SwaRon FF Life Partners *note on pg 78* on 11/4/16* - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Tan.vish.K

What was that?? 😲

At first I thought it must be a love marriage
Then I thought that maybe Sharon was happy but not Swayam
But you blew me off completely!!!
This was completely different from what one who think is going to happen
And that is a great move I must say 👏
A very different and refreshing concept dear
It was fun to read this chapter and I'm awaiting the upcoming one's
Really eager to know more
Just a request please post longer chapters its fun to read them 😳
Keep sending in PM's and Update soon


P.S Thanks for the PM 😃
P.S.S Sorry for the late feedback 😳

thank u😊
glad tat u liked it😊
n hope next time u r satisfied with the length of the chapter😃
bt this chapter had to be ended here😊
m updating soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: yoyoaishwarya

😛 loving ff
Loved their fight
Hope 4best , it will turn into lov
Update soon 😛

thank u😊
glad tat u liked it😊
m updating soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

unexpeted twisted cnspt. Lvd it waiting fr d next part.

thank u😊
m updating soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Nishi.Kss

Shock laga laga laga shock laga! o.O 🤣

quite a twist of the story in the first chap itself. you are going to shine as a writer :P
Loved SwaRon's bickering. How irritatingly cute it was. :P
really eager to read more of this FF.
Thanks for the PM and sorry for late comment :/

Cheers
Nishi

thank u😊
glad tat u liked it😊
m updating soon😊
n its ok dear for late comment😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.

^Unreserving^
Holy God!I was completely clueless about this ff. . .You didnt send me the pm for prologue mansi 😡

And thank you so much Sweetheart ki tumne meri baat mani and that you didnt quit because you are one amazing emerging writer 😊

Coming to the ff oh god!I was lyk so happy reading the prologue and the chapter. . .Like totally twisted!At first i thought Swayam isnt happy but haila ye kya Sharon v 😕

Their bickering lol. . .Amazing Mansi!Continue supersoon 😃

thank u dida fr commenting😃
n maine apko PM bheja tha sachi
bt m glad tat u like it😊
m updating supersoon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Beautifully written baby
Glad u didn't leave writing
Thxxx
Sooo srry had net problem
really srry
bdw kya update tha
twist queen ban gayi huh
p.o.v mast likhe the
Loved itn u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Beautifully written baby
Glad u didn't leave writing
Thxxx
Sooo srry had net problem
really srry
bdw kya update tha
twist queen ban gayi huh
p.o.v mast likhe the
Loved itn u

thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Mansi98


</div>OMG too long comment😲
<div>bt i love when u guys gave such long long comments😃
n by the way it has to be ended there only😊

tere chappal tere paas rakh i dont want tat i will take away ur ballet type shoes that black vale😆

chori chupe😈

n its my mistake that i told u wat is coming next in the storry now i wont tell that😆

m updating soon😊


Wow vry long reply n i will alwaysgive u long comment my bff 😳
N chori haww gandi baat n waise bhi jo mere hei wohtera hi hei as we r bffs ...its ur's nly
Love u my bff 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Update update update update 😈
I want update n if u didn't update today them mei tujse katti 🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Holla guys😊 Here is the 2nd chapter😊
chitra di dis is fr u😃
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(Banner credits goes to shini aka shinningshanu)
Chapter 2

Next day sharon woke up by a knock on the door she lazily woke up n opened the door there was taani standing with smile on her face n said"good morning bhabhi"

"good morning dear"replied sharon with a smile on her face

"by the way y r u standing outside come in na"said sharon pulling taani along with her taani saw there was a pillow on the sofa n asked "bhabhi pillow sofa par kyu hai?"

sharon doesnt know what to reply she was confused wheter to tell her the truth or not then she thought its better if taani doesnt knows about it.

"arey vo pillow extra tha na to swayam ne usse udhar rakh diya"said sharon making a silly excuse.

"ohk,vaise mai jo kehne aai thi vo to bhul hi gayi that apko aaj kisi ritual ke liye apko 7 baje kitchen jana hai yaad to haina?"said taani.

"oh shit mai to bhul hi gai"said sharon in hyper mode n looked at watch then she sighed as it was still time for her to get ready as it was 6:30.

