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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful beautiful update dee !! loved it to core !! 😊
Karan closing his eyes and turning around was really too cute !! 😆
Hug ! Aww 😳
It's good that he told her everything. Zoe..cry and scream your hert out baby !
I feel so bad for her... But she has got wonderful people around so no worries...
Karan realizes that he cant let her go and that she is more than JUST friend ! 😃 Does that mean??? Dee? you know what i'm hoping? 😉

Indu ! ! 😡 😡 I don;t wanna spoil my mind ! She's a bi*ch and we know it ! 😡

Zoya...again ! Who's car hit her now?
Can't wait for the next part..
Update soon ! 😃

- Anee


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update.

It was very nice part.
Karan came back and he went to Zoya's room without knocking that part was so nice.
Karan explained to Zoya about the deal with Indu and Zoya understand the situation and decided to leave but Karan stooped her,it was so nice.😊
The conversation of Karan and Zoya was so nice. 😊
Karan assured Zoya that he didn't happen anything to her,it was so nice.😊
Indu again irritating😡,Kiran said right that Zoya had to stand up against with her.
Karan finally cleared to Indu that Zoya didn't go and he didn't allow Indu in,thats so nice.😊
I think that Indu arranged that goons and Zoya was hit by Passing car,thats so sad.
I hope Zoya was fine.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
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(MISSING ASAD(KSG) and ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.


Hey Priya, thank you so much for your feedback am glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

luv it..
asad realise he is attracted to zoya...
oh no wat is indu up to...
really hope zoya is not badly injured...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank u so much Jaz 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: countingstars.

finally Karan realised he feels more strongly than a friend for Zoya :') his fear of being away from her is..

can someone kidnap Indu and throw her off a cliff! that annoying prick. 😵 I hope she's not behind what happen to Zoya and if she is I hope Karan lashes out at her!
I hope Zoya is fine 😒 update soon :)



Lol

You want to do the honours...pleas do you will make a lot of readers very happy 😆

Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha2012

Saima Apii🤗
Chapter 19
sorry for the late commenting
karan leaves for Delhi..for dad's office inaugration..zoyas sadness that he'll be away..
but that too with Indu
Indu is soo annoying😡 she's complaining to Vikram that karan n her r supposedly growing apart

'well Indu you have nothing to worry about, Karan will only ever be yours and that I promise'🥱😡
although karan completely refuses in front of avantika..n wants a life partner of his own choice
karan asks Indu for more time..but this indu is soo stubborn
😲
'Fine on one condition I will back out, you let me move in with you'😡
Indu wants zoya to move out of his apartment🥱 having soo much jealousy frm zoya
i love zack for telling him to not do such a thing with zoya which may hurt her😳
love n care is certainly there..but realization is yet to come
im loving the storyline😳👍🏼
keep up the amazing work Api😉
love you❤️

Maha


Hey

Thank you so much for liking the update Maha, hope u r well...and stop saying sorry 😆

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

'Karan why do you look so upset, you think that I wouldn't or couldn't do something so small for you, if that is what it takes for you to be free of her then it is a price I am willing to pay over and over again, its ok Karan'


'Karan please don't think so much you mean so much to me and there is probably nothing I wouldn't do for you,..."

'Karan its ok, nothing can come between us right, our friendship is above all this so why worry'


Zoya is yet to realize and recognize the depth of these dialogues, there were truly amazing.


'No Zoya you are not going anywhere, I don't care what happens or what she says or does, I am not letting you go, this is a much your home as it is mine, and if you can sit there and agree to do this without even flinching then I can do everything in my power to make sure you stay here'

'no, I said no, I am not letting you go Zoya I can't, I won't let it happen'


This subconscious attachment and protectiveness that they both feel towards each other is absolutely beautiful.


"And it was at that moment that he knew what he felt for Zoya was not just care as a friend. The thought of not being with her or having her with him almost crippled him. Zoya hid her face in his chest she felt like she was in the safest place in the world and that nothing could ever harm her as long as Karan was with her. Feeling wetness against his chest he realized that Zoya was crying, he pulled her back and wiped the tears away 'you know I really don't like it when you cry, it ruins your beautiful face' he kissed her forehead and as his lips touched her skin Zoya closed her eyes taking in the moment 'what about Indu?' 'Don't worry about her it's my problem'."


