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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: VasusenaRadheya

Res fr comment .

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: __Sonali__

Wow khushi di it was so lovely to read ths OS. Vry romantic n specially tht bike n blanket wale scenes...
I liked it vry much 😊 😊



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thnx 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww Amazing OS Didu, So Beautiful Funny n Lovely n Realistic (Fangirling n Film Shooting Thing), Romance Comedy (Avantika's Actions/Reactions) Fun Complication (Commitment Thing) All In One. Superb, Very Very Well Written 👏 Loved It 😳

But All The Names Of The Characters Stole My Attention, Abhimanyu_Avantika Well Matched n Individually Beautiful, I Personaly Love The Name Ruhaanika For Two Reasons One Its Beautiful n Uncommon Two Ofcourse "Ruhi K Liye" (Haaye Meri Ruhi) 😳

Thank You For This Amazing OS 😳

Waise OSCAR Is My Brother's Name 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Diii

For the first time this is not RTMC for me this is only Rajat and mee...( Haan haan I know this is Your's and Sid jiju's stiry, but non jodi likha hai to me kisiko bhi imagine kar sakti hu haina? aur haan I am also ignoring Avantika's profession)
😉

Vaise Abhimanyu and Avantika dono satke hue hai! 😆
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One two three...and BANNNGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank God Avi giri nhi varna uska huhaa hee ho jate...!!! 😆 😆 (Vaise aise kaise ho jata..Abhi tha na use bchane I mean sambhalne!)

But wait a minute...ye kya..bandi ne to koi bhao hi nhi diya use...and he is all confused ki aisa kaise ho gya?
But well, AISA BHI HOTA HAI...AISA BHI HOTA HAI...!! 😉

And jab use realise hua ki yeah aoi nhi Abhimanyu hai ,atlab THE ABHIMANYU...she went all red red red red red red red red red red red red red red and red..!!! 😳

and her convo with her bestie Ruhanika...(Haaye..mujhe bhi karni hai aisi convo..Ya khuda..sun raha hai na tu?????????????)


avantika was trying to look at him but dnt finding enough guts bt on the other hand abhimanyu do look at her 2-3 times, he did notice her weird behaviour after she met him


God...This Abhimanyu...what else do you expect from her?? That she will keep on staring you...!! Ufff...!! Idiot..kabhi kisi celebrity pe crush nhi hua kya??? But wait...why are you continously gazing at her?? haan haan..btao btao...!!! 😉

a car came n stop by her side, she got scared n start walking from there, the car was following her, she got more scared...

Ab aadhi raat ko...sunsaan sadak par...ek ladki ke side car chlaoge...to bechari ladki dre nhi to kya kare??? 😡

Hey, were you following her vaise???? 😲 😲


Abhi: Can i drop u ?

Avan: mmm (she dnt want to accept it that fast but she can't deny it either)

Dekha...kitna difficult hota hai ladki hona?? 😡 First of all youcanaccept the offer no matter how big a crush you have on the person and secondly you cannot deny because you actually have a big crush on the person..!! Phewww!!! Bhot bda jhmela hai...!!
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Dhink chika dhink chika dhink chika...
Nuber mil gya number mil gya number milgya...wow wow wow...!!!!
But usne office ke phone se call kiya..hahah aur kya karti bechari! 😆 😆


Abhi: Sir???? Abhimanyu!!!! Bhool gyi kal hi to naam bataya tha...

Bhool gyi? Kya bhool gyi? Naam?? Ye bhi koi bhoolne ki cheez hai bhla? especially jab naam Abhimanyu ho! 😉

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Hmm dinner ..and then number exchanged...and Avi ne nhi btaya ki uske paas to number already hai...!! 😃 😃
kI fark penda hai..ab to abhi ko vi a agya!
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Hmmm Abhi ke ghar party and he has invited Avi! 👏 👏
Hahaha dog scene (log dogs rakhte hi kyu hai yaar...???) 😕 😡

And then bingo...bike ride...wow...so romantic..banda mze le rha tha! 😆 😆

Oh yes..the dance!! How can I forget it??? So damn romantic...!!!!!!!
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Seven months later...!!!!
Oh god..Avantika...pehle apni courtship to enjoy karlo...shadi baad me kar lena...time to do khud ko and usko! 😕
But ye kya?? Tumne uski baat sunli and you feel hurt...well I can understand! 😭
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Then she got drunk in pub?? 😲 Haila...Avi J ho rhi thi! 😆 KOina na ...Abhi hai na...le gya tujhe tere ghar and wait wait wait...KISSS!!!!!

