BROTHERS...! ( Parrot Story for RIYA HBD Gift @ PG 137)!!! - Page 35

Originally posted by: beena.thomas

Read your story 'Happy Birthday Abhi'.

Lovely story yaar. 👏 ⭐️ Thank you so much. 🤗

Thank You yaar...😳😳

Liked how the story began.Very nice conversation between Duo.

the Telephonic Convo na...😉

It is so nice to see that Freddy sir remembered Abhijeet sir's birthday.Liked your description of the scene when Freddy Sir wished Abhijeet sir.

Thanks again...😳

It was so sweet to see that Freddy sir observed Abhijeet's response and understood that Daya sir had not wished him.😳

Obviously yaar, a Long time working relationsships...😳😳

Abhijeet's order to the team about not reminding Daya about his birthday was 😆 Superb portrayal of a very intelligent cop who thinks way ahead. ⭐️

Sharp shine na...😉😉

Liked how you described Abhijeet's self thoughts after the above scene.👏 And then,Vivek's idea of informing Daya while following Abhijet's order and again Abhijeet's response 😆

Alert with His Bright Mind na...👏

Loved the bonding between the team and your portrayal of each scene. ⭐️
Nice portrayal of the scenes at Abhijeet's and Daya's side towards the end of the day.

awww...😳

Freddy's way to make Daya sir remember without going against Abhijeet's sir's order was very nice.Knowing both of them very well,it is nice to see how he helped Daya.
Very nice description of the entire scenes. ⭐️

Trust Touray bina Kaam...😃👍🏼

And then,the way in which,it dawned on Daya that it was the day of Abhijeet's birthday has been well portrayed.👏 Well written. ⭐️
Following this,Daya's arrangements for Abhijeet's birthday within the limited time has been beautifully described.The idea of buying gifts from Airport's Duty Free Shop is commendable. ⭐️

Yes, it was My Idea and I really Enjoyed it...😆😳

Thank you for Liking it...😳😳

And then,the part of how Daya with the entire team wished Abhijeet and also how they arranged for the food is so sweet. 😳

Thanks...😳😳

The team's concern for each other is so beautifully described.

awww...😳😳

Duo bonding is awesome.Abhijet understood that Daya must have come, driving non-stop, to reach there in time. 😳

Thank you...😳😳

Lastly,the Birthday Card siggy ⭐️ apt lines to portray Duo's bonding. Very beautifull lines.

Thank you...😳😳

Thank you once again GD,for such an a sweet and wonderful story.Thanks a lot for your efforts. 😃

Originally posted by: start1234

Heart touching story👏 Roza rakhate hue dhoop mein Sara din kam karna my God so difficult aur I liked that abhi=bhai and yaadi part aur end pe jhatka laga update soon

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Oooh my Lord Dada, you left me speechless yar...

The kid who lost his arms due to such ------- landlords just came in front of my eyes yar and I salute you for taking this topic on this forum... Really Dada that was very heart throbbing and heart wrenching incident...

The kid was only about nine yar, com'on yar don't they have hearts that they do such merciless things with these innocent souls, i hate it yar, just hate it...

Sorry yar not understanding what I am writing but I just want to give you a tight hug and lots of prayers, thank you so much dear, thanks a lot...

May Almighty Allah g protect you and bless you, salute you dear, salute you...

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Just read yours Abhijeet sir's birthday special... Really great one yar, I enjoyed the whole... 👏

Thank you...😳

The way Daya sir forgot the date and Abhijeet sir waited till the last minute, was really sweet and lovely... 👏

awww again Thank you...😳

Wasey main bhi breakfast mein biryani kha laiti hun, haha... 😆 An other thing common between me and Daya sir, ahhahah... 😉

Ya ALLAH... U all are Same Same...😆😆

The team's turning into a loving family, awesome and Freddy sir's acting and idea was superb as woh gana hai na " KUCH BHI NA KAHA AUR KEH BHI GAYE..." haha... 😆

Apt Song U Indicated...😉👏

Thanks a lot dear for this beautiful story and yeah a big thanks for sending those links too dear, please do remember me whenever you send links of yours creative works, thanks a lot dear and stay blessed.. 😊

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Not in a state to write :'(

Originally posted by: Veena..

