FF:revenge after 20 years part 8 pg 16 - Page 11

Originally posted by: gujibabe

awww how sweet!!!
going for lunch!!! lolz!!!
continue soon plz!!!
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thank u

sure will but keep reading😉

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Kitty my sweetie what a great update....love the song keep it up!!

mewo kat 😉

u loved it even i love this song

thank u n keep reading😉

mewo kitty😆

Originally posted by: crystalclear

kitty sweetheart is se chota part nahi likh sakti thi kiya. but anyway it was gr8 looks like they both like each other. in shiv's case love. maherbani kar ke jaldi se agla hisa likhiye nahi to me danda le ke ayi khaloti. 👏

😆😆😆isey chota part bhi likh saktii hoon😆😆

so thank u n keep reading😉

Part7
kaya opens the door
kaya :aree gauri beta ur here but I thought ur flight ……………
gauri:shhhhhhshhhhh kaya masi where's tina
kaya:as if u don't kno
gauri:where's she
kaya:gauri she is in her room
gauri:okk wat is she doing
kaya:like always on computer
gauri(laughs):sure she is….. mujhey pahley hi samajh jana tha
kaya:gauri mujhey emergency call ki wajeh se hospital jana hai so u both take care
n kaya rushed out to her car n drove away
gauri jus ran towards tina's room coz she can't wait to meet tina
gauri now at tina's room's door
gauri:tina yeh kya still on computer(laughs)
tina:areee di as (she got up from the chair n hugged gauriii)dii u didn't even tell me ur going to come from the evening flight other wise…. Okk live it pahley too did u see the new movie my gooddd emran's new hair style he looks such hot aur train dekha wow that was gr8888(she said non stop) chaloo I kno inme se koi bhi nahi dakhee app ne sooo I hve all the movies with me pahle kon sii n even last time we planed for icecream treat soo wat abt that one we have to taste soo many new flavours ………..and wat abt…
gauri:bas bas abb chup ho jao sab kuch plan kiya hai main ne dadi to aane hi nahi de rahi thi but I convinced her abb let me get freshed aur hai kaya masi emergency call ki wajhey se hospital gai hai
tina:ya to phir hum dono raat bahr movie dekh saktey hai
gauri(laughs):sure
tina: frist u get fresh upp till then I'll jus check the new web site its gr888
gauri:sure (n got inside the washroom to take a quick bath)
then gauri's phone rang
tina:agr office walon ka hua too I m going to through the phone abhi dii ghar aye nahi kii bas suru ho gay yeh log
tina picking up the phone:hi tina here
mr kapoor:oh tina beta how r u?
tina:oh chachoo me fine
mr kapoor:is gauri there ??
tina : nahi she is in the washroom
mr kapoor:okk jab gauri aajay to use bolna kii apna presentation check kar le coz kal subha vivan aur gauri ko present kar na hai soo I won't be there is wajhey se
tina(thinking):yeh chachoo bhi na bas jab dekho to gauri di ko har kaam detey hai
mr kapoor:tina kya hua
tina:no nothing I will surely tell her
mr kapoor :okk beta take care n say gauri to do check the presentation
tina:sure(keeping the phone) godd yeh chachoo bhi na waise bhi dad aaregey hai to maza ayega ga abb to mom to pattana hi padega(saying this again she was back to her chair on the computer)
gauri(came out off the washroom):tina kiska phone tha
tina(acting busy now):cahchooo ka
gauri:wat abhi dad ne call kiya
tina: ha humara plan kharab karne ke liye
gauri:matlab wat do u mean??
Tina:presentation kal hai to he told kii check ur presentation
Gauri:oh ya I jus forgot too par dad kal aarehey hai na
Tina:nahi merey dad aarahey hai
Gauri(tear rolled form her eye side) :koi baat nahi
Tina(now a bit upset but was conformed wat she is gona say):dii app ko to pata hai kii ipshita aur voila kaise hai to phir app kyun rotii hai
Gauri:nahi main who bas ……………….
Tina:bas kya dii app bhi nah agar chachoo nahi aye to kya hua app to hamesha kit rah jitoo gii
Gauri:but agar who hotey to accha hota
Tina: wat accha hota its all hamesha ki trah never ever there in ur success
Aur us pagal vaila ki wajhey se sabb kuch ho raha hai
Gauri:aree tina live it waise bhi as u said hamesha kit rah agar dad nahi huay to kay
Tina:good u got it (turning back to computer screen)dii feeling hungry
Gauri:okk let me see wat we have in kichen
Gauri walking out off the room n now was in kichen
Gauri speking to herself:to kya hua ki dad nahi aye to kya hua kii dad ne ek phone bhii nahi kiya ki tomorrow is my one off the biggest day or he didn't even said best off luck it all as usual nothing changed n gauri cried saying this as she remembered her mom
Tina came rushing to the kitchen gaurii di app ke liye phone
Gauri wiped her tears n turned :kiska ka phone hai
Tina:shiv ka
Gauri:wat yeh kya bol rahii ho
Tina:app se to main baad me baat karongii pahley to app shiv se baat kigia
Gauri(still wondaring ):wat the hell r u speaking
Tina(handing the phone to gauri): talk to him
Gauri:yup gauri here
Shiv:gauri kya tum abhi yahan aasaktii ho
Gauri:abhii
Shiv:ha abhii coz tomorrow ur presentation is there
Gauri:ya tomorrow is my presentation
Shiv:yeah so kapoor group n basu group will we presenting so we r the one kahanaa's whom the company win's the presentation will be working with
Gauri:wat but no one told me that I was not informed oh shiv I m getting confused
Shiv: gauri plss u come over here I will tell u I kno that its confusing u as u were jus told to present soo doo come over here I'll be wating
Gauri:sure I'll be coming jus give ur address to tina so now I m going to get ready
Shiv:sure I'll be waiting
As gauri handed the phone to tina
Tina:hi frist off all I m tina the gr88 well can I call u sk
Shiv:sk???
Tina:ya short form shiv kahnna
Shiv:whatever u feel like
Tina:that's too sweet off u sk
Shiv:tina dear note down my address
Tina:ya sure(as she noted down the address) we will be there
Shiv:okk bye sweety
Tina:bye (n kept the phone down n ran towards the room )
Tina:gauri dii r u ready come letz go
Gauri dressed in her finest new suit off bluen white combination
Tina:wow dii u look gr888 waise bhi sk to already apna dil har chuke hai
Gauri (smiled): abb chalna nahi hai
Tina: sure chalye
Gauri n tina rushed to the car n drove away
Now tina in the car:to dii mujhey battna zaroori nahi samjha mujhey
Gauri:kya ohh if ur talking abt the presentation soo I don't think soo ki tumhey koi intrest hai
Tina:I m talking abt sk why didn't u tell me he was here
Gauri:okk I m so sorry
Tina:wat sorry u would have told me
Gauri:abb kya jay ke mil lena
Tina:accha dii tell how he looks
Gauri:short me bolon to bilkul tall dark n handsome
Tina:ohhhh soo yeh baat hai yani ki aag dono traf hai
Gauri:wat do u mean
Tina:u won't understand
As now gauri stoped the car near the house off shiv
Gauri :tina where's my phone
Tina:mujhey kya patta
Gauri:wat do u mean I'll have to inform kaya masi
Tina:abb live it pls abhi chaloo shiv se milna hai
Gauri :godd abb main kay karon koi baat nahi ,lets go ...............

