Kitne Door…Kitne Paas FF Final Part p101! - Page 49

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Hi friends sorry for taking long…again…but I guess ur getting used to it. It's a filler type update…so very sorry…it's a little short too 😕 …will try and make up for in the next update. I thought I'd better post something up like I promised…I hate breaking promises u see! 😃 If its bad…comment…if its good…still then comment.
Haila…I just notice something…it's a year 2mrw since I joined KS forum 2nd July …baap re…and its almost a year since I started this ff and its still going…wow!!! 😃 Never thought it would continue like this! 😃 But I have to thank u guys for it! 🤗 U guys have been mainly responsible for keeping this ff going! Love u all. 🤗Thanx also to all those who made my time as MOTW so enjoyable and memorable!!! 😃
Taz 😃


Part- 74 Jooth Bole Kauva Kaate! (thanx for the title Rama! 🤗)

Jai (entering): Bahut mazaa aaya na…is tarah chori chupke ghar mein ghus kar…

Bani (giggling): Kisiko pata bhi nahin chala! 😃

Atharv (frowning): Aap dono kahaan gaye the???? (hands on hips…looking angry...wanting answers) 😡 😉

Jai and Bani stood rooted to the spot! The little guy was up!!!! Already found his way to their room and was waiting for an answer!

Atharv: Bataye!!!! (looking at Bani from top to bottom)… Mama… aapki saree? Apne papa ka jacket kyun pehna? Aapki sandal? (kitne sawaal!)

Bani, looked horrified…god this kids eyes were sharp.

Bani (ran upto Atharv and hugged him 🤗): Mere Atharv beta…utha gaye?

Atharv (pushing away): Aap ke kapde gile hai…ewwww 🤢…(frowns again)…aap log park mein gaye the na? Phir water fight kiya…mujhe nahin le gaye! 😔 😔 (on the verge of crying)

Jai: Atharv…aisa…kuch nahin…woh hum…

Atharv: Aap jooth keh rahe hai…..(starts crying out really loudly) 😭 😭 😭 …aap log park gaye the…mujhe nahin le gaye…mein aapse baat nahin karta…(rubbing his eyes crying…)

Bani: Mr. Walia…sambhaaliye na isse…mein ek minute mein change kar ke aye. (Bani dashed off to the bathroom)

Jai: Atharv beta….yahaan aao…(Atharv.kicks him in the leg and screams his way out of the room)

Jai: Owww……Atharv…Junior…sunno toh sahi….(running after him…Atharv runs into Rano)

Rano: Kya hua beta??

Atharv (wraps his arms around Rano): Rano Masi….yeh dono bahaar ghoom ne gaye aur mujhe nahin le gaye? 😡 😭 Yeh donooooo…(pointing aggressively)…water fight kiya!!! Mujhe nahin legaye…(cries louder…then runs off to his room, Jai sighs.)

Rano: So I guess u guys just got back hey? Jaldi aagaye hote…u know what he's like and what happened to u why do u look all…damp?

Jai: Rano…it's a long and entertaining story…phir kabhi bataunga 😉…abhi I need to talk to Atharv. (Bani, at that momen came out of the bathroom in her nighty)

Bani (coming out): Kahaan hai mera Atharv…

Rano: Woh apne kamre mein bhaag gaya…

Bani raced off into Atharvs room, where she found him siting on the bed…legs crossed, sulking. 😔

Bani, quickly sat up next to him, taking him in her arms.

Bani: Mera munna….my baby….beta hum park nahin gaye the…woh hum…hum…haan….(lying are we?)…. doctor ke paas gaye the…meri tabyat theek nahin thi na issilye. Phir woh…baarish hue na issilye bheeg gayi thi…tumhe lagta hai mein apne Atharv ko chhod ke masti karne jaa sakti hoon. (rocking him... holding him very tightly…kissing his forehead)…mera munna toh sabse accha baccha hai, haina?

