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That was ... That was !!!!! Just MARVELLOUS !!!!!!!
It was seriously a master piece !!!!!!
I don't know what to say ... I am just dumbfound !!!!
It was sooo good and funny too at the same time !
Yay I commented early ...
The leaning against the wall scene was sooo we'll written
More than the stuff they do.. It is the stuff they say which really gives me goosebumps.. It is just perfect
and that is obviously because of your writing skills..
And I you know how I love sandhir kisses when you write them ...😳😳
Randhir is soo tempted to kiss her like all the time ... Lol
Even Sanyu actually !!!!!! She knows it is impossible to not kiss him..lol
I loved their leaning against the wall make out..
They are my biggest weaknesses ...along with neck kisses... Esp when you write them !!!!😆
And the way he lifts her ... Ooh gosh!!!so romantic.. So quick.. He needs her equally.. And then the way he silences her with his kiss while carrying her... Super loved it !!!!
And I also like the part where he says "you're still my girlfriend "
And I am smiling like an idiot...
The romantic scenes were sooo well written ... I don't have to tell you that...
I adored the way they were playing little games with each other., stopping half way.. And tempting the other... Lol
And Sanyu is so smart... She went for the kill... Touching his private area...
This was sooo well written yaaa...I just love to read this when you write them...
He kisses her very often Naa.. ALMOST LIKE he can't go a day without kissing her .. Like you mentioned in the initial part of the story ... And the "I love you part " ... I was shocked when Sanyu said it ... And even more surprised when Randhir reciprocated ... Awww ...
I love that they have reached this stage in their relationship you know !!!!
Yayyy ... They have come so far... I am really liking the way this story is progressing ..and it is still day 1 ... I love it when they spend the night like this.,in each other's arms.. Third time they have
Okay I have lost it...lol..this ff makes me crazy
And thank you again for this super amazing chapter...
I hope I didn't miss anything... My battery is dying..so i'll post before it goes off..
Omg ... I just love you like so so so so much !!!!
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