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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: taarey17
Update

Karing 😆

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: Applef
awesome update..

rey 's pov was nice..

taani ready to give rey a chance..

rey promised her not to repeat the past..

update soon..

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mansi98
Lovely update👏
loved taarey😃

taarey scene ws pinned down beautifully👍🏼

update soon😊

Thank you so much

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#724

CHAPTER NINE (C)

Today is the happiest day of my, Rey confessed his Love for me, the feeling of being loved by the person you Love the most is world's best feeling anyone could ever feel. When he asked me for a second chance, I couldn't hold myself back, Now i know that he is not the same rey, he has changed And I love him more.

Right now we both are sitting in restaurant and having our lunch together.

"Taani, I was thinking that It was time that kids should start going school" Rey started the conversation. He is such a sweet and perfect father.

"Ha, Even I have seen some schools, Main kal jaane wali hu, aap bhi chaloge?" I asked him hoping for Yes, Till now I have done everything alone but Now I need him, I want him to be with me and support me.

"Yep, I am coming with you, Now I don't want to miss anything, I had already missed so much about my babies" Rey replied, Pain was visible in his voice. Hesitatingly I put My hand on his which was on table. Our eyes met, His eyes lit up with this small gesture of mine. We both smiled at each other.

"Urmn...Rey, Can i ask you something?" I was hesitate while asking it to him, Unsure about my question which I am going to ask him.

"Yeah, you can ask anything without any hesitation" Rey said smiling at me, which gave me strength.

"I was thinking that..Why didn't you marry someone else after I left, I mean you could have anyone of your standard but you didn't.." I stuttered, Don't know what some in my mind that I was so desperate to hear answer from him.

"You know the answer Taani, From start I was a workaholic, Except work I never thought of anything, Maine toh kabhi shaadi ke baare main socha bhi nahi that then My dad forced me to marry you and after what I did to you, I wasn't interested in any relationship, You know After some time of our marriage I started feeling for you but then because of some misunderstanding again I believed that you married me only for money and again I started behaving like that with you, After you left I never saw someone in that way, Tumse nafrat karte hue bhi main tumhari jagah Kisi aur ko nahi dena chahta tha" rey said looking straight in to my eyes, I could see the honesty in them with pain.

"I didn't married you for money, I was forced too" I said in low tone, Its hurts thinking that he thought so low of me. I wanted to continue my study but My parents fixed my marriage with him without even asking me. I was forced too like him But he never paid heed to listen me, Always taunt me.

"I know, Di told me and made me realize that you were forced too like me" Rey said to me, Holding my hand tightly in his. I smiled at him little

"Can I ask you one question?" Rey asked him. I gave him confuse look but nodded in yes.

"Did you ever regret marrying me?" His sudden question shocked me. How much he had hurt me but I never regret marrying him, I always loved him and will always do, No matter what.

"I never regret anything that happened between us, Our kids are proof of that" I answered him making him smile, He smile whole heartedly hearing my answer showing his dimples. He Placed a soft kiss on back of my hand that made me kind of shiver.

"Thank you and I Love you" He said, don't know for what that "Thank you" was for But still its feels so good. We ate rest of the lunch in comfortable silence, he didn't left my hand even for a second which make my cheeks go red. God I am behaving like a teenage girl. From morning I was blushing In every five minute which I have to stop, Its kind of embarrassing. After Rey paid the bill we left from there, We both were going toward his car when someone come in our way, which shocked both of us, I glance toward rey who was fuming in anger. There my dad with my brother was standing both were shooting daggers at rey as if he had done some crime.

"Taani what are you doing with this man?" My dad asked me, Venom was dripping from his every word.

"What the hell are you doing here? Why does it bother you if she is with me? I am her husband" Rey hissed angrily at him, you know what Now I don't care if they are my parents or not, After what they did to me, I can't forgive them, How can they asked me to abort my baby when I went to them for support.

"Husband?" Shyaam, my brother smirk at him and gave sarcasm filled laugh, which make me roll my eyes. What they want from me now, I don't even want to see their faces still they has to come again n again to make me remember my past which I want to forget.

"First of all I am with my husband and I am adult enough to decide with whom I should be and Second I don't think it should matter to you with whom I am with, you had already broke all the ties between us" I replied to him, holding rey's hand i started to go but my dad's voice stopped us.

"After what he did with you, you are still with him, Come back to us Taani" He said to me, Rey was about to go to him but i stopped him.

"And you expect me to come back to you guys after what you did to me" I replied in cold tone. With rey I walk away from them, Tears starts breaming in my eyes. Which rey had already seen. we both were standing beside his car, I was about to sit in passenger seat but rey hold my wrist and Next Thing I know was, I was pinned to the car by him.

"Are you okay?" He asked in concern tone, I nodded in Yes thuogh I am not but I don't want to stress him because of me. Rey shook his head, I guess he knew that I was lying. His arms wrap around me in pretective manner, pulling in his arms. I too hug him back, I need this now, I silently weep in his arms. He caress my hair lovingly.

"Sh sh relax, Its okay" he whispered in my ear. My sobbs dcreased little.

"Its not, I am their daughter but why they don't treat me like one" I said in between my sobs, My family always put me down, They were never there when i needed them.

"Its their loss, you don't have to cry because of them, they don't deserve your tears." His soothing words were affective, I stop my sobbing still in his arms. we stayed there in same position for some time. Then we sat in the car but instead of going ofice rey took other route.

"Aren't we going office?" I asked him.

"Nope" Rey answered.

"Then where are we going?" I questioned him, Rey chuckle while I gave him glare.

"Woh toh surprise hai sweetheart" Rey said winking at me, I felt thousands of butterflies dancing in my stomach when he called me sweetheart. I so wanted to kiss him right now. I blush at my own naughty thoughts and look out of the window.

Precap : Romance in Rain

Edited by -SunShine - 11 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#725

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Hello!

I know I am not regular with updates from past two week, First my admission then some personal work and classes kept me busy. I am trying to update taking out some time from my busy Schedule, Please Bare with my slow updates till 10th august. After that I'll be regular.

And sorry for not commenting on your works, I am hell busy these days but I will comment after sometime for sure. Hope you all understand.

And Please Comment guys, Low response is kind of discouraging.

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Gunjan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

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unres

yayyy me first

update was awesome😃

loved taarey's talk in restaurant😊

hayee both of them loves each other so much

taani's dad and brother😡😡😡

how can they say anything to rey after what they did to taani😡😡

taani answering them was superb😊

loved the way rey consoled taani😊😊

rey's surprise...wowww😃

waiting to see what's in the surprise😊

Edited by shona25 - 11 years ago

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chandrima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#727

soo nice prt

spcally talkng about marriage things

lvd taani being free with rey

lvd da updat

thnks 4 pm

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.Shanaya.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#728

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Awesome update.

Taani and Rey having lunch together was so cute. 😳

What does Taani's dad and brother want now? 😡

I love how Rey was there for Taani.

Update soon.

I cant wait for the rain romance. 😊

Edited by Shan_aya - 11 years ago

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Divyana maheshwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#729

Awsme update.. Taarey part was awsme.. What taani's dad nd bro wants now.. Update soon..

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Mohini_Jugran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#730

Loved the update diii.!!!
poor Taani baby!!!
Happy dat Rey supported her...
Loved their little confession session!!!
so sweet!!!
Loved the whole update!!!
thanx for updating!!!
will be waiting eagerlyy!!!
update asap!!!
take ur tym!!!
love,
Mohini<3