#2 Ashlok FF - You've Won My Heart! (Chapter 19 on 96) - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm just loving their road trip, turning out to be quite the thing😃 It was a really cutee moment when he really innocently removed that element of hair which was distracting her face, and also you described it really wellšŸ‘ loved their constant bickering, soo cutee. I guess it all starts off like that. And when Shlok and Astha started opening up to each other, showed their next step in getting to know each other better😃

As if Shlok doesn't know he's her crush, damn. Waiting for that moment when he does. Which will truly be amazing lol dunno why I'm jumping the story already, but yeh whatevs😳

And when you said Astha knew he was just arguing with her to keep her awake, that was soo cutee. She's already got to know him soo well😳

Muahaha Gul in your face😈
Btw I think this is the first time I've actually unreserved on the same day as reserving it *phew*šŸ˜†
Btw check my comment out just before you posted this chapter😃
Edited by ...Ayesha... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Ayesha...

After ages I am first

Resss

Haha u r šŸ˜† Welcome back.. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Unres*

sorry Sam for commenting so late šŸ˜” u must have gotten used to this line now but cant help it šŸ˜†
seriouslyyy šŸ˜›
what a fabulous update it is 😊 their road trip or their journey to know eachother ... u have described it amazingly 😳
Shlok removing the strand of hair from her hair i am the loving the way things are shaping up though there is still a long way to go !!!
their nok jhok is as always fun to read but then took a serious turn !! still shlok knew how to handle the situation šŸ˜‰
The bestest part in this update was shlok asking her about her crush and the last time she spoke the truth ... u had described her feelings to perfection but i am still anxious to know about shlok's feelings ... and what stopped him from asking further questions !!
why didnt he enquire further about her crush ...
i so wish to know about this in the further updates but i am sure u will actually surpass my expectations šŸ˜‰ 😳
all in all a superb update wid perfect description of emotions 😳
Edited by Zehra. - 11 years ago
TomNJerry... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Have to unrest for last 3 chapters but will do after my exams
Sam_15 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow you unresd already? So soon? 😲😲
I will reply to ur previous comment in few minutes 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Enjoyed reading it
Please Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meerab...

Res
Have to unrest for last 3 chapters but will do after my exams

Sure Meerab, take ur time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sam_15


Sure Meerab, take ur time😊

thanks dear šŸ¤—
TomNJerry... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a surprise 😲 shlok aap one week se pehley wapis aagaye?? šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update Sam...
Its very descriptive...
The way u mentioned the first few lines about astha checking emails...its truly amazing...
U mentioned her reaction in such a way...that throughout while reading d update was expecting that u will
reveal something about it...but u reserved it for next update... never mind...

Goa...ashlok???did i missed anything...have u already mentioned about this??
If so...am really sorry...am actually reading most of the fictions in this forum...
Since u updated after a long gap...i think i forgot

But extremely enjoyed their chit-chat while driving...
Enjoyable convo...but was like shlok what do u want...
Y r u scaring the wits out of her with ur questions... šŸ˜†
Especially...the question about last truth...
Hmm...wants to see where this beautiful journey heading...
Its getting more n more interesting...
Thanks for the update dear 😃
Next update this weekend

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