Atharv: Mama…I missed u! 😔 Raat ko bhi nahin the….(wrapping his small arms around her neck 🤗)

Bani: Sorry beta …main tumhaare paas hi aa rahi thi raat ko…lekin tum raat ko jaldi sau gaye the na apne papa paas…haina?

Atharv, nods. 😔

Bani: Chalo abhi rona bandh karo… smile karo…(starts to tickle him…making him giggle…then squeezes him tightly) Mera bacha 🤗

Jai (entered): Bani…is he ok??

Bani: Haan…maine samjha diya isse…(winking 😉)

Atharv: Papa!!!!! 😃 (runs upto him...Jai picks him up)

Jai (kissing his forehead): U ok? Sorry we went without telling u…just ur Mama wanted to go for a walk aur hum chale gaye.

Atharv (looks at Bani..then at Jai): Aap log walk pe gaye the??…Mujhe saath nahin le gaye!!!!! 😡 (starts thumping Jai and squirms his way down 😡) Dono…joothhhhhhhhhh bol rahe hai….main sab ko keh raha!!!! (dashes…out not before kicking Jai one last time)…(oh god…Jai u put ur foot in it now!)

Bani: Mr. Walia!!! Aap ne walk ka kyun kahan….i told him we went to see the doctor…aur aap….

Jai: Mujhe kya pata…we shouldn't have lied to him…sach hi keh dete ke issiki behn ko laana ke intezaam kar rahe the…(laughs 😆)

Bani: Mr. Walia…aapko mazaak sooj raha…jaaye rokiye…samjhaye usse…poore ghar ko sar pe utha dega…Go!!!!

Atharv (outside): Dadiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!

Bani 😲: Oh god…rokiye usse…sab ko bata dega yeh ke hum bahaar gaye the….

Masi (starts shouting): Munna….Bani!!!

Jai: Now why has Masi started screaming? 😕

Masi (screams out again) : Munna, Bani…jaldi aao!

Atharv (getting to Masi first): Dadiiiiii…kya hua??

Masi: Beta…tere Papa kidhar…hai…Munnaaaaaaa!!!

Jai: Yeh Masi ko kya hua? Why is she shouting like that first thing in the morning?

The entire Walia clan arrive into Masi's room

Ranveer: Masi…kya baat hai? Aise kyun cheeki aap?

Jai: Haan Masi…what happened?

Masi: Munna..koi ghar mein ghus hoga shayad…koi chor…mere kamre ke khidki khuli hai aur yeh dekho…(pointing to that stick that was holding the window up)

Bani and Jai look at each other!!! 😳 😲 😳 ( u guys have had it! 😆)

Atharv: Hohhhhhhhhhh….chor hai ghar mein!!! 😲 Kahaan? Mein doondh ta hoon!!! (ja mera sher!! 😆) (runs around all over the farmhouse trying to find someone. Saahil also joined him. Jai and Bani look at each other…thinking "oh heck ab kya?")

Saahil (coming back): Mamaji…ghar mein toh koi nahin hai…aur kuch chori bhi nahin hua …(looking around)

Aditya: Yeh kaisa chor hai…bina chori kiya hai bhaag gaya? Police ko inform karde iske baare mein?

Jai (butting in): Nahin…police ki kya zaroorat hai…(looking at the window) Hmmm…kisine aane ki koshish ki hogi…magar shayad bhaag gaya hoga…jab kisi cheez ki chor hi nahin hue hai toh police ko bulaane ki kya zaroorat hai…don't worry Masi…relax …sab theek lagta hai…(looks at Bani…who is red in the face 😳)

Rano (whispers into Bani's ear): Didi..aap dono kahin….iss…(Bani coughs)

Masi: Beta tum theek kehte ho beta…sorry sab ko utha diya maine…bas darr gayi thi…actually mujhe ek awaaz bhi aye thi…magar biji ke kaha kuch nahin hoga.

Dadi: Hai hai billo..agar tum utha gaye hoti toh kya hota? Hum dono pe humla hua hota toh???

