Gehraiyan [2] - (Resuming) Author's Note pg. 58

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Madhuri

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Posted: 11 years ago

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part 37 - loved verbal war bet heer & nt...heer pissed off at nt for driving at 20 mph...even nt knows heer's past...

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: love2_soma
<font color="#330066"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">nice update...

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waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Madhuri53
part 37 - loved verbal war bet heer & nt...heer pissed off at nt for driving at 20 mph...even nt knows heer's past...

Thanks, Madhuri! Yep, Nayantara is starting to know a little more about our resident drama queen 😆 Happy to hear that the Heer-Nayantara interactions are going down well :) Thanks for commenting.

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Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

I have been reading this story since couple of days...it's a beautiful story...I may not be able to analyze / review the story through comments due to my limited ability of expressing through words, but would certainly say that I have understood and felt the depth of emotions and words you have woven in it...all the updates are fabulous and and you have a great writing style...pls continue soon..also waiting for Smoke and Mirrors

Edit - typo correction

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ChandlerBing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

What a contrast of worlds. They both are right in the own way, yet I have felt more at ease with Heer's reasoning... but that's a personal opinion. There is no right and no wrong obviously, in real world.

Heer's right is something I sort of believe in, while Nayantara's right is something I would not disagree with.

I think I would like to see more of the interactions of these both.

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dqno1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

I like Naintara

There is "thehraav" in her character.

Heer is a thundering storm where as NT seems more like gentle rain

Wondering about their equation with Dev now

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

I am so sorry. Huge changes happening in life and I am likely to be even more absent than usual. I didn't want the story to become so fragmented but such is life. Thank you so much for your comments. I will reply and send PMs tomorrow - too excited to finally get a chapter out!

If anyone is still here, thank you for your kindness :)

- Z

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kaamchorni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Previously...

"Maan..."

Gently, she put her hands on either side of his face and kissed him.

* * *

The Killing Curse

There was a time when her kisses surprised him. A time when they had warmed the blood in his veins and made his toes curl with delirium. The slightest caress would melt his heart, her every touch a revelation.

This was the first kiss that hurt. The first that tore at him, creating a schism in a heart he thought he knew. He wanted to scream from the deep waters she had left him in, scream that she was hurting him. That nothing had changed - he still drowned in her but this time it hurt. That this time, she needed to choose. She couldn't kiss him if he still tasted like poison to her lips.

He felt dejected, a rational man at the mercy of his irrational heart. A heart that rejoiced in a kiss that was killing him.

He felt her sigh against him, giving herself up to pleasure he knew wouldn't last. They were still - he flinched as he finally accepted it - broken. Try as he might, he could not will her back to him. He was starting to realise that he didn't want to. He wanted her to heal, wanted whatever part of her that was still... still trapped in a box to step out in its own time.

He wanted to kiss her.

Carefully, he put his hands on her face and pulled away. Her eyes fluttered open, clouding with confusion as she searched his face.

"Geet..." His eyes pleaded hers, imploring her to understand him.

She watched him, surprised. A small smile crept on her face. She rested her hand on his cheek.

"Okay."

She stood up and began walking back to the haveli when she faltered and turned to face him.

Her eyes - sparkling with surety - met his. "I'm not sorry." She let her gaze fall to his lips. "I'm not."

His heart sped and, as if sensing this, she smiled.

"Let's go back."

Edited by kaamchorni - 11 years ago