AarYa FF The Homecoming - Epilogue - Page 85 ....updated- Page 60

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update & lovely ending.
Lvd it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful.nice ending.loved it.
thanks for giving a great ff
will be waiting for your new works

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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful one... 👏
its a beautiful way to bring ishitha back and bridge the gap b/n yash and ishitha...
such a nice way to conclude their journey till now with a lot of celebrations for their journey to continue beyond our imagination...

a brilliant writer👏...
its wonderful to be a part of this journey...
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wishing u a great time ahead...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago




Thank you my dear friends for all your lovely comments...

@ Chitra --- I Love you so much!

Your comments kept me going to write more and more...as you already know I am not too much into the number of likes I get for my work...

And I wish to express my gratitude with another quote ----

"Words mean more than what is set down on paper. It takes the human voice to infuse them with shades of deeper meaning."

Maya Angelou


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@ Nirmala --- You are such a sweet friend --- the first one from the PV forum who became my FB friend...thanks dear for all your love and prayers for me...


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@ Sharlene ---- You've read my other works as well ---- Thank you for all your love my dear God bless you!


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@ annirog --- I don't know your name but a sincere thanks to you for reading all my work and leaving a comment --- the most encouraging and lovely ones... Thank you so much!


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@ saf24 --- I remember the first time I wrote a fiction I was so nervous but I got so many friend requests and since then you have been so encouraging and your comments are bang on --- reading the inner feelings of the characters I've tried to portray. Thank you so much my dear!


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@ caller123 ---aka ---Kate --- I know many people don't reveal their original names here but I love your support for my writings all along. Thank you!


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@alekhikha --- Your few words say a lot as you have never let any PM of mine go unnoticed and have promptly read the update and commented. In our busy lives it means a lot as people like you are so wonderful to know. God bless you dear!


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@ ksen --- another great reader who has now started commenting too though I am one lazy one in sending out PMs. Thank you - thank you - thank you so much! All your words are cherished always and loved your support for me. Thanks again.


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@ Rosey --- Thank you are two small words --- but need to be used as many times as possible for those special people who make us see our worth when we think we aren't worthy. Thank you my friend for all your love, encouragement and good wishes. God bless you with all the happiness in the world.


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Posted: 11 years ago
Shanti. 🤗
I don't know from where to begin. As every time you leave me speechless. 👏

I doth know why, but whenever I sat to read this OS, after reading 2-3 chapters I got busy with something or the other and couldn't read further. Then when I got time, I had to start from the beginning.
Then the same thing repeated again. But I'm also very ziddi. I finally read all chapters. I was waiting for the epilogue to finally comment.

Shanti I read that you mentioned that this FF is based on the movie "Navrang". I have seen that movie only once and that also when I was a kid, so I don't remember the story. And now I don't have the source to watch it. After reading this story, I want to watch that movie, as I love old classics.

Now coming to this story...

WOW ⭐️

The way you played with past and present is mind blowing.

Yash had made it clear that he won't be able to accept her as his wife, yet Aarti still agreed for the marriage. Though she said it was for Palak and Payal, yet she never hid her true feelings from him. I loved that.
She made her own dream world with her own dream Yash. In the last dream scene I somehow knew that this Yash was real. Real Yash was able to bring her out of her dream world and showed her that sometimes reality is far more beautiful than a dream.

Though I was angry with Yash in the beginning for going to Ishita every night even after his marriage. Yet what I loved about him was that he maintained his distance. He knew his limits. After he fell in love with Aarti, he didn't forced her to take their relationship to the next level. He warier and gave her the night that she deserved and waited for so long.

Ishita's and Prashant's characters, especially Ishita's deserve a ⭐️. She proved to be a true friend and well wisher. Though I personally wanted Yash to find out what she did for him, That she was the real Reason for his HomeComing. But I'll Settle with your POV.

Shanti this was another masterpiece from you. ⭐️
My only regret is that I couldn't write my comment in more detail.

I know that you are busy with personal life, but I sincerely hope and wish that we will get another story from you. Actually I have a request to make to you regarding a story. I'll PM you later.

Take care and Thank You for another dreamy journey of AarYa.

Love you and Bless You ❤️


Edited - sorry I forgot to add.
This line
"For Yash, it was like finding his lost love and for Aarti it was her only love!"

Stole my heart.
This simple line said everything about their relationship. ⭐️


Edited by lovely_nikki - 11 years ago
kmfan_2 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Nikki and Sara for such a lovely response...
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update dear and a very lovely ending,,loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Shanthi

Finally i am back to where i belong to yeah kind of homecoming for me too

I thot to read last 3 missed chapters but then this story of yours have different flavour n for me one fo jumbled up

So It may sound silly to you but i have gone thru each page to relish the essence of story starting page1 onwards in btwn your journey where you have someone fallen sick to best wishes you got from lovely ppl there

Hayee aarti dream after their first anniversary, her selfless nature in beginning which come up more prominent in 2nd chapter the gal i see is beyond my imagination..

