MY DREAM TRACK (AD-VEH-TURE)PART 18/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dont be disappointed yar... Ur dream track is good but she is not with raman and ruhi so little bit disappointment other than that nothing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I hope you store jealous track nice writing keep it on and update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey this is so nice
I'm loving this father daughter duo's journey
loved to watch this kind of thing in yhm
so do update it n pm m
gosh ruhi is so abdomen just like her papa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Lolsss raman bhi na...
Seems like no ishra till end...
Ishu to feel lonely...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Orginaly this is not going to happen its a dream
So pls update the next part
Pls pm m me
Wat to see raman handling roo all alone ...
It will be fun
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love it! Ruhi is so Ruhi. I like the idea of Raman doing so much for Ruhi for a change. Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Araku is at my place.. so Raman in ur FF is at least coming to my city. :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

Araku is at my place.. so Raman in ur FF is at least coming to my city. :-)

are you from andhra.I am from kurnool.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3

Scene starts with Raman and Ruhi entering their hotel room and Raman was tired of full day journey and Ruhi is full of energy to her age.Then she sees the poster of a carnival in the town and she gets excited of this .

Ruhi "Papa exhibition hain town mey hum bhee jayengey naa."

Raman who was tired "Ruhi aaj nahen.Papa is tired subaha sey driving kar rahan thaa."

Ruhi "Papa hum kall yaha n sey jaayengey naa tho humey waapas mauka kabh milega.Delhi mey carnival nahee aayega na har din."

Raman gaining his last bit of energy "Ok theek hain chltey hain.But first khaana.OK"

Ruhi "Ok.hugging her father."

Raman and Ruhi go down to have food and Ruhi was in hurry as she thinks Carnival will finish.

Raman "Ruhi tum kyaa khaogee."

Ruhi "Papa fried rice with extra sauce."

Raman "Ok .Same for me."

Raman know the reason as it can be cooked quickly and served faster compared to other items.

While they are having dinner.

ON other side Ishita is wondering how Raman went to Mumbai without telling her.

Ishita "Raman ney pehla aisa kabhee nahe kiyya.Hummesha mujhey bataakey jaathey they .Aaaj kyaa hogaya."

Ishita "Aaj Ruhi bhee nahen hain."

Ishita then remembers about phone call and Raman telling he will come to Mumbai the call which assumed is from KAJAL.Then discussion on mall .

Ishita "Raman uss ladkee sey milney tho nahen gayen."

Ishita "Raman itnaa nahen gir saktha.Who kabhee aisa anehn kar saktha."

Then she decides to call Raman.

Then on other side Raman and Ruhi just entered the carnival.It is first time for Ruhi along with Raman.

Ruhi is playing all games in her reach and getting everyride she wants and Raman is taking videos of all this.

Ruhi din't just stopped but she dragged Raman in few games and she is doing full masthi .Raman is enjoying his every moment with his daughter.

Then when Ruhi was in some ride and tehnRaman gets call from Ishita .

Raman "Main uthaunga tho mar jaonga.Kitney sawaal poochegi.Abh yahan sey bahaar bhe nahen jaa saktha.Ruhi yahen hain iss crowd mey Akeley nahen chod saktha."

He then takes the call as he know he can't avoid it.

Ishita is relieved as Raman took the call.

Ishita "Raman aap theek hain."

Raman "Yeh poochney key liyen phone kiyya?"

Ishita "Seedhey baath karon naa.Ulta bolney sey koi award nahen milney waaley hain."

Raman "Tumsey chutkaara tho milega who kaaffe hain."

Ishita "So funny.Aap ney Ruhi ko drop kiyya?"

Raman was struck but he comes back "Nahen ussko lekey diniyan ghoomarahan hun?"

Ishita "Raman.Seedhey boliyen.Kahan hain aap.Itnee awaaj kyon aa rahen hain?"

Raman "Mumbai mey hun."

Ishita "Raman jaanthe hun.But Mumbai meyt kahana hotel mey ya bahaar hain."

Raman din't get any idea and tells "Beach mey hun.Relax hon rahan hun.,tumsey itney dinon baad chutkaara mila hain."

Ishita was struck now thinking her doubt was right.

Ishita "Theek hain Raman main baath mey call karoongi."

Raman "No problem .Good night."

Ishita cuts the call.

Ishita "Raman Mumbai mey beach mey kyaa kar rahan hain raath ko gyaara bhajey."

Ishita thinks about kajal.

Then thjis side Raman is relieved as Ishita cut the call .He don't the bomb that is going to explode on his return.

Then finally around 11:30 Raman and Ruhi go back to their room .Ruhi is tired and sleeping in Raman's arms.

Raman places Ruhi in bed and watches her sleeping .He has tears in his eyes remembering whole day he spent with Ruhi alone and all her masthi.Then remembering how he used to behave with her when she was small.

Ruhi in sleep utters I Love You Papa and Raman was touched by it,

Raman "I love you too .kissing his sleeping daughter .

She wraps her arms around Raman and sleeps.Rman watches her sleeping and slowly slips to sleep.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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then whole of AD-VEH-TURE is gonna be in similar way.
Raman adn Ruhi will be doing masthi in different places.
Then Raman and Ishita calls strengthening her doubts over Raman and Kajal and Ishita jealous and explosion in end.



This is my last post for day.My decision on whenther to continue or not lies over the responce i get for this post.But if I am stopping .I will not be posting here.But I will pm the story directly to those who are interested .

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