Ragna(Ashna) FF:Richie Rich v/s Mother India 29b -Pg 162 15/9 - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Waiting for the next one pls update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ idonkno
facing problems to comment back on ur lovely comment on my cellphone.
My idiotic phone always does this when the comments are long.
Shall comment back after sometime when i get a chance to b onln from my pc😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunyy

Awesome update. Loving the slight chugs in rags behaviour. Pls continue soon

Thank u sunny😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Amazing update..
continue soon😊


ty shikha 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Nice update. Waiting for the next one pls update soon.


😊 Shall update very very soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amaznggg n Superbbb update dear..
Raghav's past s still a mystery n wen r u gonna reveal it dear..
I'm vryy to curious to know dat.. n precap so a suspense one n kalpi s gonna slap sumone..
Update d next part soon if u can..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vasishna

Amaznggg n Superbbb update dear..

Raghav's past s still a mystery n wen r u gonna reveal it dear..
I'm vryy to curious to know dat.. n precap so a suspense one n kalpi s gonna slap sumone..
Update d next part soon if u can..


😃 thank u
raghav's past ...very soon
shall definitely try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee


😃 thank u
raghav's past ...very soon
shall definitely try to update soon


Okay dear..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: idonkno

I loved it so much. Reason being it was so simple and realistic. I could feel the changes in Raghav and I hope Kalpi feels it too. As for Kalpi I liked the way you focused on her physical attributes and I could imagine Rachana all the way long.
Loved Raghav's possessiveness cum jealously 😆😉 And also the sweet side of him 😛 (akdoo toh I was always loved)

Sammy I have started to like more and more only in this FF as his dailogues are BANG ON😉😆

As always another brilliant update. However, I would suggest you to elevate the pace of this story a bit. Suddenly, the story seems to be going a little slow (maybe it is psychological for me based on the current state of events).

And regarding Roshish I could not help myself from thinking the only reason for hitting you on knowing his identity would be if he is Kalpi's cousin or maybe one of the kids who had spent his childhood in that same NGO and wanted to do some good for that NGO. Both of them met there and gelled beacuse of their love for that NGO and children. And hence the sole person who could console her if the problem is related to the NGO.

Pretty sure RS is not being slapped 😉😆Would have love the Majboor Singhania getting one on his face by Rachana though but Alas 😭

As always I love you 🤗


Thank u ... even i like the akdoo side of Raghav , but this sweet side is a part of his Mother India therapy !!
Sammy ... I have always loved him, too !!
With regards to the pace ... I am sorry but atleast for the next 3-4 updates it will be this only. But the story will definitely catch momentum when Kalpana starts falling for Raghav with more of K POV's that time. I'm damn sure u wouldn't have felt so if that drastic Rachana replacement news hadn't come our way !
As for Rohish , ull get to know his relation with Kalpi in the next update 😉
And 1ce again thank u for this lovely & sincere comment.
I'm growing fond of u day-by-day !!😃😃

MARUSHKAA
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm marushka.
I m viewing all dis rather dan only reading it. Awsm yar u potrayed each n evry thing superbly

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