Karan has realized their relationship, transcends that of just friendship - Good progression!


Zoe's feeling of security in his arms, those hugs and forehead kisses are really beautiful.


Kiran! She has taken over the "fire-cracker" title from Zoya. 😆 An amazing friend though. 👏


Karan never really had a plan of action but I'm glad he has told Indu she wouldn't be living with the rest of them.


A well - balanced, enjoyable chapter except the Monster and her shenanigans.


Hey Prashni

Thank you so mch sweetie, am glad u liked it

Lol I guess she has adopted the title...quite fitting too 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Beautiful beautiful update dee !! loved it to core !! 😊
Karan closing his eyes and turning around was really too cute !! 😆
Hug ! Aww 😳
It's good that he told her everything. Zoe..cry and scream your hert out baby !

I feel so bad for her... But she has got wonderful people around so no worries...
Karan realizes that he cant let her go and that she is more than JUST friend ! 😃 Does that mean??? Dee? you know what i'm hoping? 😉

Indu ! ! 😡 😡 I don;t wanna spoil my mind ! She's a bi*ch and we know it ! 😡

Zoya...again ! Who's car hit her now?
Can't wait for the next part..
Update soon ! 😃

- Anee



Hey Anee

Hope u r well

Thank u so much for liking it...I know what my little sis is hoping for and I promise it's coming very soon

Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


4 convincing Saima di i can't thank u enough 😛

she should have stopped herself from posting ever😃

U desever badi wali huggie🤗

OK so new story is in d making

Don't worry i wont spread d news 😉

haw mujhe pe shak mat karo plz😲😆



😆

U r so cute
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Posted: 11 years ago
Saima Api😳❤️

Chapter 20

karan again entering her room without knocking😆
zoya understood his inner turmoil n that she had to leave

'Karan why do you look so upset, you think that I wouldn't or couldn't do something so small for you, if that is what it takes for you to be free of her then it is a price I am willing to pay over and over again, its ok Karan' 😭
she understand him soo well😊 they have a beautiful bond😳
'No Zoya you are not going anywhere, I don't care what happens or what she says or does, I am not letting you go, this is a much your home as it is mine, and if you can sit there and agree to do this without even flinching then I can do everything in my power to make sure you stay here'
he pulled zoya in a consoling hug n told her that he'll never let her go
he realizes that zoya means more to him than a friend☺️ he wipes her tears n kisses her forehead
Indu constantly reminding karan of their deal😡 n doesnt leave a chance to mock zoya😡
i love kiran for blasting indu😉

'quite easily, your behavior is uncalled for you just can't leave it alone can you Indu, I have had enough...you know what, do what you like I really have gone past caring Zoya is not leaving and you are not coming end of' 👏 go karan😃
3 guyz tease zoya on her way back from college😲
and zoya had an accident😲
i am sure karan will be her saviour 😳
loved the update👏
most imp love yah loadz Api❤️

Maha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maha2012

Saima Api😳❤️

Chapter 20

karan again entering her room without knocking😆
zoya understood his inner turmoil n that she had to leave

'Karan why do you look so upset, you think that I wouldn't or couldn't do something so small for you, if that is what it takes for you to be free of her then it is a price I am willing to pay over and over again, its ok Karan' 😭
she understand him soo well😊 they have a beautiful bond😳
'No Zoya you are not going anywhere, I don't care what happens or what she says or does, I am not letting you go, this is a much your home as it is mine, and if you can sit there and agree to do this without even flinching then I can do everything in my power to make sure you stay here'
he pulled zoya in a consoling hug n told her that he'll never let her go
he realizes that zoya means more to him than a friend☺️ he wipes her tears n kisses her forehead
Indu constantly reminding karan of their deal😡 n doesnt leave a chance to mock zoya😡
i love kiran for blasting indu😉

'quite easily, your behavior is uncalled for you just can't leave it alone can you Indu, I have had enough...you know what, do what you like I really have gone past caring Zoya is not leaving and you are not coming end of' 👏 go karan😃
3 guyz tease zoya on her way back from college😲
and zoya had an accident😲
i am sure karan will be her saviour 😳
loved the update👏
most imp love yah loadz Api❤️

Maha


Little Api is on a roll today 😆

Thank you Maha, am really glad you are liking the story. Means a lot to me

🤗

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