FF: JaI & BaNi LoVe StOrY pt38 pg64 4/13 - Page 28

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great updates.
liked it.
plz cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~



no, i wanna know what happens to bani too!! u have to cont. SOON!! and don't use the "i'm older than you" card!! it won't work!!! if we're talking about mentality wise, i'm waaaay past you 😆 😆 J/k J/k!!! i might not be able to blackmail you, but i can instigate Mitu to blackmail you!!! hehehe


I will not update 2day, cause no Bani safe in the part. I m in love with Rishi. I think it was a great part, driver is alright n now u make poor Bani n baby 2. Then I will not without Bani alright. Love u. Cont. soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome

hope bani is okay!!!!! 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
just loved the part, but dear what about condition of bani, i think u need belan therapy soon 😡 else update soon as i cannot see bani suffering for long 😡 hope i have made my point clear to u 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
The last part was like soo sweet. I simply loved that scene in k3g...i couldn't stop crying...BUT WAT HAPPENED TO NANI????!!!!

As i promised i'll update tomorrow...it should be up by tomorrow evening
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Posted: 18 years ago

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

cuteness! all over! lolz!

fab update

can't wait to read the next update!

continue soonnnn

maddi

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cute1228


I will not update 2day, cause no Bani safe in the part. I m in love with Rishi. I think it was a great part, driver is alright n now u make poor Bani n baby 2. Then I will not without Bani alright. Love u. Cont. soon.



hehehe, i was totally right!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~



hehehe, i was totally right!!! 😆 😆


no u werent as i did made her updat.e. so ha..
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Posted: 18 years ago

hey guys.. me back with one more update.. it is surprising isnt it.. hehe..anyways.. i have to update today.. and this would be a last update.. till i come back from INDIA as i am going to india this 10th.. and going to be back on 23th aug.. i know some people are really mad about that mitu and hinu.. so sorrie..
here we go with today's update



Rishi: bhayia what r u doing??
Than u see both of them huggin..
(just like AB, HR, $ SRK in K3G)

Scene shifts..
jai sees doctor coming out..
Jai: doctor, how is my wife? is she ok?? is our baby ok??
Doctor gave a smile to see jai walia this worried, he was actually happy to see a husband this worried about his wife..
Doctor: Mr. Walia dont worry, Mrs.Walia is perfectly alright, and ur baby is fine too
J: Thank god..,can i go meet her..
D: yes, ofcourse


Jai Anu, And Rishi went inside.
Bani was awake, when she saw jai, she started crying
she was really scared.. she was just hoping that nothing happened to their baby as they had a lot of dreams about this baby..

When jai saw bani crying the first thing he did was he went to her and he hugged her..Anu seeing this started crying.. and Rishi was wondering why everyone is crying.. as everything is perfectly fine.. so he decided to change the environment a lil..

Rishi goes near jai and bani..
R: Mr. Walia.. would u mind letting go of my bhabhi please
J: turned around What?
R: would u mind letting go of my bhabhi.. as i still have to give an introduction of myself.. although that would be ur duty..but anyways.. i guess i would have to do.. that..
jai and anu were smiling.. and bani was really confused..
so she just kept looking at jai to rishi rishi to anu..
and anu to jai..

R: hello bahbhi, this is ur devar rishi, i know u r really confused right now..
J: bani ye mera chota bhai hai..as in tum hara devar..and he is the one who saved u
B: thank u, devarji
R: already started liking her..so he just went and gave her a hug..
J: rishi waht are u doing with my wife??
R: what am i doing?? i am just giving my bhabhi, who is also like a mother a hug..
B: aww,
J: bani dont listen to him, he is a big flirt..
before rishi could say anything
B: Mr.Walia stop pulling my devar's leg..
J: what?
R: ya bhabh's telling him, to stop hurting my feelings
B: stop hurting my devar's feelings..
J: ya, waht is all this about?? everything is about ur devar now..
R: of course, as devar is counted as bhabhi's best friend do u not know that??
J: ya ya whatever (rolling his eyes)
J sits next to bani
J: how r u feeling now?
B: i am perfectly fine
J: how did all this happened??
B: i dont know.. i was going to market to get some stuff,and than all of the sudden i see a truck coming towards the car, but then the driver swerved the car
Rishi a bit serious..
R: do u think it was just an accident.. or someone tried to harm u?
B: rishi, why would someone try to harm me??
R: well, i dont know about that.. maybe i need to start an investigation
B: rishi there is no need, i am sure it was just an accident.. maybe the driver lost his control..thats it..
R: no i cant take no risk..