Dude...I am so very proud of you! 😉 🤣

Abhi: U want to maintain a distance? Ab maintain karna, i'll see to it k tum kaise karti ho...


Oh my God...Abhi...hahahahahahahahahahahaha...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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A: Yes! I luv avantika!

A: Ye koi mazak ka topic h, us ladki ne meri jaan le li h, kitne nakhre karti h, kabhi commitment chahiye, kabhi door jana hai, paas aao to door jana h, chahti kya h vo!!!

A: No if no but yaar kuch kar yaarrr plz itna nahi kar sakti... dekh meri halat, ladkiyon ki line lagi h mere piche aur main is pagal k piche pagal ho raha hu!


Oh my God di...I'll die laughing! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Abhi(he recognizes her voice): Hiii jaan y being so formal

Avan(Eishhh: wats wrong with him): Sir need to do some paperwork n its urgent, when can i meet u?

Abhi(This girl ... grrr): M'am m out of city for 1 week, if its urgent u hv to cum here n meet me, Thanku.

He disconnects the call.

Inke sir aur madam ke chakkar me na train nikal jaegi aur ye dono gadhe bas sir ma'am hi karte rhege! huh...duffers! 😡 😡

Vanity scene...Me day dreaming...!!!!! ☺️ ☺️

But this girl...apni eyes close karli...hadd hai...aisa roz roz thodi hota hai and especially jan bhuj kar...!! 😡
(Mein hoti to kabhi na karti...uski manliness enjoy karti...hahahahaha...imagine Rajat shirtless in front of me...what a scene!! )

And she ran outside...the vanity...!! Poor girl..!! Cursing herself and him!

Vo bhi peeche peeche bhaga uske...and vo ander hi nhi aana chahti...(are pagal...vo itne pyar se bula rha hai...go na...!)

and vo bhi use vhi chodke chla gya vapis ander...!!!! Poor Abhimanyu! 😭 😆

Hahahaha zyada der nhi reh payi Abhi se dur...Thank you Rain..Love You...!!!


Avan(to herself): I think m gonna die like this, andar gyi to bhi band bajegi n nahi gyi to bhi baj hi rahi h ... waise andar jaake band bajwana is save ...

She goes n knocked on the door... He opens the door...

Abhi: Ab kya hai?

Avan(with shivering lips): Thand lag rahi h!


Huh...aur rho barish me..aur Abhi se door...dekha kya hua..thand lag rhi hai na? Go and hug him then! 😛 😛

Blanket scene hahaha..this guy...seriously he is one crazy man...!!! And I like it...!!! 😃 😃

And Avi ka kehna😳...apne man mein..use kya pta chlega...hahahaha..beta...sab kuch usi ka kiya dhra hai behan...!! Sharing the blanket...! 😳 and naughty Abhi vo bhi dhang se nhi karne deta...!!!!! 😳 Good boy!!!! 👏
Made her snuggled closeer to you...Oh man...I am so very proud of you now...!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

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And his convo with Nisha the next morning...!! Aww Abhi..I love you!! 😳 😳

Avan: We were just sleeping there ohk !!!


Obviously you both were ONLY sleeping...!!!! Abhi ne to kuch bhi nhi kaha!! 😆
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Yayyy DATE...!!! Vo bhi monsoon date...and vo bhi garden bhi...and vo bhi Abhi ke sath...wow!!!!!!
❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Abhi smiled : As u wish (he stands) ... Aaj jo tum bolo bas voi karunga, infact aage bhi jo bologi voi karunga, shaadi karne ko bologi vo bhi karunga, bologi k nahi karni shaadi vo bhi karunga, i just want to be with u together, i just want to be by ur side, just promise u'll not cry and don't be sad,
don't say that you don't like me, say that you will think about it, say that u'll be with me, say that u love me (his eyes gets teary while saying all this)!

Avan dnt say anything n move from their ... abhi was shocked, thinking that she dnt liked it... he move forward, hold her hand to stop her...

❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Yes...yes..yes...it's a yes...!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳

Hahahahaha Abhi ko to dra hi diya Avi ne...!!!
But guess what Abhi?
She's all yours...forever and ever...!!

