MriAra extended OS: Together Again...||EPILOGUE Update on PG 15|| - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: SoumiGirl

Last 3 updates are beautiful Archu! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Love your writing ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Loved Tara-Pari meeting ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

So, in your story, MJ is not selfcontrol baba ๐Ÿ˜† I like out of control MJ!! โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

And Tara can recognise MJ when he is in disguise! Thank God and Thank you Archu!! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Why did Tara reveal about Pari to Mannu? Kahaan gayi ishmaartness?? ๐Ÿ˜ญ

It's good that Tara heard Om-Mannu talking! She's closer to the truth and even closer to MJ now ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Good that Lado has given MJ the job to kill Tara! Now it's easier for MJ to save Tara!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Can't wait for further updates! ๐Ÿ˜Š






I guess all want MJ to be out of control๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†

@ recognizing : She is Tara... detective Tara๐Ÿ˜›

@ revealing Pari's identity: she is a mother too who met her daughter after a gap of 5 years. So she was still in the moment when she met her after 5 years, and by mistakenly said that.๐Ÿ˜Š

Detective Tara ๐Ÿ˜‰

Thanks for loving it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

will update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
3 updates are awesome...
Tara-Pari meeting scenes were so sweet...
Loved that MriAra romance part...but Mannu the 3rd person......beech mei aa gayi...
MJ priest ke disguise mei...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ladoo ab kya karegi...๐Ÿ˜•
MJ toh kuch plan kiya hi hai...
Update soon...๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
1. beauty spot & kiss
2. MJ tara ko wo pink nighty mein dekh liya (show mein jo dikhaya wo count karne ki layak nahin the)
2 wishes fulfil kar diya๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
i loved that I love u part (refreshed the memories of bablu - suseelaa)โค๏ธ

so kala- tara faceoff hone wala hai...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
waiting for prty๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by its-alexandrite - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Thanks to all for loving update

NOTE: Please don't except a face-off scene , I am not mystery writer who knows face-off.

I kept it simple.
๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

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Part 7



Tara's trance broke with a knock on the door of her room. It was Omkar.



"Jaan, are you ready for tonight?" Omkar extended his hands to touch Tara with an evil smile on his face.

Tara immediately moved a step back.

"I heard you went to the temple today?? What did you wish for there??"

Tara's act made him angry but he was trying to act normal.
"Your defeat," Tara said with full confidence in her voice as now she had her Mrityunjay with her.


Omkar got more angry with this reply but tried to control his anger and said, "Oh...really??"

He tried to hide his anger but his face clearly reflected it.

"Ok... Jaan, please practise your sign as after the party today you need to sign some papers." He showed Sia's sign to Tara.



Tara was confused why she needed to practice Sia's sign. She questioned him, "What am I going to sign tonight??"

"Nothing important, just some papers," he replied causally.

"He is going to kill me tonight after I sign the papers. But what kind of papers are they??"
She was confused. Then she remembered Mannat and Omkar's conversation from the day before yesterday. They were talking about property.
"This means he is going to transfer Sia's property to his name using me and after that he will kill me." A quick thought cleared all her doubts. She understood this man might have done something to his wife and that's why she left him. Or he killed her. So many thoughts were going through Tara's mind and frightening her.



"Jaan..." He again tried to touch Tara.

This time Tara gave him a tight slap on his right cheek, leaving an imprint of her fingers on his face making it red. This slap was the last barrier between Omkar and his anger.

"Enough!!" he shouted

"Yes, enough of this drama Omkar. I know that you know I am Tara."
This revelation of Tara made Omkar furious.

He laughed. "Oh...so you came to know about this. Hmm ... yes I know you are Tara."
His evil laugh continued.


"Then why do you want me to sign the papers??" She was trying to make Omkar blurt out his plan.


"Well...well...well...see Tara let's do a deal. You sign the papers and after that you are free. You can go anywhere."


"Huh...what is so special in those papers??"
Her plan was going well, so she tried to get more out of him.


"They are property papers. It's in my wife's name and after your sign, it will be mine."
His evil laugh was resonating in the room.

"Why me? I mean, where is your wife?"

"She is dead. She died in a car accident five years back. According to the will, this property is Sia's and after her twenty-sixth birthday she can give it to anyone by signing papers in front of the DM and her twenty-sixth birthday is today. After you sign these papers, I will become the owner of this property. The reason why I married her was her property and today after your sign I will get what I wanted since seven years."
His revelation cleared Tara's doubt about his wife.


"But why me??" She was still not convinced with his answer.

"Because you are Sia's look-alike and there is also an old account to settle with you." Tara's questioning was frustrating him.

"I am not going to sign."
Tara tore the paper having Sia's sign and threw it on Omkar's face.

Omkar's anger knew no bounds. He grabbed Tara's hand tightly and shouted, "You are!!! You will sign those papers otherwise I will kill that girl you met yesterday in the temple."

Tara was shocked with this threat. Her eyes widened in fear. Pari's innocent face, her melodious voice, her time spent with Pari in the temple...quickly rewound in her mind.

"No!! Don't do anything to her!!! I will do whatever you want." Tears were flowing from Tara's eyes.

"Good," he smiled. "Now like a good girl practice the sign and one more thing, dress like Sia for tonight's party." With these instructions, he left the room.