Doctor come in at that time
D: excuse me Mr.Walia,
J: yes doc
D: i have told the nurse to get discharge paper ready for Mrs. Walia they should be ready by now... U can take her home, and u need to be careful about is that. she gets her rest, and she might need to come here to get the head injury checked..
J: no problem, doc.. thank u so much..
D: that is my duty

J: go rishi, we will talk about this when we go home, not now..ok..
R: yes bhaiya..
J; anu can u please help bani..,i will go get the discharged papers
R: i will come with u


Scene shifts to WM
(jai called home, and told everyone that bani is fine, and that he has a surprise to give them)
U see a black bmw , and a police car coming..
Everybody got down..
R came to bani
R: ok bhabhi, i hope u feel better, btw if i find anything about this case i will let u know..
B: Rishi where r u going?
Jai kept quiet, he was hoping that rishi would come in, but he didnt he thought maybe rishi still hasnt forgiven him,, so he thought he might talk to him, alone..
R: nahi bhabhi, i cant
B; and why not
R: because i have left this house, long time ago..
B: u know in the hospital, u said.. that i am like ur ma.. right.. so if i was ur real mom, would u not come in
R: bhabh's please it is not like that..it is just that one night, bhaiya said not to come in this house again
B: ok that was ur brother, i am telling u to come in, forget waht ur brother said..
Jai was so surprised to hear that..he made a mental note.
B: ok u know what, if u dont come than i am not going inside either
R: bhahb's please
B: nope, i am not listening to anything, except yes bhabh's i am coming in...
Anu was watching all this.. and she was having fun so she also decided to join with her bani mami
A: u r so right mami, if mamu doesnt come than i am not coming inside either..
R: what? Anu please dont do this to ur mamu, i am ur fav mamu right..
J: Hey, i am standing right here u know?
R: ya so, ooo i forgot u r not suppose to know taht
J is like u know what fine
J: i have taken a promise to be with bani always, so i guess i agree with her, if u dont come all three of us are not going to go in either..
R: what why? why is everyone aganist me..??
J B A: BEcause, u deserve that

After sometime
B; rishi come on now, please say yes, i am tried i need to go take some rest, r u going to make ur bhabhi stand here whole day..
R: waht no? ok ok fine.. i will come inside..
before rishi could say anything
B; ya and u r staying here from now on..
R: what?? i didnt say that..
B: ya i know.. but u didnt say no either.. so.. u r staying here.
J: see, she is a emotinal blackmailer
B: hey i am not
J: yes u r
B; ok whatever

They all go insidee,, but they are waiting outside of the door
M is waiting eagerly for jai and bani to come..
she is waiting for her bahu to come home safely she is waiting for her with a pooja ki thali.
just as she sees them she tells them to wait here.. till she is done with her nazar utaro..
(rishi is hiding from masi, as he knows.. if she sees him , he is going to be in huge trouble.)
when she is finished she tells bani to come inside..

Masi is still standing near the door..
Rishi was hiding behind jai..as jai was a lil taller than rishi.
Jai and bani went in at the same time, rishi was hoping masi wouldnt see him..
but guess what
MAsi saw that someone was hiding behind jai..
so she was waiting for jai to take bani inside..
When bani and jai and rishi were going inside.. masi taps on his shoulder..

Rishi waits there for sometime before turning around as he knew that he is caught..
Rishi turned around
everyone was surprised..
when masi saw her rishi..
she took sometime to see that he has gotten really thing.. he has became an police officer (image rishi as iqbal khan)

he bents down.. and touches his masi's feet for blessings.

but masi turns around..
as she has started crying
R: Masi, u r not going to give ur rishu blessings
M: so getting really emotional..
R: i thought u were missing me, so when bhabhi asked me to come in, i did..but i guess i am wrong..
rishi was going near the door..
M: rishu, u r not even going to give ur masi a hug.
so he comes to her and gives her a hug..
rishi meet everyone, and gave a hug..

it was a happy family scene...


ok guys, i am leaving on a good part.. as this is my last part. till i come back.. this is not the end..
i hope u liked it..
as i dont think i have done justice to this.. part... as i still think i could do better but i dont have time.. right now..
so really sorrie.. if it is bad..

do comment please
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Posted: 18 years ago
okay, just leave me 😭 😭 Go to ur india, and leave me and mitu here all alone 😭 😭 It's okay, we'll learn how to live without you, even it takes weeks, we'll do it 😭 😭 Hahahaha, j/k j/k!!! have an awesome time in India, and don't miss me toooo much 😉 😉 And awesome part, me loved it!!! and you better have an update for the day u come back!! 😆 😆 and come back soon, i have to rant and rave about 10th grade you know!!! 😆 😆
Edited by ~Unforgettable~ - 18 years ago

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