Hello GD 🤗

Story yar bht achi hai or end pe ponch k toh bht dhuki ho gaye 😔

Ok me tumhe start se btati hoon 😛 bcz I like it 😉

Yar the bday scene was maze ka, may I guess whoz gift will be the best😳 hmmm ok its misha 👏

kisy Pata...😉😉

I love that sober way of abhi sir 😳

He is always SOBER...😳

I can understand daya sir fear after seeing dcp sahab 😡

Shuker...😆😆

But oh I loved that scene in bureau betwern trio😳 and then between abhi and acp sir and then I liked the scene beterrn duo at home when they were packing their bags 😊

Thank you...😳😳

Wohoo dcp ghaoon 😛

Un ka bhi kuch Background saamny aaya...😉😉

Daya sir ko itna acha sa friend mil gaya na wahan pe bi awe sweet 😊

Daya sir interaction with that kid really cute and awesome😳

Thank you...😳😳

I really like the way he speak to that little boy or wo bi when Rehan taught him to cut the crops 😃

Seriously yar how tough it is na, aise lakhon bache or aise lakhon log hai abi bi 😔 yeh bache roza rakh k bi kitni mehanat mushaqat karte hain or hume dheko zara 😒

humein Humein Ghar mein, AC ki Thandak mein bhi ROZA hee lagta rehta hay... wobhi itna Chota Roza...

Jis excitment se ja k daya abhi ko Rehan k bare me sab bata'ta I really liked that or pir toh u know k duo ka apas ka interaction wese hi mera favorite hai

Yes I knew...😃

OmG that was so cute the way he interfer the meaningful words from duo's name adya or bhai sweet😳 and then no doubt that I liked his choosen names for both, jeet bhia and yaadi bhia smpily cute

try to give a New Aspect of their Names and Relations...😳😳

I like the way u include sachin rajat freedy and vivek in all these and they all went to meet him 😃

Quallis scene with oldie duo and our duo fit tha 👍🏼

thanks again...😳

But the last scene was horrible yar that cruelty😭

Uff zulm ki inteha hai

Yes...😭😭

Yar tumari story parh k mje ek real incident yad aya hai I have just a doubt k kahin tum ne yeh usi incident pe toh nai likhi? Bcz u said na k yeh real incidentvpe likh rai ho tum hmm

Yar wo jo zulm ki had muka di us chote se bache k bazo kaat diye the gujrat me? Yar wo bi aisi hi mashine pe rakha tha us bache ko I think it happend a month ago did u remember that? Kitna zulum hai yar infact inteha hai zulm ki insaniyat mar chuki hai zara sa reham nai raha logo k dil me aise pathar dil ho chuke hain sab k sab

Mje wohi yad aya or aisa laga k shayd tum ne usi pe story likha hai

Baki mje tumari story achi lagi hamesha ki tarah or I hope tum jaldi se update kr do ta k mje next pata chale 😊

Mje agey dhekna hai na k ab agey kya ho ga or daya sir bi kitna royen ge na😕

U r a superb writer GD and I really like reading ur stories 😊

Me waiting for the next part😊

Originally posted by: gadhadada

No...😊

Sorry Boss...

I tried to Update it till Thursday...👍🏼👍🏼

Thank You so much for reading BT...😳😳

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Yaar Wat I m saying...

U completely Revealed the Whole Story by Opening the Incident...😭😭

I tried to Update it till Thursday...👍🏼👍🏼

Thank You so much for reading VEENU...😳😳

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">yes, its a Real Incident...😭😭</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">isy HIMMAT nahi Behisi kehty hain...🤢🤢</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">haan thats Correct, aisay darindun ko On Spot Maar dena chahyey...😡😡</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I tried to Update till Thursday...👍🏼👍🏼</font>

<font color="#ff0000" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank You so much CID_DUO for Reading it...😳😳</font>