Ranveer: Arre Dadi joh nahin hua uske baare mein kyun sochna…bas aaj raat sab khidkiyan band rakhna..theek hai…abhi sab apna mood kharaab mat karo…we came here for some fun right?

Jai: Ri…right!!! Chalo sab tayaar hokar naashte par milte hai.

Bani and Jai both look at each other and sigh with relief, all are heading back to their rooms, when….

Atharv: Dadiiiiiiiiiiiii…yeh dekhiye….(shouting from outside)….sandal!!!!!!! (Baap re 😲…this kid is smart detective or what…we all know where he gets that from! 😆)

Bani's eyes pop out!!! 😲 😲 (Girl u forgot about that lost sandal didn't u? 😆)

Dadi: Sandal?? Chor tha ya chorni???

Masi: Yeh kiski sandal hai???

Atharv: Mama ki!!! Yehi hi chor hai!!!!! Yehh…yeh…yeh…!!!! 😡

Everyone turns and looks at Bani.

Jai: Arre Atharv…yeh..yeh…sandal toh kisiki bhi ho sakti hai…

Atharv: Nahinnnnn…Mama ki hai…pata hai Dadiiii…yeh dono ghoome gaye the…mujhe saath nahin le gaye…😡…jhooote haiiii!!! Mama ne papa ka jacket pehna tha…aur saree bhi nahin thi!!! (Haila...don't miss out any details will u! 😆)

Bani, just wanted to hide!!! 😳 Atharv had a even bigger mouth than his father.

Atharv: Haina Mama…aap dono ghoom ne gaye the na? 😡 (hands on his hips) Chori se ghar mein aaye the…maine pakda!!!! (bahut pol khol raha hai dono ki! 😆)

Dadi: Yeh Atharv kya keh raha Bani beta…tum yahaan?

Jai: Woh actually kuch nahin…bas…😳…

Bani, dashed off to her room! 😳 😳

Masi: Bol beta…mein sun rahi hoon…kahaan gaye the tum dono?

Jai, looked at Atharv, who was smirking.

Atharv: Haha!!! Papa ko daantenge Dadi!!!

Masi, looked at Atharv, smiled then looked at Jai who was quiet for a change…she understood everything that it was them that sneaked in through the window after a night out it seems, walks over to Jai.

Masi: Bolo Munna….kahaan gaye the? Aur mere Atharv ko saath kyun nahin le gaye?? (pulls his ear!)

Atharv (laughs): Dadi…aur zor se!!!! (Heyyyy!)

Jai: Owww.......Masi…woh hum…actually…

Masi, pretends to hit Jai!!!

Atharv: Aur maariye!!!! 😃

Masi: Jooth bolte ho!! Sharam nahin aati!!!

Atharv: Papa Joothe!!!! Joothe!!!

Jai: Atharv!!! (Jai jumps out of the window…and chases Atharv…out in the garden…Atharv…laughing his way around…)

All watch and laugh at Jai trying to catch Atharv, Jai finally got a hold of him… and put him on the grass and tickled him away!!![]=))

Jai: Bahut masti karte ho….kyun?? Mazaa aata hai Papa ko parishaan karne mein kyun?? (tickles him so more) Kal bhi mujhe bheego diya…aur aaj Masi se maar khilawaadi!!! 🤣

Atharv: Sorrrrryyyyyy Papa…(laughs 🤣)

Jai: That's more like…(picking him up) abhi kissy do?? (Atharv pecks Jai's cheek then hugs him tightly)

Atharv: Magar Papa…aap kahaan gaye the???

Jai: Sachi bol doon?

Atharv: Haan

Jai: Bhawaanji se pray karne gaye the…ke Atharv ko ek gudiya jaisi behn mile.

Atharv: Sachi…bhanwanji baat sunenge???? 😃 Kab aayegi??? Jaldi laye na…mujhe khelna hai….(Awwww…)

Jai (chuckles and thinks): Koshish kar rahe hai beta….(to Atharv) chal ab tum andar jao..Mama paas…tayaar ho jao phir hum aaj ka koi accha sa plan banate hai…masti karni haina??