Their story started with a bang and enede with a kiss...so perfect...!!! 😳 😳

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This made me say...I love Rajat...! And I love Khushi Di...!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
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Khumao...!!!!

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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With Love Apu!



Edited by Rajat_Fanatic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Awww Amazing OS Didu, So Beautiful Funny n Lovely n Realistic (Fangirling n Film Shooting Thing), Romance Comedy (Avantika's Actions/Reactions) Fun Complication (Commitment Thing) All In One. Superb, Very Very Well Written 👏 Loved It 😳

But All The Names Of The Characters Stole My Attention, Abhimanyu_Avantika Well Matched n Individually Beautiful, I Personaly Love The Name Ruhaanika For Two Reasons One Its Beautiful n Uncommon Two Ofcourse "Ruhi K Liye" (Haaye Meri Ruhi) 😳

Thank You For This Amazing OS 😳

Waise OSCAR Is My Brother's Name 😆



thnx dear
sare cs real hi h yahan bas name fake h except oscar ye real h with real name 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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#38

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Diii

For the first time this is not RTMC for me this is only Rajat and mee...( Haan haan I know this is Your's and Sid jiju's stiry, but non jodi likha hai to me kisiko bhi imagine kar sakti hu haina? aur haan I am also ignoring Avantika's profession)
😉

Vaise Abhimanyu and Avantika dono satke hue hai! 😆
********************************************************************
One two three...and BANNNGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank God Avi giri nhi varna uska huhaa hee ho jate...!!! 😆 😆 (Vaise aise kaise ho jata..Abhi tha na use bchane I mean sambhalne!)

But wait a minute...ye kya..bandi ne to koi bhao hi nhi diya use...and he is all confused ki aisa kaise ho gya?
But well, AISA BHI HOTA HAI...AISA BHI HOTA HAI...!! 😉

And jab use realise hua ki yeah aoi nhi Abhimanyu hai ,atlab THE ABHIMANYU...she went all red red red red red red red red red red red red red red and red..!!! 😳

and her convo with her bestie Ruhanika...(Haaye..mujhe bhi karni hai aisi convo..Ya khuda..sun raha hai na tu?????????????)


avantika was trying to look at him but dnt finding enough guts bt on the other hand abhimanyu do look at her 2-3 times, he did notice her weird behaviour after she met him


God...This Abhimanyu...what else do you expect from her?? That she will keep on staring you...!! Ufff...!! Idiot..kabhi kisi celebrity pe crush nhi hua kya??? But wait...why are you continously gazing at her?? haan haan..btao btao...!!! 😉

a car came n stop by her side, she got scared n start walking from there, the car was following her, she got more scared...

Ab aadhi raat ko...sunsaan sadak par...ek ladki ke side car chlaoge...to bechari ladki dre nhi to kya kare??? 😡

Hey, were you following her vaise???? 😲 😲


Abhi: Can i drop u ?

Avan: mmm (she dnt want to accept it that fast but she can't deny it either)

Dekha...kitna difficult hota hai ladki hona?? 😡 First of all youcanaccept the offer no matter how big a crush you have on the person and secondly you cannot deny because you actually have a big crush on the person..!! Phewww!!! Bhot bda jhmela hai...!!
**************************************************************


Dhink chika dhink chika dhink chika...
Nuber mil gya number mil gya number milgya...wow wow wow...!!!!
But usne office ke phone se call kiya..hahah aur kya karti bechari! 😆 😆


Abhi: Sir???? Abhimanyu!!!! Bhool gyi kal hi to naam bataya tha...

Bhool gyi? Kya bhool gyi? Naam?? Ye bhi koi bhoolne ki cheez hai bhla? especially jab naam Abhimanyu ho! 😉

****************************************************************
Hmm dinner ..and then number exchanged...and Avi ne nhi btaya ki uske paas to number already hai...!! 😃 😃
kI fark penda hai..ab to abhi ko vi a agya!
****************************************************************

Hmmm Abhi ke ghar party and he has invited Avi! 👏 👏
Hahaha dog scene (log dogs rakhte hi kyu hai yaar...???) 😕 😡

And then bingo...bike ride...wow...so romantic..b le rha tha!

to be cntd...



although u r imagining urself but ur comment make me blush once again bcoz i was imagining myself again <3

thnkuuu n waiting 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -Shonali-

Very well written!👍🏼



thnku 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arey ruko yar..mera cmnt finish nhi hua abhi! 😡

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