Ashlok FF: Heads Over Heels Ch 24 pg 145 - Page 63

Chapter 18...

Wonderful update ... First kiss.. Nice...
How aastha going handle it..
Still i am thinking whether Shlok love her or just a attraction...
Third world war confirm ..

Just read the last 2 chapters...amazing Jane...

fabulous updates,written beautifully 👏

Awesome awesome awesome...

Fabulous update loved it so much

Hi Jane.. 18th chapter of ur ff is up but I'm commenting 4 d first time!I'm sorry about that.. But I really think that you've gone far ahead from d stage where u needed support n appreciation.. Coz for me u r one of THE best writers I've ever seen..
The concept of this story is quite different from ur previous ones.. I used to imagine how aastha n shlok behave after reading each chapter..but u managed to sabotage my imaginations every single time!! This journey is really gripping n thrilling!!
Especially d last part of chapter 18!! Omg!! That was really powerful n unexpected!!

Wonderful update luv to read your update can't wait 4 nxt update

Holy Mother of Writing! They kissed, they finally kissed.
So anjali thinks Aastha is after Shloks money, that she is playing with him. Wicked witch!
Loved how in the end he told her to do what she promised to do and she was like ;: Holy shit xD
So finally Shlok admited to Aastha that he is attracted to her but attraction is only the first step in Love.
The Love has yet to bloom between them, for now it is just a mere attraction
LOved it so much
update soon! Waiting eagerly dearest JAne👏👏👏👏