Atharv: Yessss…(gets down and runs back into the farmhouse)

Jai (looks up): Bhagwan in dono ki khwaaish jaldi poori karna plzzz…(heads back inside)
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Later that morning Jai joined Saahil and Ranveer outside who were busy working out.

Varun: Jai Uncle…Papa kitne strong hai!!! (watching Saahil workout)

Atharv: Varun…mere Papa bhi kar sakte hai..haina??? Papa apna top utaariye…(Jai takes his t-shirt off and sits down on the bench..picking up a dumb-bell) Dekha….kitne strong hai…( squeezing his biceps) (yes we all love them biceps 😍 😆)

Jai,smiled at Atharv…then glanced over to the house where Bani, stood in at the window, in her gown drying her hair and watching him closely…

Jai (taking a deep breath as he continued to work his arms…thinks): Yeh Bani bhi na…haalat kharaab karne pe tuli hai...(sighing)

Bani gave him a dazzling smile then indicated with her finger to come over….Jai dropped the dumb-bell on the ground that instance. Bani laughed as she saw him heading towards her.

Atharv: Papa..kahaan jaa rahe hai??? (romance karne I think!!! 😆 )

Jai: Beta mein bas abhi aaya! (Jai ran upto the bedroom.)

Jai: Bani! (looking around) Bani!!

Bani: Hmmm…

Jai…opened the door of the bathroom...to find Bani putting her saree on…she turned around and smiled.

Jai leaned against the door and smiled back.

Jai: Need any help? 😉

Bani: Thought u'd never ask! (kitna bigad gayi hai…yeh Bani hi hai na? 😕 )

Jai, walked in locking the door….put his hands around her waist and pulled her close, Bani wrapped her arms around his neck….

Jai: Hmmm…ab bhi naughty mood mein ho??

Bani (resting her chin on his chest looking up): Hmmm…aisa hi samaj lijiye…ek baat baatye…aaj raat kya program hai? U promised me something…yaad haina?

Jai: Yaad hai…

Bani: Mujhe bateyenge nahin?

Jai (shakes his head): Abhi nahin…waise humaari kal raat waali harqat ke baad u still up for some more hungama… we sure got some funny looks over breakfast this morning….tumhaare gaal toh hameshaa laal hote hi aaj toh mein bhi blush kar raha tha!!! Atharv ne accha khasa phasa diya haina?

Bani (laughs): Pehle toh aap embarrass karte the…ab toh Atharv se bhi bachna hoga…woh sab chhodiye…bataye na…kya plan hai? 😳

Jai: Nahin bataunga! (rubbing his nose against hers)

Bani: Toh abhi aap ka kya program hai?? (rubbing his arms) busy ho?? 😳

Jai: Bani…busy aur mein…no way…(runs his hands around her waist…up her arms…to her shoulder pulling her blouse off her shoulder to nuzzle…and kiss her ❤️)

Bani ran her hands though his hair…bringing him closer when….

Atharv: Mama!!! (knocks on the bathroom door) Papa kahaan hai????

Bani (whispers): Oh God! Atharv agaya!! 😲 Beta woh bahaar hi honge…. (liar!)

Atharv (knocks again ): Nahin hai…Mamaaaaaa…mujhe bathroom jaana hai!!! Kholiye!!! 😆 (isse bhi abhi bathroom jaana tha! 😆 )

Bani: Beta…Rano Masi ke kamre mein chale jao…mein…mein nahaa rahi hoon beta… (phir jhooot…..very bad Bani!)

Atharv: Nahinnnn….kholiye na… (bechara is bursting!!! 😆 )

Bani: Aap wahaan darwaze ke peeche khade ho jaaye…aur phir bahaar nikal jaana…

Jai (smiled): Its so funny na…chori chippe pyaar karna parta hai apne hi ghar mein…(hides behind the door)

Bani puts her gown on and opens the door..pulling Atharv in quickly so Jai can dash out!

