MY DREAM TRACK (AD-VEH-TURE)PART 18/16 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story is getting very interesting...
well written..👏
Waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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(MY GOLDIE POST) PART 7

Scene starts with Raman meeting teacher and informing her that Ruhi would be in this tour too.She agrees and gets surprised as Raman brought Ruhi all way from Delhi on road.

Raman "Hum waapas ghar nahen jaa sakthey they.Ishita ko pasand nahen tha Ruhi ko itnaa door bhejnaa.So mujhey doosra choice nahen thaa aur mujhey hee laana pada.But we enjoyed the trip.
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Teacher "Aap apney beeti ka kitney khyaal rakthey hain.Aap yahen rukhney waaley hain yaa."

Raman "Nahin main bhee Ruhi key saath hun.Main Ruhi ko merey saath hotel ley jaa saktha hun kyaa.Main aapko subaha join karoonga."

Teacher "Koi problem nahen hain sir.It would be helpful for us that you are here along with us."

Raman "Aap Ruhi ko Ishita sey baath karwaa saktey hain kyaa.Ussey nahen patha kee hum donon ek saath hain.Ussey lag rahan hain keeRuhi aap logon key saath he hain."

Teacher "No problem sir."

Ruhi was playing with Hercules.Raman calls her and Hercules comes to Raman and his very obedient friend .Ruhi speaks with Ishita and on Raman's request Hercules was'nt barking.

Then the tour continues and Raman accompanied Ruhi everywhere she go and blending the rules for Ruhi and helping all kids became Raman's time pass there.

Then all days were exciting there and Raman and Ruhi enjoyed the most as they were th only father daughter duo available there.Even if available they cant beat them in their compatibility.

Then in the last day the last part of tour was boat ride .They were supposed to go in team and RaRu was obvious team.

Then when they reach other end and they were supposed to camp for lunch there and all students were waiting there.Raman and Ruhi were sitting along with Hercules and relaxing .Then Raman notices teachers in tension.Then he comes to know that few kids were missing indirectly kidnapped according to information.

All students get panicked and it was due to Raman many students were safeas they were following Raman's lead but few people were deviated by kidnappers.

All students starts crying but Raman takes the lead as teachers are not that experienced.But this news spread as wild fire and spread to news channels within an hour.

Even Ishita saw the news.She panicks and immediately calls Raman.

Ishita "Raman aapney news dekha hain."

Raman "Mainey teacher sey baath kee hain.Ruhi safe hain abh who teacher key pass he hain.Tum uss Ravan Kumar key number dial karon."

Ishita was little releaved and she calls Raman's other mobile and RUhi takes it and she calm's Ishita.

Then Ruhi feels sad as some of her friends are missing.

Ruhi "Papa merey friends ko kyan huan?"

Raman "Ruhi kuch nahen hoga papa hain naa.Papa unkey help karengey .Tum miss key pass rukho .Kahen nahen jaana ok.Kaheen naheen ."

Raman calls police and they have given protection around the camp and they were safely taken back to other end.

Raman along with Hercules were retracing the path of lake. Then trained Hercules find's the lead by smell of paint of other boats and find the deviation.

Raman and Hercules follow the path and they finally were able to locate the hideout.Thanks to Hercules and Raman's knowledge.

Raman call's police and gives them the location immediately.

But Raman knew once police come their will be little amount of risk for kids on attack and counter attack.

Raman "Hercules.Humey andhar jaana hoga .secretly."

Raman "Police ayengey tho bachon ko khatara hoga.So we have to do it combined.Humey bachon ko pehley uss jagaha sey nikaalna hoga."

Hercules accepts it by.

Raman "Tum pehley mera andhar jaaney ka wait karon aur fir apnaa awaaj sey distraction laon."

Raman "Main andhar gundon ko smahaal longa aur bachon ko bahaar launga.Tum bhee bhag jaana."

Then Raman proceed inside according to plan and the moment Raman signaled Hercules started barking heavily getting their attention .All get panicked as they were worried police got their location and they send few outside to looks after Hercules,

Ramaninside grabbed the opportunity and hitted two goons unconscious and gave free way for kids to safe place.

Then Raman started fighting with others inside and Hercules outside combined gave enough time to police to come and arrest them.

Then Raman reaches all others along with kids.

Then he goes to teacher who was looking after Ruhi who was sleeping tired.It was 8 hrs from incident and she was scared .

Raman takes her in his arms and she was sleeping quietly in her fathers arms.

Teacher "Sir Ishitajee ney phone kiyaa hain.Mainey unhey kuch nahen bathaaya hain."

Raman "Who tension mey hain kyaa?"

Teacher "Han thoda tension mey thee but I convinced her."

Teacher "But sir aap aaj nahen hothey tho I don't know how I would have answered their parents.Aapney jaan khatare mey daalkey un bachon kaa jaan bachaaya."

Raman "Mera jagaha au r koi bhee hotha tho wohi kartha.Hum apney bachon key liyen tho hee jeethey hain.Unkon kuch hojaatha tho poora jinagee palat jaayega."

Raman "Main bhee ek baap hun main doosron key saath aisa naheen honey doonga.It is my responsibility as a father.Kissko patha jab main nahen hoN Ruhi bhee issey problem mey hon tho koi tho ussey madad karey.But we have to take initiative."

Teacher "Ruhi is really lucky sir.Who aapkey beti hain.Aapney apnaa poora kaam choodkar Ruhi ko lekey yahan aaya.Koi aur hotha tho itnaa nahen kartha.Aap apnee beti key khushi key liyen khud lekar aayen ussey."

Raman "Meri beti hain who.Usskey liyen kuch bhee kar saktha hun.Kuch bhee."