A song aarti felt after seeing gals n poor me feeling for gal who is geeting married to your sadu yash

tujhse naaraz nahin zindagi hairan hoon main

I am not upset with you, life.. I am astonished


tere masoom sawaalon se pareshan hoon main

I am distressed by your innocent questions



jeene ke liye sochaa hi nahin dard sambhaalne honge

I did not think that in order to live, I would have to take care of woes...


muskuraye to muskurane ke karz utaarne honge

To smile, I would have to take on the debt of smiling


muskuraye jo kabhi to lagta hai jaise hothon pe karz rakha hai

If I were to smile, it seems that I would have to incure this debt upon my lips



aankh agar bhar aai hain boondein baras jayengi

Today, if my eyes fill with tears, then they will fall...


kal kya pata kis ke liye aankhen taras jayengi

Who knows whom these eyes will wait for tomorrow...


jaane kahan gum hua kahan kho gaya

Who knows where I lost...


ek aansoo chhupa ke rakha tha

The one tear I had kept hidden...



zindagi tere gham ne hume rishte naye samjhaye

Life, your sorrows have taught us new bonds...


dhoop mein mile jo bhi mile pyar ke thande saaye...

Whomever you shall meet in the sunlight, you will feel the cool shade of love...

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Posted: 11 years ago

In btwn i read your comment saying we all dream somewhere before wedding well now i can say yeah we all have dream sequence but as we are blessed we get to share those with your would be

You know you are making me fall in love with woman shanthi you carved so much affection, innocence , charm and ladylike features yet crystal n clear thoughts i am going gaga over her or i shud say your imagination

YASH ke liye i have nothing to say you know how much i love to ignore him but cant coz of aarti n you so will say lemme njy the flow

I recently posted this song in kate ff from yash pov but yahan toh hamari aarti hero hai so for her Bebasi, Dard Ka Aalam

There's restlessness and an atmosphere of pain

Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Gham

Give me all Your sadness/grief

Bebasi, Dard Ka Aalam

There's restlessness and an atmosphere of pain

Ho... Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Gham

Give me all Your sadness

Khamoshiyaan Bhi Do, Tanhaiyaan Bhi Do

Give me Your silences, give me Your loneliness

Bechainiyaan Bhi De Do, De Do Na...

Give me Your anxiety, please give me



Bheegi Palkon Se Chura Lunga Nami

From your drenched eyes, I'll take away all the moisture

Rehne Dunga Na, Kahin Koi Kami

I won't let any shortcomings remain

Hey...

Bheegi Palkon Se Chura Lunga Nami

From your drenched eyes, I'll take away all the moisture

Rehne Dunga Na, Kahin Koi Kami

I won't let any shortcomings remain

Tumko Daaman Na Bhigone Dunga

I won't let Your wet Your dress (with Your tears)

Ab Kabhi Tumko Na Rone Dunga

I won't let Your cry again

Uljhane, Gham Ki Parchhayee

There's confusion and a shadow of sadness

Ho... De Do Mujhe, Apni Tanhaaye

Give me Your loneliness

Gumnaamiyaan Bhi Do, Naakaamiyaan Bhi Do

Give me Your oblivion, give me Your failures

Viraaniyaan Bhi De Do, De Do Na...

Give me Your lonesomeness, please give me



Tere Hothon Pe Saja Dunga Hansi

I will decorate a smile on Your lips

Teri Raahon Mein, Bichha Dunga Khushi

I'll spread happiness on Your path

Ho... Hey...

Tere Hothon Pe Saja Dunga Hansi

I will decorate a smile on Your lips

Teri Raahon Mein, Bichha Dunga Khushi

I'll spread happiness on Your path

Tum Mujhe Apna Maanti Ho Agar

If You consider me Yours/a close one

Yun Khafa Hoke Na Jhukao Nazar

Don't be upset and throw a downward gaze

Mushkilein, Apni Majboori

Your troubles, Your compulsions

Ho... De Do Mujhe, Saari Benoori

Give me Your darkness

(Give me Your life's darkness)

Pareshaniyaan Bhi Do, Hairaniyaan Bhi Do

Give me Your troubles, give me Your worries

Nigehbaniyaan Bhi De Do, De Do Na...

Give me Your guardianship, please give me

(Let me become Your guardian/Please let me take care of You)



Bebasi, Dard Ka Aalam

There's restlessness and an atmosphere of pain

Hey... Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Gham

Give me all Your sadness

Khamoshiyaan Bhi Do, Tanhaiyaan Bhi Do

Give me Your silences, give me Your loneliness

Bechainiyaan Bhi De Do, De Do Na...

Give me Your anxiety, please give me

Mmm... Naa... De Do Na...

Please give me
I am on page 18 will come back with lot more as gtg will come back by evening cya
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Posted: 11 years ago
One of my favorite I wish to have more ... 😉

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