Jai went and sat outside with the rest. Masi, Dadi, Aditya were all enjoying a second cup of tea outside in the garden. Jai sat on the grass and Rishi and Varun started messing with him…pulling his hair…tickling him. Jai loved the way these two would play with him. It reminded him of the days when Saahil and Ranveer were kids.

Jai: Yeh Rishi aur Varun toh bilkul apne baap pe jaa raha hai…haina Aditya? Saahil aur Ranveer bhi bas mere saath masti hi karte rehte the…zyaada time to mere paas hi rehte the…(tickling them)..remember how they were when they used to take a bath…sab toys ko bhi nihlaate the dono…Jigs…(doesn't say her name…)…mujh par itna paani uchaal te the dono!!

Saahil and Ranveer look at each other and blush….😳(awww.bachpan ki sab poll khul rahi hai issliye? 😆

Aditya: Bilkul sahi kaha Jai…they enjoyed ur company more than mine (guess u always was GFN 😆 ) Woh din bhi ache bhi the aur bure bhi…(remembering his relationship with Jigyaasa at the time)

Bani dressed in a cream saree came outside with Atharv, where the rest of the family were assembled. Sitting down next Masi.

Bani: kya baatein ho rahi hai?

Raashi: Bas puraane din yaad kar rahe the Mamaji.

Bani: Ohh….waise aaj ka kya program hai? (Bani looked at Jai…who winked at him when she said that 😉) (kaise kaise harkate kar rahi hai yeh ladki! 😲)

Jai: I don't know….(shrugging his shoulders, with a cheeky grin plastered over his face 😃 😊)

Saahil: Mamiji…fun fair chalte hai…😃

Bani: Mela laga hai? Kahaan? 😃

Ranveer: Yaheen Panvel se kuch door…aaj paper mein main ek advertisement dekha tha…thought it will be fun with the kids.

Bani: Bahut accha idea hai.

Rano: Bani Didi…yaad hai hum chhote the aur woh Mount Abu ke Mele mein gir gayi thi…bahut royee thi…lekin phir bahut masti bhi ki thi

Bani: Haan…Mummy Papa bahut ghabra gaye the tumhaari chot dekh kar…

Jai (cutting in): Its been such a long time since I went to one of those…(remembering something)

Masi: Munna,yaad hai tu apni Maa, Papa aur Jigyaasa ke saath gaya the ek baar?

Jai: Hmmmm…(looking a little lost)…that was the only good memory I have of being part of a proper family…uske baad toh…. 😔

Bani, sensing the pain in him….went and sat in front of Jai on the grass.

Bani: Mr. Walia…lekin ab…aaj hum sab hai ek saath….bahut mazaa karenge…like a proper family…(taking his hand) Haina??? (😊

Atharv (jumps in between them holding them both on the shoulders, pulling them close): Yessssssss…Masti Masti Masti!!!!

Saahil: Say cheese!!!! (Jai, Bani and Atharv look up at Saahil…as he takes a picture)…Perfect!!! 😊 Aaj camera bhi le loonga wahaan dher saari tasweerien bhi kheechenge!

Varun: Yayyyyyyy!!! 😃

Ranveer: So baccha log…tayaar hona aaj ke fun fair ke liye??

Rishi: Yessssssssssssssss!!!!

Varun: Abhi chalen? 😃 (eager to get going now)

Aditya: Nahin beta…woh shaam ko khule ga…(tapping his head)….tab tak ke liye hum yaheen ghar pe kuch karte hai…what say? Hey kyun na hum Chinese whispers khele? (u guys played that once before…if I remember clearly Aditya suggested it last time too…isse koi aur game nahin aati 😆)

Atharv: Woh kya hai?

….to be continued.