Tara immediately checked her phone. She had done it. She had captured their whole conversation in the mobile. She had stolen a mobile from one of the servants and thrown the SIM away so that it could not be traced to her. She was happy to have more proof against Omkar but was frightened regarding his threat to Pari.


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In Kalavati's den, Kalavati received Omkar's call reminding her about killing Sia after the party. He also asked to bring that kid who lives at her place to the party. Omkar had dug up all information about the girl Tara had met in the temple as he didn't want to miss out a single thing which could cause failure to his plans. His findings led to Laado and he discovered that the girl lived at her place. He wanted to use Pari as leverage against Tara in the party.


While Kalavati was talking to Omkar, Mrityunjay came there. After cutting the call, Kalavati once again ordered Mrityunjay to kill Sia but he denied again. Now Kalavati used her trump card and called her men to bring her. They brought Pari.
"Either you kill Sia or I will kill..."
Kalavati pointed her gun towards Pari. Mrityunjay was terrified seeing this. He accepted this assignment.



Inspector Vedant was collecting proofs against Omkar to make his case stronger. He was worried for his sister Sia and how she would react when she would come to know this. He was also worried what if Omkar tried to harm her after knowing about this search operation, so he was secretly conducting his search.

Omkar called Vedant to make sure he was coming.


Today the time from morning to evening seemed longer than five years of separation for Mrityunjay and Tara. They were worried for Pari.

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Thanks for reading


Editor: โญ๏ธShaina_bโญ๏ธ
(Thank You for making it readable)


Next update link on main page

Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
I hated it when Omkar called Tara jaan and tried to touch her!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Kya jawab diya Tara ne usse aur kyun na ho, after all now she had her Mrityunjay with her!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Iss Omkar ka toh haath tod dena chahiye!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Tara ne bilkul sahi kiya uss kamine ko thappad mar ke!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

I loved the way Tara made Omkar admit the truth and reveal all his plans!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

But I can't understand why Omkar was threatening Tara using Pari as he doesn't know the relationship between them!!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

It was very smart of Tara to record the convo in her phone!!!!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Omkar had found out about Pari and planned to use her to control Tara!!!

Mrityunjay had to agree to kill Sia as Kalavati threatened to kill Pari otherwise!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

Mrityunjay will be at the party and so I am sure he would save his Tara!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

This part was very good!!!!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘







Edited by Shaina_b - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Superb and beautiful updates
Tara's tight hug ๐Ÿ˜ณ mj's kiss ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Mj noticed mole once again ๐Ÿ‘
Just wow โญ๏ธ โญ๏ธ
Mj remind Tara all the time that he love her ๐Ÿ‘ I loved it ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Nice Archu
Story budi tezi se berh rahi hai and that Is very good ๐Ÿ‘
Aik request hai Ager poori hosake to ...?
Chota Sa romantic element bhi add kerdo
Sone pe suhaga hojayega ๐Ÿ˜ณ ( just a request)

Please continue ๐Ÿ˜›
Agey kiya hoga ... Kiya mj Tara ko bucha payega?
Iss sansani se perda juld uthega na ??
Edited by watchdesi1tv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Nice & interesting update...
Iss omkar ka toh haath tod dena chahiye...
Tara ne sahi kiya thappad marke...kamina...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Ye ab Pari ko use karega...
I hope Tara phn pe liya hua proof ka thik thak use kare...
Waise bhi party mei MJ toh rahega woh Tara ko bacha lega...
Pls...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
[Quote=Shaina_b]
Yeh Mrityunjay ke aate hi Tara screamed but thankfully Mrityunjay shut her up!!!๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค” ๐Ÿค”

Tara knows Mrityunjay by his touch and I loved the way she hugged him tightly!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

I loved it when Mrityunjay looked at Tara that way and complimented her!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

It was soo romantic!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

They are surely craving for each other after 5 years and Tara is getting lost in Mrityunjay's touch!!!!โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

Iss Omkar aur Mannat ko bhi abhi aana tha!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

It is good that Tara was able to give the evidence to Mrityunjay and tell him about Vedant!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

I loved the way Mrityunjay kissed Tara and reminded her of his love for her!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ

Accha huya Mrityunjay ne Vedant tak saare evidence pahucha diye and now Vedant is ready to arrest Omkar!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara can recognize her Mrityunjay in any disguise!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

I love the way he said "I love you" even in the note to Tara!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Tara trusts her Mrityunjay completely to save her from Kalavati!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

This part was fabulous!!!!๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
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@scream: hahaha...Tara ka vocal cord kuch zayada hi clear hai ๐Ÿ˜†

yes they are craving for each-other ๐Ÿ˜Š

Lets see what Vedant will do...๐Ÿ˜Š

Tara can recognize MJ in any disguise ๐Ÿ˜Š

Thanks for loving it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
[Quote=mon.sayan17.com]
3 updates are awesome...
Tara-Pari meeting scenes were so sweet...
Loved that MriAra romance part...but Mannu the 3rd person......beech mei aa gayi...
MJ priest ke disguise mei...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ladoo ab kya karegi...๐Ÿ˜•
MJ toh kuch plan kiya hi hai...
Update soon...๐Ÿ˜Š


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thanks Nira for loving it ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

read to know what happens next ๐Ÿ˜‰

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