Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Ritu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: kunchu
I know which part is you...
Smart me you see...
of course it made me smile a lot. such a cute little fight and flash backs.
Aww sooo beautiful.
And Piya my dear... kya plan kar rahi hai??
and toothbrush language was hilarious
Nice cute uodate in the morning.
so this is for u...

First of all, i LOVEEE the emos! Especially the penguin one haha

yes yes you are very eshmarrt😉😛

thank youuu and i am happy you liked it😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Wow ritu awesome part

i was smiling while reading it

fbs was soo cute and beautiful

so you paint, i too love painting

piya again planning

hope her plan bring arakshi closer

update soon

waiting

p.s. Wow yahan bhi barish ho rahi hai

Thanks soo much Areesha!😳really glad it made you smileee😃

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun always used to go for morning walk with Sakshi...with Sakshi least interested...😆😆😆
Liked this naughty Arjun in FB...😆😆😆
Sakshi was leaning on him to steady herself...😆😆😆
Arakshi again met...but this time with coincidence...😆😆😆
If I am not wrong u too like sketching...😃😃😃
Sakshi tried to sketch Arjun in past & present...😆😆😆
Liked Arakshi's teasing in FB...😆😆😆
I too like seeing sunrise...although I am late riser...🥱🥱🥱
Sakshi is thinking that he is following her...😆😆😆
Sakshi has Arjun's effect on her...😆😆😆
Sakshi sat there to see sunrise with him...😃😃😃
Piya-Siddie convo was 🤣🤣🤣
Toothpaste Language...🤣🤣🤣
What is Piya planning now???😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Wow thanks soo much for the massive comment😃 yes you are right..i made that pretty obvious right😆😆

hehe me too i usually miss the sunrise but in the winters here i never miss it because the sunrise happens after 7 ish in the morning 😛(on the rare days the sun does shine lol..)

hope you like the next part😉

Originally posted by: manurocks
nice one buddy...!!!!!!!!!!
u r a really good...ummm... nah... brilliant writer...!!!!!!!!!!!
always love reading ur stories dear...!!!!!!!!!!
cont soon...waiting...!!!!!!!!

Thanks sooo much for the kind words..it means a lot😳

hope you'll like the next one😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM
so cute and sweet update thank u for long update😉 ...ur story love it .fb ..superb ...👏 cant wait more plzz continue soon 👍🏼

Aww thanks so much Naina!🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Rituuu!!!!
Mind u,this was an excited wala running & not the angry one after you.😆😆
Ye to kuch kuch hota hai wala update tha.
BTW,was that a faraway memory of Saakshi that made her call Arjun as ACP Arjun coz if I get it right,Saakshi isn't aware of Arjun's profession.It's just Paakhi who knew about Arjun's profession.Did she say it to saakshi or is my mind in an overactive mood.Blame the two of them that my mind doesn't rest in peace even with kuch kuch hota hai wala update.
Truely,This, is indeed a beautiful sunrise.
Eeekkk...Jogging wala flashback &then the sketch.❤️

Ye Piya ka mind kabhi shant rehta hai kya?She may resemble her mother in her behavior but dimag k maamle mein apne dad par gayi hai.24/7 in working mode.😆
Ye to mast idea hai Ritu,like Piya says Badi Maa to Aisha when she needs sumthing,I'll come up with such endearing words for u three too.Mast idea hai na.😆😉

Hahahaa I love that emo! the running around wala😆😆 Your comment brought a hugee smile to my face 😃 um, nope it wasnt a faraway memory..basically Paakhi told her. I have mentioned it in the next update (your dimaag runs like ACP Arjun too😛)

Thanks for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: skrafty
Ritu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what a great way to start a day
(as usual update morning main padh liya par comment late, Damm net😡)
Awesome update
Just loved it
The Fb was too cute
Arakshi are a cute couple
their convo was amazing
Arjun flirting 😆😆(Agar aisa show main hota to😆😉)
Toothbrush language was superb😆😆
ab ye piya ke dimaag main kya chal raha hai????????
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Shravaniii🤗Thank you sooo much for the comment! (koi naa it's okay for a late comment yaar😃)

LOL LOL show mein hota toh😆😆😆

Piya ka dimaag.. ahh you'll find out sooon😉

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima
awsum update di
loved it so much
ohhh arakshi enjoying sunrise together han
wht is piya planning now
do cont. soon di

Thank you soo much! Hope you'll like Piya's plan😉

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!
Loved the flashbacks and arjun-sakshi nok-jhok...

