..believe me sir..

Principal - look boy.. Just because of you i doubt my honest teacher.. Isse phle me tumhare khilaf koi action lu just get out from here..


Randhir - but sir..

Principal - i said..out..

N randhir left from there..

(in corridor)

Coach called randhir..

Coach - What the hell do you think of urself? U are just a student here..you should be thankful that i have selectd you for my team..

(students were watching them)

Randhir - thankful? Ohh plzz.. Sach aap bh jante hai or me bh.. And rahi basket ball team ki bat toh M out of it.. Because me kisi hypocrate teacher ki team me nahi khel skta..

(Coach looking around..most students listening their convo. )

Before coach can say anything..randhir went to his class..

Sanyukta n whole class also listened their conersation.. She knew randheer would be very upset now.. She didn't knew what to do..how to support him..

(Recess)

Randhir sitting on last bench with his friends.. Feeling upset..

Sahil to randhir - ye kya kiya tune..sbke samne coach ki insult.. He will not leave you now..

Shalini - haan yaar.. Upar se tune team bh chod di..

All his friend were giving him gyaan etc. But randhir was lost in himself..nobody supported him..
He felt like cryinghis heart out.. Basketball is major part of his life... N now he was out of team..what was his fault? He was not able to understand..
Frustrated.. He left from there n went to store room area.. No body was there..

Sanyukta (to herself ) - randhir is looking broken.. Kaise frnds hai unke jo unko hi blame kr rhe h..i should go n talk to him..

She also went to store room area.. There randhir was sitting on an old bench..keeping hands on his forehead..looking very upset..

Sanyukta takes slow steps towards him..
Umm Excuse me..

{ how was the twist ? How will sanyukta console him ? Sochte rahiye.. 😆😉 )
I want 2likes this time..until then i will not update..hihi😆

Edited by dreamyp - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Kya yaar fir twist ane se pehli hi finish kar diya part plzzz updt nxt prt asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
What happen next?? Can't wait any more. Continue soon
Edited by Archisma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
hehe twists make a story more interesting dear :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Oh God!!!!Bloody Coach, vo Rd ko sab ke samne insult kar diya, i will not spare him...😡😡 Eagerly waiting for next part...pls updat asap dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Sooo Sweet sanyu cares for rd ...plz pm me the next part ...

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