"Thank u so much taani agar tum mujhe nai uthati to patanai kya ho jata"said sharon

"arey bhabhi ab kya aap esi choti choti baat ki liye mujhe thanks bolege,acha chaliye ab aap taiyar hojaiye varna late ho jayega n ya bhai ko bhi utha lena"said taani with smile and left the room.

as soon as taani left the room sharon started running here n there she picked up her bag,n take her towel out as soon as she started taking out her clothes she remebered taani words to wake up swayam,so she left her bag n went towards the bed she saw swayam sleeping like a baby hugging his pillow n had a smile on his face his forehead was covered by his silky long hairs and she was lost in him automatically her lips turn in to u shaped n she started smiling but suddenly she changed her smile in to a confused look"why am i smiling seeing him?maybe because he is cuet.cuet n he noways..stop it pata nai mai kya soch rahi hu,swayam ko uthana hai usse uthati hu"thought sharon.

she started waking up swayam by calling his name bt it didnt worked then she started waking him up by shaking his hand but it also didnt work she tired all his efforts bt swayam didnt wake up at last she thought to wake him up by sprinkling water on him bt then she thought why to sprinkle water but she should throw water on him

sharon saw glass on te table and she smiled with an evil smirk she took the glass n in seconds it was emptied on swayam.swayam suddenly woke up n started glaring at sharon.

"kya ghur kya rahe ho?maine tumhe siddhe se uthani ki bohat koshih ki bt tum uthe hi nahi to mai kya karti"said sharon with attitude on her face.

"tumhe muje uthane ki kya zarurat thi,kisne tumhe invitation nai diya tha"said swayam showing his big eyes to sharon.

"diya tha,taani ne kaha tha"said sharon.

"jhuth bol rahi hona mujhe pareshan karne ke liye tumne ye sab kiya,ab dekho mai kya karunga"said swayam challenging her

"ok 5in tumhe jo samajhna hai samjho i just dont care do whatever u want to do"said sharon and went to washroom picking her towel.

"iski toh..patanai khudhko kya samjhti hai"said swayam to himself.

"pata nai khudko kya samjhta hai"said sharon to herself.

After sometime sharon opened the door of the washroom and lokked hereand there she saw swayam was sleeping and his eyes were closed then she looked at the door it was locked she sighed and started walking towards her bag slowly slowly making sure she doesnt makes any noise and looking at swayam to make sure he is not seeing her

in the mean time swayam opened his eyes and looked at sharon he was completely flabbergasted as sharon was only wrapped in a towel which ended just above her knees sharon also saw him opening his eyes and looking at her she immediately closed her eyes in embarrasment but swayam he was just looking at her and was admirring her.

Her wet hairs touching her nape,the waterdrops on her forehead,her eyes closed in embarresment"she is looking damm hot and cuet at the same time"thought swayam

Sharon opened her eyes expecting swayam turn around or eyes closed but she was wrong swayam was watching her with his full eyes open it seems he was gawking at her

"dekh kya rahe apni ankhe bandh karo u shameless crep"said sharon with anger.

hearing this swayam came out from his thoughts and realised he was gawking at her immediately he closed his eyes and turn around.

as soon as swayam turn around she immediately took her clothes and run at full speed in to the washroom.

"gosh why was i gawking at her,no no i was not gawking mai to sirf dekh raha tha,but kyu dekh raha tha?pata nai...oh god what the hell am i thinking,its all because of her mai kya karta agar wo itni cuet n hot..."said swayam talking with himself but stopped as he heard the knob of the washroom door opened.

Door opened and sharon entered wearing a red anarkali dress his back was facing her he started to turn around but stopped in his tracks as he was embarrased to turn around due to gawking incident.

Sharon was also embarresed she immediately went to the dressing table and started drying her hairs putting towel on the bed and immediately swayam run in to washroom holding his clothes n his towel in his hand.

Next Chapter

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so guys howz was it😊
Do give ur reviews will be waiting
N most importantaly comment BIG😃
replies for the previous chapter are added from pg 7 to 10
P.P.S.-my exams r going on plz dnt say its short
P.P.P.S-Hope u guys will understand me😊
love
Mansi
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago

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