Thank youuu Jia🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Superb update
their flashback was cute
rain, i love it
waiting for next part

Thank youuu anita😳

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always...
Flashbacks were supper cute...
Beautifully written...
Loved Arakshi moments...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thanks sooo much Niki🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Hi!! Yes I am little slow in commenting for your story! Apologies for that!
Hey that's okaay..don't say sorry😳

NOw coming to whatever I may have missed out...

Wow... It's just lovely...

I mean Ritu ji kaha se yeh saare ideas aate hai...

Ok I know from your half filmy brain and heart!
Eggjactly😆😆😆 Thanks to all the day-dreaming and the romantic novels I read..not to mention Bollywood movies😉😛

The best thing about your story is how you weave nature into emotions...
Awww thanks... I just cannot leave nature out of my writing. It's a part of me 😆 I do think it has the magic to make everything so alive and beautiful😳

And the relation between our dearest Arakshi!

I can feel my heart gaining a quick pace as I read about their flashbacks and time together at present...

Well I really love this adorable Piya and Siddie as well...

So true... amnesia may remove the memories but not the feelings harbored...

It's lovely to see his charm on Sakshi!

Hehe... a big time flirt ... I seriously cracked up when Sakshi referred to Arjun being a flirt...

I mean at the end of the day they are husband and wife!

Ya... even though she has forgotten it... but then they way you have sketched her feelings...

It's beautiful...

Simply beautiful...

You often end up making me smile and dreamy... and shy!
Hehehehe I am glad I do that😆😆 Thanks so much!

I just love this story... do continue soon...

I am loving the way he is "pataoing" his very own wife!
Hehe, glad you are loving the storyy! And even happier to see your colourful comment on my story..thanks again for taking out the time to type in such a detailed comment..it means a lot😳

Best wishes,

Armagadon

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Serendipity...an apt title for this update...
So they enjoyed the sunrise together eventhough their meeting happened
just by a fluke...awesome...

The FB parts were very nice...
Even today, Sakshi is really getting affected by this man...amazing..
The whole scenario was exteremelly beautiful Ritu...

And Piya is planning for what...???
I really liked that Piya Sid part..

Awesome update Ritu...
Thanks for the pm...

SeasonOfLeaves...very nice...

Thanks sooo much Anjali! Glad you liked it soo much🤗

Hahaha you'll find out in the next part😃

Originally posted by: yams.s
Awesome Update

Arjun and Saakshi flashback was beautiful

Present was even more nice

Eager to know who is behind Saakshi's state.

Will she remember her past ir fall for Arjun again

Continue Soon

Thanks sooo much for the comment!🤗

for the last line, you have to wait and watch😉

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Hi Ritu
i am very sry for commenting late...i had my exams yaar 🤢
lovely update 👏
i just lv ur FB's...they r so magical
arjun teasing sakshi 😆
piya was too cute 😳
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thank youuu Aadhya! Arrey phirse exams? Kaise gaye? Acha chodo why discuss exams😆

Don't say sorry it's okay😳

Hope you like the next one😃

Originally posted by: Humzy
Wow awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon

Thanks a lot Humairaa🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Heylooo🤗

Ok, this one took a long long longgg time. I kept getting stuck at so many places, searching for the right words..I hope I found them and did justice to this chapter!

And since I am updating after agess I went on and wrote a longish update (it's longer than my usual long ones😆)

Hope I don't bore you to sleep😛

This is dedicated to Rain and Arijit Singh (such a murderous combination)🤪 *thud*

Okies, read on😃

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Sorry had to stop there..it got too long already😛😆

Please do leave your precious comments down there..and hope I haven't disappointed you😳

Oh and thanks for reading🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 11 years ago

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Haaye!

