FF:Pyar Ki Ek Kahaani Prt 50 Pg 145 - Page 23

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Posted: 18 years ago
oye hoye...cute lil JANI scene...aww...how cute...bani keeps a diary...awww 😃 😃 😃 ...haila...who is this one that broke your heart...haila...i think jai is jealous that bani ke dil mein pehle koi tha...lol...cant wait for next update
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Posted: 18 years ago
great update

so y do i have thus feeling that jai is goin to reaD BANI'Z DIARY ????????

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Posted: 18 years ago
BRILLIANT part šŸ˜‰
i also think jai will read her diary šŸ˜‰

plz update soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for the update
please give us a long part
can't wait to no what happens next 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Waw i love this side of Bani.
It's very painful to know that the one Bani loves is the one who break her heart 😭 😭
Great part but very short šŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part, please continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonderful part sweety ! šŸ‘
Tooo sweet ! 😳
Jai is too curious ! šŸ˜†
Pheww bani was abt to tell him the truth ! šŸ˜†
please continue ASAP ! šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
i looooove ur ff!!! awesome !!! plz do cotn sooooon naaa!! hehe i'll be waiting! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

hey guyz... sry for the delay... here is teh next part... it is not very thoughtful cuz i didn't take much time writing it... hopefully you like it...

Part 12

B: I am Bani Walia… wife of Jai Walia and a person who is totally opposite of you…

J: That is the first time and probably the last time I am ever going to hear from your mouth that you are my wife…

B: So you accept me being your wife?

J: No…yes… I don't know…

B: We are still rivals and I am sure you wouldn't like to step out of that position just now…

J: Aren't you mad at me Bani? After all I have done to you…

B: what did u do to me?

J: I yell at you… I tried to wipe out your company from the business world and etc…

B: that is a hard question to answer Mr. Walia…

J: whats with the 'Mr.Walia'?

B: why?

J: you never called me Mr.Walia before…

B: that's cuz our relation then was not formal

J: and now it is?

B: I will call you Jai… when I feel like it okay? Now can we get going?

J: So now it is your wish?

B: Just for this night…

J: But where are we going?

Jai never got his answer because Bani just started walking. Jai followed wondering where she is taking him. Both of them got in the car and Bani gave Jai directions to a small mela kind of thing. No one was there except a man standing there, as if waiting for them. Bani got out of the car and rushed to talk to him, while Jai parked the car. He came to them, just in time to hear Bani thanking him.

Bani walked in the park along with Jai, who was totally confused.

J: Bani… this is closed…

B: No…

J: Will you tell me what is happening?

B: That guy is a good friend of mine and I requested him to open the park till we are here.

J: and why are we here in this park at midnight.

B: let me guess… you never went to a park like this or on the small rides…

Jai shook his head in NO. Bani just nodded as if she guessed this already. She lead him to the ferris wheel and both of them got in. The ride started after a few seconds. It started slow and went faster and faster. Bani was thrilled. Its been ages since she went on one of these rides. She turned to jai and couldn't help, but laugh. Jai was sitting stiff, with no expression. The ride was going a bit too fast and Bani loved it. BUT, apparently Jai didn't. The ride ended after a few minutes. And Jai was the first one out. Bani started launghing out loud. Her laughter was heard through the still night.

J: Ha ha ha… very funny. You can stop laughing now.

B: You should have seen yourself… as if death was right in front of you…

J: it was too fast…

B: but still… you were sooo funny… wish I could've taken a picture…

Bani continued to laugh much to Jai's annoyance. Bani stopped after a few minutes looking at his expression. They stopped by a small bangle stall, where lots of bangles were there. Bani stopped and looked at the bangles longingly…. Jai just smiled at her innocence. He picked up bangles of each and every colour and handed it to the stall owner to pack them. He handed that bag to Bani as he paid.

B: Are these really for me?

J: No bani… they are for me…

Bani smiled and looked down shyly. No one ever has bought her a gift like this. She always had to do things herself. And today, someone, who is a complete stranger bought her bangles. Jai handed Bani the bag, containing the bangles and both of them started walking towards the exit. Jai didn't want any of those rides again and Bani was too much in a daze to realize where she was heading. But nevertheless, when they reached car, Bani directed Jai to a small daba, which was deserted.

Bani walked up to the guy and order something. She came back and sat with Jai on a bench, outside the little dabba.

J: what are you thinking about?

B: nothing important…

J: do u always go to places like these?

B: never judge a book by its cover…

J: I am not judging… I am jus curious…

B: well, a childhood friend showed me this dabba and I love going on rides ever since I was small… especially with my dad… Bani's face became a little dull, thinking about her dad and Jai immediately noticed that..

J: you miss him a lot … don't you…

B: yeah… having a family of own, is something really fortunate…

J: I know… I lost my parents in a car accident only when I was ten years old and I never felt the same again… I still had my brother with me… but it was as if something was missing in my life…. And then I concentrated hard in my studies and now the walia industries… I want bhaiyya to take rest… afterall he got just married to bhabhi and he should enjoy because he worked hard for many years… and now it is my turn…

B: you are a very good business man

J: I doubt that…

B: seriously… you work very hard and when it comes to handling a business… you are very harsh and arrogant… the business tycoon JW…

J: it is not my fault… you need to have the right kind of attitude for the right kind of situation…

B: whatever you say…

Just they two plate of dosa arrived. Bani started to eat and encouraged Jai, who was delighted by the taste…

J: this is delicious…

B: it really is…

After finishing, both of them approached tha car and set off once again. And this time, Bani led Jai to a familiar place.

******************************************************** plzz ignore the mistakes and i really loved reading your comments... they really make my day. i will be looking forward to your comments...

Au Revoir

Edited by achiever_libra - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey... wonderful update... loved it...
wonder what familiar place Bani took jai....
update soon... 😃

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