arhi ff: not cut out for love #3, chapters 21 - 29 **completed**

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#741

Indi...😊

Big improvement...

ASR and singing...😛 but that is what his heart wants but his dimag...uff...full of volcanic ashes

He denied hid di, and sent Akash for Khushi and she went to temple with her heavy heart...and Akash left her there and then his protective instincts come in action...He gets relief seeing her in one piece...

But , her he goes...he did something which is unforgettable , it doesn't matter ...which she was feeling but he said it and now she wants to throw the ring but ring is not coming off...eternity and destiny can't change .

Light update...waiting for marriage

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Beautiful Indi.😊

Finally the uljhan has some suljhan in Khushi's life.

She knows where heart lies and knows she loves him.Thnx to her father who knows his child's fragile , pure and honest heart like an open book.

Love fairy lights and the magical effect.She is cute.She wants this spell of him to disappear which is twinkling in her heart and spreading light of joy and awakening her from her childhood slumber to embrace the womanhood , with open arms and meet Arnav , other side of this darkness which is full of colorful lights but amazingly he is coming to that light too...to come out of his miseries , his dark paths to embrace the youthful, fiesty , gusty Khushi who spreads light in his dark corners always and he always moves towards her with her spell and can't ignore either...but denies ...no not denies...just doesn't wanna acknowledge it...He knows it for sure...Love it ...your mind works unconsciously indi...

hi faiqa, didn't get a chance to say thanks for that, you commented on the chapter before. so glad you enjoyed. and oh nice thought about lights and spell... she is really too much of a draw, he tries to resist.. so so hard.

onto this episode... your comment always makes me ponder. yeah eternity cannot be denied... that ring is there to stay.

marriage. honestly i still have no idea if that is happening r not. will update later tonight.

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: indi52
Beautiful Indi.😊
Finally the uljhan has some suljhan in Khushi's life.

She knows where heart lies and knows she loves him.Thnx to her father who knows his child's fragile , pure and honest heart like an open book.

Love fairy lights and the magical effect.She is cute.She wants this spell of him to disappear which is twinkling in her heart and spreading light of joy and awakening her from her childhood slumber to embrace the womanhood , with open arms and meet Arnav , other side of this darkness which is full of colorful lights but amazingly he is coming to that light too...to come out of his miseries , his dark paths to embrace the youthful, fiesty , gusty Khushi who spreads light in his dark corners always and he always moves towards her with her spell and can't ignore either...but denies ...no not denies...just doesn't wanna acknowledge it...He knows it for sure...Love it ...your mind works unconsciously indi...

hi faiqa, didn't get a chance to say thanks for that, you commented on the chapter before. so glad you enjoyed. and oh nice thought about lights and spell... she is really too much of a draw, he tries to resist.. so so hard.

onto this episode... your comment always makes me ponder. yeah eternity cannot be denied... that ring is there to stay.

marriage. honestly i still have no idea if that is happening r not. will update later tonight.

indi...I think my memory didn't go on hiking yet ...I think so...or may be I woke up on the wrong side of bed this morning...I did comment for the last chapter as I was busy in my guests and that is at the top of this chapter ...and this one if for this chapter...

I commented on without you two days ago...u must be mixing this with that...I am sure...or may be I am hallucinating...

Well if I made three comments ...so what...hann...

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Chapter 23

What a twist in this love story you brought by giving it some action touch to show the evilness of Shyam .Who tried to eliminate both the witnesses of his infidelity.Good that JP was there to who helped La and also can prove ASR innocent if needed.

Khushi and her babu ji has a very special bond of father and daughter as he is the pillar of strength for her in every situation.

It's ASR's test how to break the bubble of her di by telling her the truth about her husband and I am sure he will deal it with his trade mark ASR style ⭐️

ArHi relation is so unique and you described it beautifully and naturally the state through which both of them are going and know how to comfort each other in their own way without even realizing it.

Loved the plane scene the unsettled and emotionally complex ASR who is unaware of his unknown feelings for Khushi why it was inevitable for him to keep her near him.He struggled with these new feelings but it only pushes him more towards her.Good that her side of story also unfolds here that why did she agree to his proposal.

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.Brooke.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Chapter 24

Kahani main ek aur twist a marriage proposal of ASR for Khushi "shaadi kerni hogi tonight mere saath mere pass" and that too in aapki humari sabki payaari sav 😆 You really are using sav well

"but you don't believe in marriage but you do" Loved this ASR who can do anything for those he loves sigh but here with Khushi he has no idea that it's LOVE.

Her laad governor left no choice for her but to accept his proposal but she is Khushi who never give in without trying and she tried and changed tonight into a week sigh her jiji made her to agree.

His proposal to Guptas was typical ASRish simple,straight forward,to the point.

Billo mausi and her reaction was superb.Shashi Gupta handled the situation wisely.ASR reminds Bua ji of her late husband 😆 no wonder she likes him.

It's ASR's fear of losing those he loves made him to marry Khushi in a week's time to keep her safe near him but Shyam again provide a reason to bring them closer as your writing always has some connection with the show 😊.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#746

When will 'later tonight' come Didi???? 😳

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#747

When is the next update coming Indi???

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

indi...I think my memory didn't go on hiking yet ...I think so...or may be I woke up on the wrong side of bed this morning...I did comment for the last chapter as I was busy in my guests and that is at the top of this chapter ...and this one if for this chapter...

I commented on without you two days ago...u must be mixing this with that...I am sure...or may be I am hallucinating...

Well if I made three comments ...so what...hann...

sorry for confusion...

i meant i saw your comment on the last chapter but since i did not get a chance to reply... am doing so here.

on this chapter.. i have read your comment. thanks so much for it... and the reply's last bit was on that.

anyway... no problem... as long as you like reading ncofl... i am happy.

and yeah... comment whenever wherever, we are asr ladkis, we can do what we like, what the. 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: rk2127
When is the next update coming Indi???

i am writing it now...

am sorry for the time going by and no asr angry in sight... the actor's birthday has me going a bit crazy managing bday pages on fb... but now i am sitting down with my asr and khushi and finding out what is all this about not being cut out for love. thanks for being interested.. you lovely reader you. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: .Brooke.
Chapter 23
What a twist in this love story you brought by giving it some action touch to show the evilness of Shyam .Who tried to eliminate both the witnesses of his infidelity.Good that JP was there to who helped La and also can prove ASR innocent if needed.
Khushi and her babu ji has a very special bond of father and daughter as he is the pillar of strength for her in every situation.
It's ASR's test how to break the bubble of her di by telling her the truth about her husband and I am sure he will deal it with his trade mark ASR style ⭐️
ArHi relation is so unique and you described it beautifully and naturally the state through which both of them are going and know how to comfort each other in their own way without even realizing it.
Loved the plane scene the unsettled and emotionally complex ASR who is unaware of his unknown feelings for Khushi why it was inevitable for him to keep her near him.He struggled with these new feelings but it only pushes him more towards her.Good that her side of story also unfolds here that why did she agree to his proposal.

sarah,

welcome back.

thanks for that detailed comment. glad you liked the "twist" he he... the story actually tells me to do things... i follow. after all, asr is in the lead... we will get there, won't we?

it is a test for this young tycoon... the one he knows he loves is challenged. and the one he doesn't know he loves is also not safe. his demons drive him crazy, his decisions come from places he has not yet got to know.

and khushi... yes, with her father a deep bond. he really was her smile maker when all the stars were gone... holding his hand, she learned to believe again. she seeks him in this confusing hour... and he is there.

thanks for reading and the love you show ncofl. 😳