Phir le aaya dil. . That song has got a unique soothing ring to it. .. Reminds me of the old 60's n 70's..

And you're right! Such a deadly combo..Rain and ARIJIT SINGH!! *Thud* *Thud*

Gets up.. Add Arakshi to it.. And I am lost!

-Unres-

Bechara Siddie.. Doesn't he remind u of our gundi angel.. Kuch kare na kare, gaaliyan toh padti hi hai.. 🤪

Awwie.. Piya is such an adorable sweetheart! Matchmaker toh hai, and an evil one at that.. But of course, she has to be one.. 😆

Ha ha.. Aisha is the partner in crime, this time huh? Not bad.. I absolutely adore Arisha relationships that are portrayed in most of your fics.. Too bad, Aisha is a tough nut for even ACP Hotwa to crack.. Sakshi ki sangat ka asar, perhaps.. 😛

So, the trap is set and he falls into it; willingly, I dare say.. 😉 <3

OMG! That walk uphill.. I think, I must've been a caterpillar crawling beside him.. So real, I was right there.. Looking at the grey clouds, listening to the thunder and feeling the cool moist air..

Bwahahhaa.. Newspaper attack! 🤣

Bechara ACP, aate hi dhul gaye biwi ke haathon.. 😆

Awwie.. But Sakshi was soo cute there..

Ahem! Wall pe slam karna zaroori tha? ❤️ I got lost there for a moment.. Scroll hi nahi ho raha tha..

And behold! He finally realises that the khichdi was cooked by his daughter dearest.. 🤪

To be honest, if there's any colour in the world that I absolutely dislike it's got to be sunshine yellow.. I don't own a single piece of clothing in yellow..

But now I think, it's not so bad, is it?! 😛

Their convo.. 🤣 So typically Arakshi.. No one really wins ever, do they? 😛

And the rain! Darn it.. I am so tempted to plug in my earphones, but nahi kar sakti..

Gosh! woman, I won't ever get tired of confessing it aloud coz u honestly weave magic with words..

It felt like I was right there, watching them; his helplessness and love, her confusion and attraction towards the strange man..

I really have no words to express how I felt.. ❤️

And that below.. is my most favorite bit.. Pata nahi, casual sa hai, but something about it gave me woh melting wala feeling..

My gaze stops momentarily on him as he runs his fingers through his wet hair, the drenched mint-coloured shirt clinging to his skin.

His hand freezes in mid-air as he catches my gaze and asks, "What?"

"Nothing." I shake my head, my cheeks warming slightly and gather the brushes in my arms.

And the flashback.. 😔 I wish someday, they get to relive all those moments in present time..

And the lollipop..

Running off to the next one.. I get to read it all over again.. 🥳

Thank you so much, Rittuu.. 🤗

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Beautiful update!

loved piya's plan... she involved aisha with her...

so shree found varun..Great!

sakshi remembered her name?

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

👏👏👏👏

Now You are truly one among US!!!!

Mubaraka...

hayee kya planning ki hai Piya ne.

AIsha ke acting almost popat hone wali thi.

Paper attack!! ye idea kaha se ayi? GB se???

😆

Par hayee

Kya timing hai bhagwanji and u too ji

Rain and that song...

and then them

poor Arjun.think of him standing with his wife who still thinks him as a stranger. poor guy.

that little glimpse of FB was too cute. and the last wala jhatka...

LOLIPOP ki jai ho!!!!!

👏👏

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Awesome update didi.

Loved ti so much.

It was just mind blowing.

Sakshi remember a faint memory!!!!!!

Plisshhh plisshhh con soon.

Tumi onek wait korao.

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Fantastic update

Don't know from where do u get the magic for you stories

So piya is all set to bring her parents clousure

And the treat was rain n that song

Continue soon ritu dear

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Awsm update

Loved it

Very beautifully written

Arakshi were just fabulous

Continue soon

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