Not a very happening part…but will try and think of something better next time round. Plz leave ur comments! 😃 And excuse any mistakes…plenty I guess this time round! 😆
Tazo!

that was total fun..... both the lies caught by athrava..... he is just nuaghty like jai.... xerox copy of him... massi pulled jai' ears that was funny.. and both were soo sweet.. bathroom wala scene.....😆

atharva was tooo good.. mummy muje abhi jana hai....

chinienes one soo jai is going to say "i love u bani"as he missed it last time by fixing sme extra words in it hiana😉

good next wone will be fun and pls continue sooon..

davia

Hey Tazo , short part sweety, ok i forgive u u were MOTW this week 😉

Still it was a very awesome part 👏

Yaar Yeh Atharva bhi kya smart baccha nikla, akhir iske raghon mein bani aur jai ka , dono ka khoon dor raha hai , double force 😆 , apnie papa ki masti aur bani ki banigiri 🤣

Jai ko massi se pitaya , Atharva ne 😆, and jai is too good , i love when he said to bani Atharva ko kehdete ke uski choti behen ko lene ge the 🤣 Aur bacche ke samne jhoot bolta hai, waise bhi Atharva to jai se bhi do kadam age hai , jai ka jhoot parkar liya 😆

Well as usual rano ne sambhal liya mamle ko 😊

Haila bani kafi baldal gayi hi farmhouse akar, kafi naughty ho gayi, wahan ke pani mein kuch hoga shayad 😆

mela diloun ka ... ( i'm not remembering this song , because i hate it, despite sonu sang it 😆 ) Anyways , cant wait the mela part 😳

very good late lateef, this time sahil took the pic at the good time 👏 that was a kodak moment 😳

It was really funny and romantic 😳

Please continue ASAP 😉

Happy first year on KS 👏, tum ayi to KS mein ek nasha hai ( yaar i dont know what i have today koi bhi gana yaad nahin ara ha hai 😕 ) , so tum ayi to KS mein ek khushi ayi, tumhare hi waja se is forum mein masti aur romance ka jadoo hai 😊 Hazaroon phool barsao Taz ki 1st anniversary hai, Taz ki first anniversary hai 😉, Chanda ki Doli mein, paryon ki jholi mein ati Taz meri 🤗 ( ok that was a mix from me bear with me, yaar gane thik se yaad nahin arahe😆 )

Lots of love and jhappiz 🤗

Humera. 🤗

me back..
ok..
not a happening part.. tazzoo..
u kidding..
the first.. part.. was so funny..
i was laughing so hard..
it is so funny...
arthav.. after his daddy and mommy..
hehe..
that was so funny..
ye toh.. apne dad se bhi naughty hai..
hehe..
and bani.. wow.. she is chaning lots this days hehehe..

i really hoope arthav gets his lil sis soon..
so he can play with her
aww that was so sweet..
hehe

PS:i think mostly everyone is in that club..what say hehe..

Continue asap
please

PSS: before i leave for india..please do post an update...

cheers
❤️Niralixxx

whacko bhabi 😆
kitca chota sa update
haha yeh Atharv bhi apne papa par gaya hai...sab ke samne chori pakdagayi
mama ka sandal...mama papa ke
coat mein.. 😆 😆 😆
Jai shirtless...working out.
😍 tum maar dalogi mujhe.
Ab yeh Bani ko kya hua...ab tak nasha chal raha hai kal raat ka.
chupa rustam 😆
hmm yeh Atharv wapas aah gaya. Lagta hai uske paas radar hai 😆 😆 😆
aww bechara jai...no good family memories except that one...but ab toh bohout saare hoge
Chinese whispers! waapis! hmm ab kya kehne se shuru hoga yeh game.
bhabs continue soon 😃

Hey Taz sorry haven't been commenting for a long time but just got caught up with the updates and your FF! love atharv, he's so funny and naughty at the same time! I see how poor Jai and Bani have been dealing with him 😆 Your updates were very entertaining and funny! Please continue soon,




Maro 😛

hi...hw r u...hope u r fyn nw.....


awesum update...artharv to....kuch zyada he smart hai...jai se bhi zyada khatarnak hai ye to....haar baatt detail mein karta hai...it ws a awesum update...plz cont soon....