Looking at her daughter sleeping in his arms keeping head over his shoulder.With Hercules watching them carefully.Raman goes towards his car.

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Good one... Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 8

Raman was going towards his car and suddenly stops in his tracks shocked.Ishita was standing beside it and she was in shock too.

Raman comes out quickly and goes towards her.

Raman "Ishita tum kabh aye?Ruhi theek hain tum tension math loo."

Ishita had heard everything teacher told and all her doubts are cleared now.

Ishita "Raman aap Ruhi key saath ayen they yahan.Tho aapney jhoot kyon bola kee aap Mumbai mey they."

Raman "Ishita baath mey bathaaonga pehley Ruhi ko andhar soney dethey hain."

Ishita kisses sleeping Ruhi before Raman keeps her in back seat to sleep.Hercules also enters inside.

Ishita has tears in her eyes as she misunderstood Raman.

The moment Raman closed the door Ishita hugged Raman tightly and Raman was shocked.

Raman "Kyaa buan Ruhi theek hain naa?"

She then looking at Raman remembering Vandita and Mihika's words.

She kisses Raman on his cheek to Raman's amusement.

Raman "Ishita tumhey kyaa hogaya koi pagalpan ka dhoura pada hain kyaa.Tumhey gussa nahen hain abh?"

Ishita was not listening what Raman is saying her eyes are seeing Raman who is only her man,her husband.

Ishita "Raman I am sorry .I am very sorry."still crying but not leaving him tightly hugging him.

Raman "Kyaa huan pehley yeh tho bathaon." Keeping his hand over her head to support.

Ishita "Raman mujhey laga aap Mumbai mey they tho."She then tells everything from the day on shopping mall.Over her doubt on him and thinking that he betrayed her.

Raman was shocked listening this .

Ishita continues "Mujhey laga aap Ruhi key liyen nahen aayengey uss ladkee key saath rehkar .Aur Ruhi key liyen main yahan aa gayee.But aap tho Ruhi key saath he they.Raman I am sorry.I don't know how I thought wrong about you."

Ishita "Raman main aappar shak kar rahen thee.I don't know mujhey kyaa hogayan.Raman I am sorry."

Raman forgave her for that as it is clear communication gap but how will he leave a chance to have fun with Ishita.

Raman acts as silent and angry "Ishita kitnaa gandha sooch hain tumhaara.I never could imagine this way from you.Tumney mujhpar shak kiyan."

Ishita who was already angry on herself now is getting more sad.

Raman "Tumney merey morals par shak kiyan.Merey liyen mera pariwar mainey rakthee hain but tumney ..."

Raman "Fir tum maskaa maar rahen hon Ruhi key tarah kiss dekey.But I am not gonna forgive you that easily for this."

Raman understood that Ishita is ready to accept their relation and take it to next stage now .

Ishita "Raman please aap merey baath ko samajhiyen naa.Mujhey aisaa lagan kee."

Raman "Just shutup.Main tumhey itney asaani sey maaf anehn karoonga." Keeping angry face.

Ishita "Raman mujhey kyaa karnaa hoga bathaiyen kee main kbhee aapsey argue nahen karoongi."

Raman was about to ask for another kiss but HERCULES raised on occasion to save Ishita and started barking at Raman.

Raman "Peeth mey dard ho rahan hain.Peeth dabaana hoga."smiling and looking angrily at Hercules.

Ishita goes inside car keeping Ruhi's head in her lap and she understood that Raman forgave her and just acting bringing back smile to her face.

Raman was outside tying chain to HERCULes.

Raman "Mainey kyaa kahan tumsey .Tumhey mujhey Ishita ka gussa sey bachaana hain.Ussey mera gussa sey nahen." To Hercules.

Raman "Kitnaa accha mauka tha.Tumney kharaab kardeee abh nahenn patha waapas mauka kabh milega.Gaddhar kaika.."

Hercules started licking Raman over his face and Ishita was watching them smiling.

Raman "Abh maarlo maskaa.Sablog ko aadath ban gayen hain maska mareny kaa.Pehley Ruhi fir Ishita abh tum bhee .Doobara aisa nahen karnaa tum mera partner hon.Mera madad karnaa" but obedience lie on stronger side and it is Ishita's side as even Raman is in her control.

Raman tying its chain gets it into car.

Ishita "Raman hum kahan jaa rahen hain."

Raman "Hotel.whan room hain."

They reach hotel and Ishita was happy now as all he r misunderstandings are clear and Raman is with her.Ruhi is safe.

They reach hotel and Raman requests for a room change from single bed room to double bed room suit.

Ruhi is still sleeping and Raman and Ishita makes her sleep in a bed and Hercules lay beside her.

Raman "Ishita tum Ruhi key saath rukho main doosrey room mey hun." But it is not what Ishita wants she wants to be with Raman alone.

Raman goes to his other room and lying on his bed.

Ishita comes there and she locks the door.

Ishita "Aapney kahan kee peeth mey dard ho rahan hain.Tho."

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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


why another one return journey is with Ishita only.
.How come ,I still din't update 7th part.




i meant last chp 6...hhh
im lovr f animals ... So th part impressed me a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Wow action packed...
Nice method of using hercules...
All kids safe n fine...
Ishu wil b a volcano wen she cme to knw f truth...
Waiting 4 nxt part...
Im loving hercules
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
inexcitement misd part 8 updt...

Tadaaa ishu s here...
First expected ishu's lecture..

But ishu crying out her guilt was gud ... Which made raman to play prank with her...


Waiting for nxt part *evil grin*

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Wats next loved the talking between raman and herculic
And the herculic to changed the party
So next part romance or adventure wating ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb updates
congrats for becoming goldie
cont.soon

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