hope this will do maria sweety i kno it was short but i'll try to update tomorrow hope i didn't confuse u guys !! if it is soo then tell me abt it n soo plss comment i'll be waiting for ur commentss!!!!

with all love kitty😉

gr8888888888888888888888 update kitty 👏

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its really nice 😉 u updated inshallah i will also update 😃
continue good work 😉 😉 😉

Originally posted by: fida-cute

gr8888888888888888888888 update kitty 👏

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its really nice 😉 u updated inshallah i will also update 😃
continue good work 😉 😉 😉

hehehe 😆😆falak thank you 😉n keep reading

soo i'll be waiting for ur ff😉me wat every one will be waiting!!!

Originally posted by: koolkitty

hope this will do maria sweety finally you updated...😆 i was waiting for it. i kno it was short lambi likhne ko bola tha but anyway it was very good. so shiv and gauri are going out han. yaar yeh kabab me hadi kyun dal di tum ne. i was actually glad that both are thinking about each other.hope tina will bring them close. some how she tells that shiv is marrying gauri not voila. but i'll try to update tomorrow hope shahbash jadi se kyun ke me ne apnu dhamki abhi wapis nahi li. kaim ho us pe. i didn't confuse u guys !! if it is soo then tell me abt it n soo plss comment i'll be waiting for ur commentss!!!!

with all love kitty😉

overall a very nice update. but you take too long. i will be waiting for the next part hopefully it will be tomorrow not after one week. 👏

Originally posted by: crystalclear

overall a very nice update. but you take too long. i will be waiting for the next part hopefully it will be tomorrow not after one week. 👏

😆i gess i m not sure ki can i update or not😆

thank u so much it was jus for u 😳